Oh my god. I'm so anxious. This could either go either really well for the twins or really really badly...and I'm worried...

Author's Response: Don't be worried...yet... ;) Thanks for reading and more coming soon!

Oh.My.God. POST IMMEDIATELY OR IM GONNA SIT ON YOUR FACE WITH MY DOG!

Author's Response: Wow, I wouldn't want that! :P I'll have the next chapter up soon, then ;)

Can I just... Please... I'm done... So done.

This was an incredible Chapter, just perfect, right from start to finish. I didn't want to miss a single thing during this, because I honestly thought every paragraph I read was too important to skim or skip.

The build up to the kiss was so good, I loved every step you took us through. From the playful, right up to the sensual. The moment I began reading the kiss that didn't happen mid-way through this Chapter, I started to doubt Tom's ability to keep pushing Bill away, because he appeared weaker by the closeness he allowed himself to get when they almost kissed. Also, the lightness in the atmosphere, the beer, the connection I could feel between the twin's kinda showed Tom's weakening side too. Like he's pushed him away for too long and Bill's adamant that he isn't giving up until he gets what he wants.

Then BOOM: Bill, the sexy little fucker and his seductive ways, practically made Tom's mind up for him when he started dancing around him. I think when Bill mentioned that he wanted to suck Koji's dick, I think Tom felt protective and possessive, as if he doesn't want anyone to have Bill and I think that was put into consideration, either he has Bill or somebody else will and he won't be able to stop it.

What I did think was genius was the way the kiss happened at the end? The way Bill kept pushing and pushing, whilst Tom was wearing thinner and thinner. The way Tom was shoving him and said "You're a tempting... Teasing... Hot little bitch... And EVERYBODY wants to fuck you!" He admitted that he wants to fuck him too! I squealed, it was so fab. And then he called him a "filthy little slut" and kisses him!

Now - I'm curious though. I'm not sure what's gonna happen next? Like Tom could clearly fuck him or Tom could push him away? But depending on which way you take this next, what's gonna happen when they wake up? Is Tom really that drunk and could he regret it, even if it is just a kiss? And if they have fucked, is Koji just gonna let them free right away? SHIT. I don't even know.

Keep up the good work, I adore this as you've realised and I really cannot wait for the next Chapter, gonna refresh the shit out of this site for an update, soon I hope! Thanks, xxxxx

Author's Response: Whoa, awesome long review you gave there! Thank you, thank you! I love hearing what you enjoyed most about my chapter and that you've thought about every implication or possible outcome here. I've thought hard about it too. It can really go so many different ways but you'll find out soon when I post the next part! Again, thanks so much for reviewing in such detail :)

It's really nice of you to think about what we want to see and make everyone happy! I personally did enjoy the little koji/bill. Next chapter will be awesome!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Nooooo don't stop it there!!!

Author's Response: Sorry, but there'll be another chapter up soon!

noo noooo noo nono nooooooo nooooooooo
why why whyyyyyyyyyy
*sobs while drowning in a pool of twincest feels*

omfgggg hhahah let me hate you with all my love kmakdmcalkd
amazing fckin amazing chapter!!!
the ending part is just uhgggggggggg hothothot
finally Tom!!!!!! dear good lord xD!!
but all that words...poor Bill!! Tom deserves a punishment lol

feeling like if Koji was watching them and suddenly the power is gone and he can't see them kiss lolol
evil!!! evil!!! beautifully evil end HAHAHAHAHA >:D

Bill poledancing with Tom
fck!!! dear lord this is too much
I just lakmdkamd

EPIC!!!

thank you so much
literally dying for the next chapter
Everything hurtssss oh LORD xD


hope everything is going perfect for you and the baby
sending the best energy!!! :3

Author's Response: Hahaha, I'm so happy you enjoyed it! Oh gosh, if the power went out right at such a crucial moment Koji would freak out!! But it won't, and you'll get to see what happens next ;) Thank you - baby should be here in 3 weeks...not much time, eeep.

The kiss finaly happened. I can't wait to see what happens next. However I hate that Tom is an idiot when he's drunk. A super chapter, I'am already excited about the next chapter.

Author's Response: Yeah, Tom's a bit of an idiot but it's mostly just an act. Thank you for the review!

What a mess! Not your fic, of course XD, but the tangled feelings of all of them. The dream (brilliant!) reveals a lot. Tom's jealousy too.
Not for the first time I feel sorry for Koji; he's alone and I've imagined him enjoying the little funfair and laughing with his lost brother. But I'm also mad at him. What kind of plan is that to make the twins drunk? They could do something they'd regret and then become wary of each other to the point of no return.
Oh honey, you're a master of keeping us holding our breath!

Author's Response: Yes, tangled feelings all around! I do feel sorry for Koji too and all the things he misses out on. As for the twins, well, I guess they don't HAVE to get drunk at all. They could realise it's a trap and refuse to drink anything. Or they might do exactly what Koji wants them to. He's not forcing them to do anything. He is giving them a choice so it'll be interesting to see what the readers think of the boys' choices. Thanks for your review! I won't keep you holding your breath for too much longer... XD

I so love the psychological perfection of the characters.
Poor Bill, he's so real I could almost feel his despair but he's not the only one who broke down. Koji did it too even if he never cries; his being honest to himself tells it. Great chapter as usual

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you can finally read it and catch up :) And maybe Koji will cry one day, although he wouldn't let anyone see him do it...XD

Koji's dream was beyond hot...literally scorching. I'm glad it wasn't real, though, for Koji's sake as well as the twins. He'd find it hard to forgive himself if he took advantage of Bill, and he'd feel guilty as hell that he'd betrayed his dead brother. Plus, he wants Tom and Bill together and him fucking Bill would put another obstacle in the path of that. I loved Tom getting all jealous, but it was heartbreaking that he'd consider reciprocal suicide as an option rather than he and Bill having sex. Now I can't wait to find out what will happen. Will the twins get drunk and if they do will Tom be drunk enough to have sex with Bill. And if they do it while drunk will they remember doing it, and how will they both feel about it if they do remember? I guess I have to be patient and wait to have my questions answered. Love this story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely long review! I'm glad you understand where Koji is coming from and his reasons for doing (or not doing) said things. Ah yes, will they or won't they?You'll find out what happens next with Bill & Tom very soon! Thanks again :)