Date: 01/02/14 10:39 pm Title: Battle Scars
Oh, take your time with the baby. She needs it more than we do. But thank you so so so much for posting, this was a good one. Good to know they can get out.
Author's Response: Thank you - I'm glad you're still reading it!
Date: 10/20/13 07:07 pm Title: Taken
I just had to post this, yesterday i saw a guy at the grocery store that looked like Koji (well what he looks like in my mind) And I could NOT stop staring at him xD He probably thought i was so weird.
Author's Response: Hahaha, that is so cool!! Sounds hot. I'd have stared at him as well ;)
Date: 10/12/13 01:45 pm Title: Bloodlust
Shoot, I thought I left a comment and I didn't :( I'm impressed to no end by the psychological content of this chapter :)) It's not about sex but about power and control. I see the sex Koji lusted for as an unconscious way to subjugate Tom for good. Apparently it's Koji who's almost been raped; actually it's the other way round, in my opinion. Letting Tom beat him senseless would have never called it even while the rest has given Koji total control, and not only because he's the one who has the power not to let the twin escape. But, unfortunately for Koji, I feel there's more to it and so I wait for the next chapter to read b29;
Author's Response: Hey, thank you for your review! You're right, it was all about power and after that things will have definitely changed between Tom & Koj - whether good or bad, we'll soon find out!
Date: 10/08/13 12:19 pm Title: Bloodlust
OH MY GOD, WHAT THE FUCK DID I JUST READ?!!? O: O: SHIT.
Hi Rina, sorry I'm late. I was in Tunisia when you updated this part and I only found out half an hour ago :| I don't know whether to be unimpressed or happy about that, but anyway...
Firstly, I laughed. I really did laugh when Tom was dishing all the reasons why he hated Koji. I know it wasn't meant to be funny, but I thought it was. It seemed like such an immature thing when he actually listed it out the way he did, yet I know how deadly serious Tom actually is. He really does hate Koji and you can tell he needed to release that. It's been bubbling up for so long and it was well needed, I believe. (I'm not sure if fucking Koji was the way to go, but hey; he got some type of release, right?)
OMG. I couldn't even breathe. Never in a million years did I expect Tom to fuck Koji. When I saw 'WARNING: extremely rough sex' I thought Tom gave in to Bill eventually and was furious at himself for actually giving in, so that was the reason for the rough sex. But FUCK, HOW WRONG WAS I.
It was so unexpected and it surprised me to a new extent. It seemed so wrong reading it for me and I don't know why. I felt a little unnerved by what Tom had done, but I think that's because it was totally unexpected and it caught me off guard in such an intense way. When I was reading it, my mouth dropped open and I didn't breathe for a few minutes. I, then, had to read back through it to make sure I wasn't tripping. Jesus, you're such an amazing writer. You described the scene so well and I could feel every raw emotion you put into this. It was so rough and violent, and like I said before; Tom needed some sort of release, whether that was sexual release or an anger release, but damn. Wow, he sure got it.
Now I really want Koji to tell Bill, right in front of Tom's face too, but I'm just a drama queen. I strive for drama. I don't actually know what you've got up your sleeve for the next Chapter, (like I ever did anyway) because I just can't picture anything passed this scene you've set right now.
Wow, amazing as always. Well done and I hope to see an update soon! :-) xxxxx
Author's Response: Wow, Tunisia! Hope you had a great time there. Thank you so much for your review - I loved reading about your reactions! I wanted to shock people (because I like drama too) so that's why I didn't list the pairing as Tom/Koji. Baby is keeping me very busy lately but I'm working on the next part so hopefully you'll find out what happens next soon :)
Date: 09/17/13 12:20 pm Title: Bloodlust
MUST read more :-D
Author's Response: There WILL be more!
Date: 09/11/13 11:35 pm Title: Bloodlust
Love this psychological-warfare drama! I'm so happy you've been able to add a couple chapters after having your little girl, I know it can't be easy to scratch out any time for your fans, so Thank you!
Author's Response: Yeah, it's tough finding the time to update but I'm managing. Thanks for commenting!
Date: 09/11/13 03:18 am Title: Bloodlust
Wow. So that was super intense and surprising. Bill is not going to be pleased when he hears what happened, which he eventually will. As awful and violent and brutal as that was, it probably was very cathartic for Tom. Great great update, thanks so much!!
Author's Response: Yeah, Bill will certainly be shocked. But will Tom even tell him about it?? Thanks for your review!
Date: 09/09/13 09:14 pm Title: Bloodlust
Oh god i did NOT expect that at all!!!! :O Great chapter! I wonder if Bill would be pissed if he found out what Tom and Koji did.. i think he would. I cannot wait the next chapter!!! :) xoxo
Author's Response: Hmmm, Bill might be pissed. Or he might not. You'll have to find out! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 09/09/13 05:12 pm Title: Bloodlust
I like Koji, I feel so sad for him :(
Author's Response: Yeah, me too. It's nice to know somebody else likes him!
Date: 09/09/13 02:05 pm Title: Bloodlust
You deserve a platinum plot-twist award damn O.O
Author's Response: *accepts award with surprise and pleasure* Thank you so much!!
Date: 09/09/13 06:18 am Title: Bloodlust
That was the best piece of violet, angry, fucked up sex i have EVER read. Ur a genious.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! SO happy you liked it. I was starting to think nobody else liked this scene except me... ;)
Date: 09/08/13 06:56 pm Title: Bloodlust
PLEASE LET KOJI DIE!!!! I hate HIMM! This was a really shocking story though. I hope Bill finds out what Tom did so he'll snap out of whatever twincest-y mindset he's in and they get out of there. :)
Author's Response: I understand why you hate him but if Koji dies then the boys will be stuck down there forever with no way out! Don't worry, they'll get out of there eventually :)
Date: 09/08/13 03:31 pm Title: Bloodlust
Aww, thank you for the update!!!
I have to admit when you mentioned the rough sex scene in your chapter notes this was actually the last pairing I saw coming ^^
So full of hotness and emotion I'm still speechless. Well done!
Best wishes to you and your small family ^^Vv
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I don't think anyone saw this coming. Glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 09/08/13 01:42 pm Title: Bloodlust
Well. That escalated quickly, lol. Did shock me, but I think this experience might finally have been jarring enough to snap Tom out of his automatic rejections. Woo, never saw that coming!! Thanks for the update, and say hi to Violette for me :)
Author's Response: It certainly jarred Tom, that's for sure! Thank you for reading :)
Date: 09/08/13 12:33 pm Title: Bloodlust
Woah o.O
Did not see that coming! Awesome chapter by the way!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 08/26/13 01:31 pm Title: Patience
Thank you for updating. Such a well done chapter and I absolutely loved Bill's descriptive narration of what he would have done to Tom... 'ridden you like a rocking horse' was my favorite line yet. I must say though, that Koji is killing me. I realize that I'm reading this story for the Bill/Tom pairing, which I love, but my mind keeps screaming to give Tom back to the fan girls and let Koji have Bill.... but alas, I understand why that won't be happening. I look forward to the next update whenever you can find the time with the new little miracle in your life:)
Author's Response: Another Koji/Bill fan! Yay! ^^ Totally, if Tom never accepts Bill as a lover, Bill can go to Koji instead. That's one of the possible endings to this fic...But keep reading to find out what really happens :)
Date: 08/21/13 11:59 am Title: Patience
Rina,I didn't hope to find a new chapter - I know well how busy you are - but here it is and it's awesome. I love how Koji has changed - btw, him wearing his brother's shirt was hearbreaking - and how he can be supportive to Bill. I suspect that, since it's a new territory, Tom doesn't imagine how Bill can be stubborn also in something that doesn't belong to their work hehehe
I liked how Bill can muster his own despair and turn it into fuel for his determination. Imo, this is the real Bill; a quivering jelly would have never had the guts to hold shows in front of huge crowds.
Much love to you and to adorable Violette b29;
Author's Response: Thank you so much, dear! Glad you're still liking the story. I'm updating today too so keep any eye out for it!
Date: 08/18/13 08:11 am Title: Patience
Really happy to hear you had a gorgeous little girl and her name is so pretty. Happy for an update too, though where you found the time to write so soon after having a baby I just don't know! LOL! Anyway, first off...I love Negative, have most of their albums and Gravity of Love is an amazing song. I can just see Koji listening to it, and it playing in the background while he and Bill chat. My heart was breaking for Koji missing his twin so badly. It must make him furious and extremely sad to see Tom rejecting Bill and what they could share when he would give anything to have his other half back. Oh, God, I do hope Tom never finds out that they could have been released and Bill actually asked Koji not to let them go. No matter how close they end up, I don't think Tom will be impressed with his twin over that. But I am so glad Bill had the talk and that he then stands up for what he wants with Tom. After all by rejecting the intimacy Tom's been calling all the shots up to now, so its good to see Bill not allowing him to just get away with it. I'm not saying its right for Bill to blackmail or coherce Tom into a sexual relationship, but by refusing to even consider it and rejecting what happened between them the night before, Tom is basically making the decision for both of them, regardless of Bill's feelings. I do love Tom's insecurity at the end, he sounds absolutely terrified that he will lose Bill completely. That is probably what he needs to realise just how much his brother means to him. I'm still worried though, that if they do end up having the kind of relationship Koji and his twin had whilst they're incarcerated, that Tom's doubts will return once they've been released and they have to face maintaining the secrecy in the outside world. Anyway, another amazing chapter, and here's hoping you can still make time to write some more even with your new role as a mother. Love and hugs to you and Violette.
Author's Response: Thank you, heleng! I'll let you in on a little secret - I had prepared chapters in advance because I knew time would be short looking after a new baby! ;) You're right - Tom would be pissed if he knew Bill said no to being released. There are so many possibilities in regards to this plot and how things could go with all the characters. Should Bill & Tom be together? Or not? Should Bill end up with Koji? Or not? Should Koji let them go? Or not? There are so many possible endings but I've pretty much already decided how it's gonna end and hopefully most people will be happy with it. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far and I hope you keep liking it as it goes on! PS. Thanks also for recommending your friend to read this :)
Date: 08/13/13 12:03 am Title: Patience
THANK YOU SOO SOO SOO MUCH FOR POSTING!!! Im so happy for you and your little girl. I hope she grows up to be a fantastic writer like you.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you too! ^^
Date: 08/12/13 09:44 pm Title: Patience
Yay, some progress! And CONGRATULATIONS! Thank you so much for still caring enough to update
Author's Response: Thank you! Of course I care about you guys and this story! It won't be abandoned, I swear :)