Date: 03/05/14 09:30 pm Title: Opportunity
I love a happy ending...or happy endings (teehee). I think Tom needs to gain some experience with Koji before he and Bill can be together. Also, he has some shit to work through concerning his close mindedness about man-on-man lovin'. And then maybe Bill should seduce Koji as a going-away gift...? Maybe Tom could watch?
Author's Response: Fabulous ideas, particularly Tom getting more experience with Koji before using his new knowledge on Bill! I might be able to work that in somehow and the going away gift sounds yummy. Oooh, too many choices! *can't decide*
Date: 03/05/14 05:47 pm Title: Opportunity
Hey! Awesome chapter:) I'm so glad you updated! I like the Bill and Koji thing going on and I also like Bill and Tom together, I can't decide >_< but anyways keep up the amazing work and I look foward to reading the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I know what you mean about not being able to decide; I'm writing the damn thing and even *I* have trouble working out who to put together LOL
Date: 03/04/14 10:48 pm Title: Opportunity
Your story is great!? I would prefer you a pair bill/koji and more drama and figth before.... :-) all is great anyway :-)
Author's Response: Another Bill/Koji fan, yay! :D Anyway, more drama is totally coming your way. Thanks for commenting!
Date: 03/04/14 06:53 pm Title: Opportunity
Twincest all the way I would be pist if Bill or Tom fall in love with Koji ............ but perhaps more drama and fighting ...........What if Koji talks to Tom alone again but this time he forgets to lock the door and Bill gets out only to find Koji and Tom fucking .....Bill feels betrayed by both Tom and Koji and just gives up on the whole thing and both Tom and Koji try to make it up to Bill .........but he will have none of it and that's how Tom finds out of Bill's lie and Bill finds out what's going on with Koji ............ and Koji feels like shit about the whole thing and tries to keep them in longer only to see Bill heartbroken and falling apart slowly he's bot the same and he won't talk to Tom and especially not him ...........in a desperate attempt to amend things Koji let's Tom free but only to keep Bill and take him someplace else so they could talk Tom's confused angry and scared of what's going on when he wakes up in the middle of gas station so he could call for help .......and just take from there
Author's Response: Wow, you have some cool ideas! I might have to steal some of those ;) Thank you so much for the thought-provoking suggestions.
Date: 03/04/14 03:10 pm Title: Opportunity
I do love hearing more about Koji's past and his relationship with his twin, and Tom's reason for not trying to escape was so touching. I definitely want twincest before they are free, but would love some more drama, perhaps them fighting if the secrets come out and then some make up sex. Or maybe Tom staking a claim on his twin sexually if Bill and Koji get way too friendly. However you write it...twincest please.
Author's Response: I like how you think, woman! ;) Your ideas are along the lines of what I was plotting so I'm happy we share the same thoughts! Thank you for reviewing :)
Date: 03/04/14 12:52 pm Title: Opportunity
Bill/Koji all the way! Love that couple
I'm not sure about the drama, maybe a bit :3
You decide, I trust you :P
Author's Response: I love that couple too! ^^ But there's always gonna be drama before the happy ending. However, nobody will die or anything so don't worry about that! Thanks for the input :)
Date: 03/04/14 12:22 pm Title: Opportunity
If you are going to pair anyone up with koji it has to be BOTH twins a lil threesome never hurt nobody ;))
Author's Response: A threesome would be awesome. However, I'm not sure Tom is quite ready for that yet. Or if he ever will be! Koji can try, though LOL
Date: 03/04/14 10:39 am Title: Opportunity
Love this story! But would like to see Tom and Bill be let free soon, without twincest. If Koji gets paired up with either Tom or Bill I think I personally would not enjoy this story as much anymore. But that's just me. Otherwise the story is awsome!
Author's Response: You don't like twincest? That's unusual that you'd read this story since I mentioned it from the very beginning. I'm glad you like it so far, though. I was always going to have twincest in this fic (and too many fans would be disappointed if I didn't) so if it happens, I hope you can see past it, or if Koji is paired with anybody too. Thanks for your feedback!
Date: 03/04/14 09:57 am Title: Opportunity
I think it would be fun if Koji and Bill kept flirting, making Tom so jealous that he realizes his feelings for Bill :) Great chapter btw!
Author's Response: Thank you! I do enjoy the Koji/Bill flirting so you'll totally see more of that ;)
Date: 03/04/14 09:45 am Title: Opportunity
Oh, definitely still twincest! Not Tom and Koji please, meh. I have been hoping (expectig) Bill and Tom to have sex from the beginning. I guess that's just Koji getting exactly what he intended, but idk. Bill andd Koji, maybe. Or maybe Bill can find out about Tom and try to have sex with Koji, too, but Bill and Tom get together in the end?
Author's Response: Yeah, I always intended this to be a twincest story but I also wanted to throw another person into the mix to shake things up a bit. Thank you for your thoughts - I'll be keeping them in mind!
Date: 02/28/14 05:21 pm Title: And That’s How I Became a Kidnapper
a faithful fan, after all this time :)) love it
Author's Response: Thank you, my dear! I'm so glad you're still around!
Date: 02/14/14 02:17 pm Title: And That’s How I Became a Kidnapper
What a treat! I've always liked Koji (well. you know it XD) and I've been delighted by his story. Your ability in fitting every tiny piece together to make such a complex character plausible is beyond amazing, Rina. Btw, I'd love them living happily together ever after but I guess it's only wishful thinking.... *makes puppy eyes*
Author's Response: Thank you so much, My Immortal! You've always been a big supporter of this story and of Koji and I really appreciate it. I hope I can bring a smile to your face with each chapter or make you forget your troubles, at least for a little while. And somebody will definitely get their happy ever after, but I can't say who yet :)
Date: 01/28/14 12:27 pm Title: And That’s How I Became a Kidnapper
I don't know how anyone can read this story and NOT like Koji. He's the main character! I enjoyed this chapter, finding out more about him. He's really crushing on these pets, isn't he? It seems to me that he's extremely selfish, doing what he wants, and if he develops attraction to his pets, he changes his oh-so-important plans and works on getting what he wants. But he's so terribly NICE about it. Understanding, sympathetic, intelligent, kind and caring....Yet for as much as he is all those things, his driving force is all about HIM and his selfish desires. I love that juxtaposition. I like sympathetic bad guys and imperfect good guys - depth and conflict are what makes a story more realistic and interesting. Just like this one!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks so much for the detailed review! I love to hear what people think of Koji and everything you've said about him is so true. He thinks he's doing the right thing but going about it in a bad way. Maybe he will start to think differently when he realises what he's doing and how crushing on the boys was not part of his master plan!
Date: 01/27/14 06:36 pm Title: And That’s How I Became a Kidnapper
Thanks for the LONG chapter :D I liked it, probably because I like koji and was so curious to know more about his past.
Can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love hearing from fans of Koji :)
Date: 01/18/14 02:16 am Title: Battle Scars
What a cryptic conversation Koji had with Tom hehe Again, Koji is a psychology master; he allowed Tom to vent his rage but he also taught him a lesson and that is that he can have sex with men, no matter what the boy thinks. But I bet Tom hasn't realized it yet.... Thanks for another great chapter, Rina, and I appreciated you found time to write it (quick, quick; your sweetie is growing at an amazing speed and she'll soon be able to read! LOL )
Author's Response: Haha, I know, she'll be in school before long! :P Yeah, Tom hasn't figured that out yet but he will! Thanks so much for reading & commenting.
Date: 01/11/14 03:43 pm Title: Battle Scars
Awwwwww, I was happy you updated cause I kept checking your story and trused you would come back to it ;)
Of cause your sweet angel now is the focus of all your attention so take as much time as you need to go on with Captivation just know you have faithful readers who are always happy to read from you!
Author's Response: Thank you - I'm happy to know there are readers who will wait for this story, no matter how long it takes!
Date: 01/11/14 01:14 am Title: Battle Scars
Yaaay! I'm so thrilled you've managed to carve out a little time for your fans! Your priorities have understandably shifted, and I know life has gotten a lot fuller, so THANK YOU for managing to find the time for us! I'm loving this story, your writing is fabulous, the characters are well-written and interesting, and the plotline is really exciting. Hoping you manage to find a few minutes here and there to work on the next one, I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes!
Author's Response: Yes, life is definitely a LOT fuller being a mommy but I'm still trying to do things for ME, things that I enjoy, and this story is one of them. I miss writing and I miss all you guys and your encouraging comments so thank you for your ongoing support during this challenging time! In the words of the Terminator, I'll be back :)
Date: 01/08/14 12:43 am Title: Taken
And I think I'm a bit late but congratulations on having the baby :) I've never said that before because im always so distracted thinking about the chapter I'm talking about in the review after I read it xD anyway don't think we will be mad/upset if you take time to take care of your baby, take all the time you need!! We get it ;) anyway yes congratulations on your beautiful baby <3
Author's Response: Thank you very much, Brooke172! She's a very cute baby with big blue eyes and curly auburn hair. She's at the stage where she's laughing and being adorable so the time she needs from me is worth it :)
Date: 01/06/14 12:15 am Title: Battle Scars
Ah I'm so glad you updated! :3 you disappeared just like koji ;) anyway I really loved this chapter, I was dying to know how Tom and koji would interact with each other after what happened. I never mentioned this before, but you capture Bill and Toms personalities perfectly! Like I can actually believe this is how they would act if put in this situation. This is my favorite story, I hope you update soon :D
xoxo
Author's Response: Hey, thanks so much! I've tried to give Bill & Tom their own distinct personalities so it's nice when people think I've done a good job :)
Date: 01/05/14 11:55 pm Title: Battle Scars
Oh I didn't even see the new update!!
I wonder if Tom will actually tell Bill about what really happened during that fight.
Anyways thanks for the chapter :)
Author's Response: No problems. And yeah, Bill will find out the truth soon enough! ;)