Date: 07/08/13 02:44 pm Title: Hangover
What a nice surprise, honey! Another chapter now. But... so saddening. I didn't expect them to be released but Tom is reacting like a d*** grrr After all, Koji is right; nobody could force someone to do or say anything, especially when they're not that drunk and they weren't, or else they woulnd't have remembered a thing.
I like the contrast between Bill's bold behavior and his shyness as much as I like Tom's sincere sweetness followed by stubborness and cruelty. Yes, I love psychology and this ff is psychology at its best.
My hope is that, once elaborated what happened, Tom doesn't start complying to Bill ways only to make him happy but without loving him like he deserves.
Should Tom act that way, I'd kidnap Bill, send him to Koji so they can live happily ever after LOL
Author's Response: Haha, let's hope Tom changes his mind or he really will drive Bill into Koji's arms!
Date: 07/08/13 12:51 pm Title: Hangover
Every time this story stops I get this weird, dreadful feeling in my stomach and I finally figured out what it means! Im so afraid that, after a few chapters, you stop writing this story and there will never be an official ending to this.. Omg I won't have the power to handle that! Please write thus beautiful story just like you do every time and continue to update such fantastic chapters because wauw, you write so amazingly! I can't wait for the moment that Tom finally realises that Bill is the only one for him. But he's so stubborn! Maann why can't he see he's hurting his own brother?! tgcdgngdhkcgkhdgjbsthbxhkkxfnkpp such an amazing story!
Author's Response: Thank you and I promise there WILL be an official ending to this fic. Promise, promise promise!! (in fact, it's already written in advance :P)
Date: 07/08/13 11:21 am Title: Hangover
Uh, yay? This is what I wanted, but it's still harsh for Tom to act this way. Poor Bill :(
Author's Response: Yeah, Tom's being mean. But he'll come around, don't worry!
Date: 07/08/13 10:45 am Title: Hangover
Hi sweets!
WOW, THIS WAS INCREDIBLE.
What I love about this story is that it's so unpredictable and I'm not sure if I've said that or if you get enough praise about that, so WELL DONE from me. Nobody knows what's gonna happen next, because there's too many possibilities, which is so smart and it keeps readers utterly hooked. I just love that about this story and the way you write it.
I found it unpredictable because in the previous Chapter; I had no idea how Tom would react in this newer one. I didn't know if he'd forget all about it because of his drunken state, or if he'd remember and be mad like he actually was, or if he'd remember and accept he's been in denial about his feeling for too long, y'know? But when I read this, I was like 'SHIT' because I was totally shocked. I honestly thought he'd remember and accept it, because of the way he reacted after the sexual scene, the pet-name calling and the singing and the sweetness all round, but Jesus! He's made a total one-eighty.
His coldness towards Koji is kind of understandable because I think he believes Koji has brainwashed him and his twin into the newer feelings they have for one another and he's going against him to rebel and prove to him that he's not like him and his twin brother. Also, I think he's doing it out of denial, like if he keeps pushing Bill away, pushing the problem away, it might go away altogether? I hope you understand that, haha?
Also, the way you've wrote this is so heartfelt. I honestly felt so sorry for Bill because he probably went to sleep the night before, believing he's broken down Tom's barriers and Tom gave in to his inner feelings at last. And I personally thought Tom was bang out of line saying to Koji he should 'drop down dead like his brother'. The way you wrote that actually made my stomach drop, my eyes widen and goosebumps take over the majority of my body.
I don't think I've ever commented on your skills at writing dialogue either, but everything was perfect. I adored the way Koji pushed for answers from Bill - reading it, it sounded premeditated, like he knew he'd have to push for an answer from Bill because Tom was there present, unlike the other times they've discussed how close they are to that ultimate goal. I loved the way he handled the heartless comment from Tom, he sounded so calm and collected about it and it came across as if he didn't want to journey into another conversation/argument other than the one about Bill and Tom's and the happenings of the night before. I loved the callous comments from Tom because I actually felt his pain and humiliation, I could see him reacting in this way and again, the realism is there and it's as strong as ever!
I ramble too much and surly you've realised this, but this Chapter as a whole was beyond perfect and above anything I actually expected. I'm really glad they're not leaving Koji's secret compound yet, because that means this story goes on a little bit longer. Utterly perfect, I cannot wait for the next Chapter! xxxxx
Author's Response: Phew, what a LONG review! So much flattery *blushes* Thank you very, very much. If I get emotion out of my readers then I know I'm doing a good job. I'm also glad this plot is unpredictable - that's my aim! Btw, I love your rambling; please don't stop! ^^
Date: 07/07/13 07:13 pm Title: Point of No Return
So, so perfect. I'd call this chapter the definition of perfect love. Full understanding, no need for too many words and the possibility to talk open-heartedly without being misunderstood.
I'm so happy Tom eventually gave in and accepted the truth he denied for so long. They both finally obtained what they wanted, that is love.
No more words to add; they could only disturb their sleep b29;
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much, my dear! I'm glad you liked this one and that the sense of emotion came through :) Right, now to get to work on the next chapter!
Date: 07/07/13 06:34 pm Title: Party Rockers
There would be so many things to say here! Delightful chapter, yes! It's difficult for me to put feelings into words but I experienced so many emotions. Such accurate descriptions of them made me feeling like I was watching videos, especially as far as their laughters are concerned :) By playing like two kittens the twins finally connected again in their own world after the risk they run of drifting apart forever.
They are themselves, free to laugh, tease and mock each other as if they were kids again. But then Bill-the-Devil pops up *big cheers*. While Tom is genuine (naive, I'd say) Bill proves to be the strongest one. Drunk or not, he never misses an opportunity when he sees one and Tom cannot escape his logic and seductiveness. Tom calling his brother names could sound like the lame old saying "Bill is a whore" but the pathos you gave to the situation makes it totally different. In those names there are Tom's frustration (he cannot dismiss his feelings anymore) and a way to justify himself for making his longing come true. I just hope he won't regret anything later...
Author's Response: It was a really enjoyable chapter to write, after all the frustration, sadness and angst of the previous ones. I'd love to watch the boys get drunk and have fun like this! No, Bill never misses an opportunity, that's for sure XD And what else can Tom do but finally give in?
Date: 07/04/13 06:00 pm Title: Point of No Return
AAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! Sooooo....I am really happy about this, but I can't pretend I don't want more resistance or...idk, drama. It's just that I never want this story to end, but I realize that you're doing a really amazing thing by trying your best to actually finish this before your axis completely shifts and your whole world becomes soft little cheeks and tiny sticky hands :3 Either way, you really made us work for it to get to this turning point, alone. Now I just wonder how it's going to be when they're sober, and how they will be "released" back into the wild and how they will fare. I hope they're at least able to still be famous, etc. It makes me sad and disbelieving when stories have the twins disappear for several months/a year and everyone has forgotten about them. I think we are at this very moment defying that logic, are we not? ;)
Author's Response: Yes, I know it's taken a while to get to this chapter and I thank you for sticking with me this far. But don't worry, I've still got a few more chapters to go and more drama on the way! All your questions will be answered :)
Date: 07/04/13 02:59 pm Title: Point of No Return
AWWWWWWWWW!! That was so cute! Thank you, now maybe finally Cujo (xD) will let them out.
Author's Response: Or maybe not, since they didn't have full sex... ;)
Date: 07/04/13 12:22 pm Title: Point of No Return
Oh dear, I
ve been waiting for this chapter ever since I started reading your story... AND it was so much better than I could have ever imagined! I don't think you understand what a talented writer you are!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! It's very nice of you to say :)
Date: 07/04/13 07:40 am Title: Point of No Return
Huh.
It's been quite the build up, hasn't it? I've been waiting for Tom to comply since forever, but waiting until Chapter 20/21 has definitely been worth it.
I adore how you didn't jump into it within the first few Chapters, like some other authors do. You actually made us wait and want it more. Twincest will always be hard to master, because I believe a sense of realism is essential with them being related and trying to hold back from giving into the urge - no matter how strong it is, etc. And with this, I can sense so much realism reading back on it from start to now, because you didn't jump in feet first. You dragged out Tom's inner conflict through each and every Chapter, that's something I'd find believable. I also find it quite breathtaking how their relationship has panned out over the Chapters; from arguing, to comfort, to fluff, to suggestiveness, to seduction, to giving in to temptation.
That did not make much sense and I apologize, it's hard to describe what my exact point is. Anyway, it really is beautiful reading back on it all up until this point.
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SO in this Chapter, your writing was beautiful, just as always and I fucking adore the depth of description and detail you went into, so the reader knew exactly what's going on in the scene. To me, that's essential or I lose interest all too fast, like I need to be able to visualize it in my mind as I read it, so I can actually feel the text I'm reading? Yes, so: great job on that.
I also found Tom's realisation beautifully written, from where he pulled away from the kiss and had a mini-breakdown about what had just happened, because that's something I could see happening in real life between the twin's, you know?
I adored the way Bill talked to Tom, letting him into his mind and heart about how he felt all along about Tom, because that was cute and I was literally swooning all over the place, God bless that cutie! It was just gorgeously written.
The sexual stuffs was written to perfection. Bill giving Tom a blowjob, Jesus Christ, I flailed too hard. The depth you took us into with that was just impeccable for smutty scene. I thoroughly enjoyed it, so thanks.
CAN I JUST SAY, when Tom called Bill 'baby' and started singing to him, I really shed at tear. It was so beautiful to read, especially after what they had just done together. I wasn't so certain on how Tom would act once they were both sated and satisfied, but you amazed me with that mass amount of cuteness!
I loved it. I cannot wait for the next Chapter to see if Koji lets them free for exploring the true depth of their relationship or keeps them there longer until he's truly satisfied with the results, (Secretly hoping a little longer;) YOU'RE AMAZING! xxxxx
Author's Response: Whoa, this has to be one of the longest, most in-depth reviews I've ever gotten for a story!! Thank you so much - I really appreciate the time you took to tell me your thoughts. I'm so happy that the realism I was trying to portray came through in my writing, and that you thought it was worth the wait to get to the actual twincest part. Gosh, I actually got a tear out of you? Wow. I'm truly flattered by your awesome praise. Thank you again and don't worry, there is still more to come!
Date: 07/04/13 12:19 am Title: Taken
OMG! FINALLY!! THANK YOU SO MUCH
Author's Response: You're welcome! Thanks for reading my story :)
Date: 07/03/13 03:34 am Title: Point of No Return
It's about damn time Tom ;-/
Author's Response: Yeah, I reckon so too!
Date: 07/03/13 01:37 am Title: Point of No Return
Awww x3... I so loved Bills "speech" at the beginning of the chapter, it was really sweet in a sad way. The stuff they did was real hot and I liked how they tried to overcome their insecurities about Koji (in Toms case) and Toms exgirlfriends (in Bills case). Glad they could finally find such contentness with each other. I also like the short song at the end ^^
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you liked it all!
Date: 07/02/13 11:17 pm Title: Point of No Return
Hooooot
All I have to say, you didn't disappoint me with this chapter ;)
Author's Response: Phew, I'm glad about that! Never want to disappoint my readers :)
Date: 07/02/13 10:09 pm Title: Point of No Return
Awwwwwsss its finally happened!!!!!!! Hay!!!
Author's Response: Yes, it did! And there's more to come...
Date: 07/02/13 02:16 pm Title: Point of No Return
Oh. My. God. What the fuck did just happen? Bill and tom almost had sex oooooohmygosh finally! And you updated so fast! This was so good! I cant wait for the reaction from koji! Pleaseeeeeeeeee update soonnn
Author's Response: You'll see how Koji reacts in the next chapter, which won't be far away! Thank you for commenting :)
Date: 06/26/13 06:19 am Title: Party Rockers
Please please don't have Bill with anybody but Tom!
Author's Response: Don't worry, Bill won't lose his virginity to Koji! I can promise you that :)
Date: 06/24/13 01:07 pm Title: Party Rockers
kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!! >.< MORE MORE MORE!!!! I loved it plzzzz update soon :'D
Author's Response: Thanks! I will!
Date: 06/24/13 10:25 am Title: Do or Die
There are no words to adequately describe how amazing you are at writing smut, my salivating glands and glazed over eyes would have probably conveyed my feelings if a video review had been available while I was reading the Bill/Koji interaction, but then, it was a dream.... fortunately my laptop could not feel the heat from the intense glare I sent its way or it surely would have been engulfed in scorching flames until finally exploding from within in a sad fusion of melted dreams and frustrated tears... woe is me (insert blubbering slightly neurotic emoticon here). Sorry, I couldn't help myself, lol, melodrama is currently channeling the voices in my head. Now onto the next chapter :D
Author's Response: Sorry for the dream! I wanted to make that scene a real one but feared quite the backlash from my readers who believe (the majority, anyway) that any sexual contact should be kept between the twins, since this is a twincest story. Some of them really hate Koji! Thank you for saying that I'm good at writing smut, even if it's not real :)
Date: 06/24/13 06:05 am Title: Party Rockers
Aw, thank you so much for the update! I think I checked your story once a day or so for updates and seeing there's a new chapter made me real happy ^^.
I was so happy the two boys had finally such a fun time which they deserved after all they've been through, it was really fun to read.
My thoughts at the end were along the lines of "Oh, dear ^^..." and "finally ^o^"!
I have to admind I was very sceptic about the whole alcohol issue but I agree that u build up the whole final scene just fantastically ^^
Author's Response: I'm glad you got the sense of fun I was trying to portray here. Koji just put the alcohol there - he's not forcing the boys to drink it! Whatever happens next is on them. More coming soon :)