Date: 08/12/13 04:16 pm Title: Patience
Hi sweets. I had a feeling you had gone into labour when you didn't update in a little while and I'm pleasantly surprised you're updating again so soon, so lots of love for gaining fast motivation and continuing to write this. Congratulations on the birth of little, baby Violette and I'm so glad that she had a safe and healthy arrival into this world. I wish you all the happiness and luck in the world for you and your little girl. *Big hugs*
Okay, I'll commence with the story.
The first section: Bill and Koji's scene together was written to utter perfection. I loved how Koji gave Bill that little push of faith. It really did seem like he needed it after all the rejection he's put up with, I got the impression Bill was wearing thin and ready to give up on that kind of love with Tom. One line that stuck out and I found literally inspiring was what Koji said to Bill, "Just allow him time. Be patient. Be there for him. When Tom’s ready, he’ll come to you.” It sounded so beautiful and after Koji told him another story, it was something of a perfect end note, y'know? OH, Bill doesn't wanna be released yet, omfg. I squeaked so much. That's exciting shit!
The second section: the argument was something they both needed to have out, I think. I sense that Bill has no closure on what had happened that drunken night since he's constantly ignored and when they finally got talking (or arguing) they were finally getting to the bottom of it, at last. I think it was a healthy decision on Bill's part. He needed to say so many things and needed to be actually heard for once. It was a really heartfelt scene, I believe. I always feel like I learn something new about these characters as the story progresses and OH MY GOD, when Bill said he would actually rape Tom if he had the chance, I laughed and it's not even a laughing matter either and I felt slightly guilty. He came off as seductive and suggestive again, which was good to see (or read) because I just wanted to see Tom's reaction in return, because we've not seen that side of Bill since before that one drunken night.
The third section: I loved how Tom came to Bill and admitted he was wrong, that he did enjoy it and mostly, that he came off as insecure. I think even though Tom tries to pretend he doesn't feel the same way, he'd actually be the person Bill wants him to be, as long as he doesn't lose Bill as a person. as a whole. We always think that Bill is the twin that depends on Tom most, but throughout the duration of this, I get the feeling it's actually Tom. It's such a beautiful change, I think. And they cuddled it out, that was fucking adorable. Again, I admire the pace you've set. You're not making Tom jump in dead first and kiss Bill or something at the end of this Chapter, like many other authors would of, which can be a little 'Nghh, no. Not yet, please.' Because in certain circumstances, (including this one) it makes the story as a whole too unrealistic for my liking. It's obvious Tom's having a hard time and he needs to find the strength before he even tries anything again and that, of course, takes time.
So well done, I loved this, I'm happy to see you back, I can't wait for another update and again, CONGRATS, Best wishes! xxxxx
Author's Response: Thanks so much! It's hard finding the time to update but luckily I had already written most of the next few chapters so it's not as much work for me to do this while looking after a baby (who is growing ridiculously fast). As for my story - that's what Koji's main role is, to give the little pushes that both the boys need to progress. Seductive Bill is always a little bit shocking, isn't he? But always entertaining! And yeah, Tom is totally the insecure one in this, just for a change. I'm glad I can surprise you with stuff the characters say and do. I'd hate to be predictable! And I'm happy that I'm pacing it right. Some may think the story is unfolding too slow but rushing things would spoil the feel of it. You always give me such long and thorough reviews and I really appreciate it - thank you!
Date: 08/12/13 03:19 pm Title: Patience
congratulation on your baby girl
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 08/12/13 02:55 pm Title: Patience
Congratulation!!! Enjoy your time with your new baby :) I kinda already guessed that you were not updating because you gave birth (hope it wasn't too painful.)
Looks like Tom is progressing but you never know what is going to happen with him. Let's hope you will be able too uptade soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! Actually, the birth was not as bad as everyone said :) Since the baby is asleep, I will be updating again today so please check out the new chapter!
Date: 08/12/13 02:32 pm Title: Patience
Awwwwwwwww this update ends so cute tom got mean but I love how it ended just like koji said it would with tom coming back and apologizing to bill nd congrats on your babyy~~~ throws confeti
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 07/21/13 06:55 pm Title: Hangover
I've missed this fic! So glad I found it again.
I love the characters, they've developed so well, and the story's so well-written that I've hung on to every line. Hell, I can't even make a constructive criticism.
Keep up the great work. Hope all is well with the baby.
If you have a mailing list, can you keep me updated with new chapters at afireinside37@hotmail.com
Thanks
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad you like it and I have just posted a new chapter for your enjoyment :)
Date: 07/10/13 11:42 pm Title: Hangover
Oh my god i absolutely LOVE this story!! You are a fantastic writer, really. I have so many mixed emotions right now about the whole situation. I have soo many questions that i want answered but i guess i will have to wait x)
Earlier in the story it said something about a "door number 5" I think, was that the fun room?
Ahh please update soon, im going to be thinking about this story all the time haha!
Author's Response: Yes, that was the fun room! Thank you for reading :)
Date: 07/10/13 09:08 am Title: Hangover
i would love to see more koji/bill action from hereon. pretty please? :3
Author's Response: I'll see what I can do! Out of curiosity, how do you feel about Koji/Tom?
Date: 07/09/13 08:47 pm Title: Hangover
Im loving this soo much
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 07/09/13 05:44 am Title: Hangover
Wonderful, wonderful chapter. This was very realistic too. If they woke up fine with everything and got to go home happily ever after, it wouldn't feel right. Thank you for continuing this story!
Hope you and baby girl are doing well. =)
Author's Response: I'd like to personally thank you for the mass of reviews, even though I can't answer all of them. So happy you like the story!
Date: 07/09/13 05:36 am Title: Point of No Return
Fabulous!! Their emotions are so raw and honest, I love it. Super hot of course too.
Author's Response: Hey, I have a sequel to Captivation up now if you were interested! It's added onto the bottom of Captivation and there are 2 chapters, called Seven Years Later, part 1 & 2. Just in case you wanted to know how things turned out for the twins and for Koji :)
Date: 07/09/13 05:27 am Title: Party Rockers
Ahhhhaaaaa!!!
Loved all the cute teenage/kid stuff they were doing. And now its super hot and I must end my review so I can read on and see what happens!!!
Date: 07/09/13 05:18 am Title: Do or Die
Loved the dream sequence. It was a perfect compromise. I also loved that Koji wants the boys to get drunk. I'm kind of surprised it took him so long to think of it.
Date: 07/09/13 05:06 am Title: Twin Pleasure
Bill is doing a very good job at seducing Tom. I like how he is very honest about what he is doing and what he wants though.
Date: 07/09/13 05:01 am Title: Acceptance
They are so cute, even mad and disgruntled they are sweet with each other.
Date: 07/09/13 04:56 am Title: Awakened Desire
Hot!!!!!
Date: 07/09/13 04:51 am Title: Koji's Teenage Tale
I am so excited that I have so many chapters to catch up on! This was lovely, though I think I am feeling jealous for Tom, since he doesn't even know what happened in the room.
Date: 07/09/13 03:32 am Title: Hangover
Hihi, your chapter end note made me laugh xD. I also laughed as Koji inquired wether there was perhaps a little drunken twincest? sneaky guy ^^. When Tom started to cry I actually had to stop reading for a moment cause I felt bad for him. I felt bad for Bill, too. I love drama a lot but still can't help to hope the'll find a way to make things right between them ^^
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 07/08/13 10:34 pm Title: Hangover
Awwwww bill nd I kind of want to see koji. Loose control *A*
Author's Response: Maybe you will see that soon!
Date: 07/08/13 10:21 pm Title: Hangover
I can hear your evil laugh >:D AHAHAHAH
you meanie *gross sobbing* hugs a blanked :'O
Tom you difficult brat i would like to find him and give him some slaps :'D!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHH neinneinnein
Bill crying and Tom ignoring him made my heart hurt
and Tom crying and trying to repress his feelings in the meeting was also sad!!! so sad omg
Amazing chapter sad and *everything hurts* but amazing!! thank you so much!! i will keep hugging my blanked after this ohgosh!!!!!!
hope everything is going perfect for you and your baby omg sending blessings and the best energy!! :3!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!
Date: 07/08/13 10:04 pm Title: Point of No Return
OMFGGGGGG finally i cant even alkmdalska so beautiful and sad AND HOT *my feelings*
Bill speech is so heartbreaking!!!and Tom crying!!!!!! and then realizing what he has and what he is missing having it, in front of him!!
poor Koji getting the shivers watching this two sex Gott s LISTENING TO TOM OH DEAR LORD hahahaand the frustration!!!!!!! hahaha x'D
And at the end oh My!! this part killed me
" “My first friend. My first love. My first everything.”"
fckin Hot beautiful amazing chapter!!! thank you so much!!!!!! now i run to read the next one!!! ladmalks
Author's Response: Aw, thank you very much for your lovely words! I'm really happy you enjoyed it so much :) Yeah, Koji is a lucky man indeed to have witnessed such hotness ;) Can't wait to see what you think of the next chapter.