Date: 04/07/14 02:06 pm Title: New Beginnings
Just so you know, I don't always comment, but I absolutely love and adore this story. I love the premise and find the whole genetic attraction thing completely fascinating. You are doing an AMAZING job with this story, and quite frankly, I'm a twincest fan, but at this point I love all 3 of those pairings, if not a little threesome! This is amazing. Please don't hesitate to go wherever you were planning to go. I can't wait for the next installment. xoxoxo
Author's Response: Hey, great to hear from you! I love when readers come out of the woodwork to comment LOL I find the genetic attraction thing fascinating too, because it's a REAL thing. It's not just fanfiction and I think that's awesome. Everyone's been telling me to write what I want so I'm gonna go where I was intending to with the plot and I hope you like it :) Thanks for your review!
Date: 04/07/14 12:40 pm Title: New Beginnings
Ahh I love you for updating so quickly! :D I'm so excited for your next chapter, I'm a little surprised that Tom is letting this happen but let's be honest, we all know he wants Koji ;) anyway keep up the good work and don't worry about what people think of the pairings it's YOUR story do whatever the hell YOU want! I know that whatever you do it will be fantastic because of your writing skills!
Author's Response: Of course Tom wants Koji. He just can't admit it ;) Thanks so much, your support is awesome!
Date: 04/06/14 08:23 pm Title: New Beginnings
Okay, I used to not like the Kujo and Tom pairing, but now that I'm seeing him in a better light, it doesn't seem as nasty anymore... LOL. I'm sorry for complaining. You really are making a beautiful story and I should be more grateful for that. Thank you. :)
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! It's okay if you don't like them but I'd hate to lose you as a reader over it because then you'd miss the rest of the story. That would be sad :( I hope you keep enjoying my writing right up to the end!
Date: 04/06/14 04:08 pm Title: New Beginnings
I'm still reading even though I don't always get to reviewing every chapter. And you're the writer, it's your story so write it anyway you like. I'd rather you wrote it your way so there are some surprises in store than for us to tell you what to write so we almost know everything that's going to happen. For instance, I never expected Tom and Koji to get together again, and never thought Bill would be okay with it and see it as a learning experience for his twin. But if it means Tom is more prepared to be with a man then that's all for the good, and that's the way Bill apparently sees it to. And after all, Koji's aim is still to get the twins together sexaually although I'm sure he's starting to enjoy himself along the way. I sincerely hope you have the next chapter well under way after leaving us on this cliffhanger. Looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Yay, so glad you're still here! I agree - I like when an author surprises me. I wouldn't do anything drastic like kill off Bill or Tom but there will definitely be twists in the plot that nobody will expect. (Like Koji enjoying himself a little too much lol) And yes, the next chapter will be up very soon! Thank you :)
Date: 04/06/14 03:54 pm Title: New Beginnings
i fucking love where this is going ;)
Author's Response: Hell yeah!! *high-five*
Date: 04/06/14 01:41 pm Title: New Beginnings
I feel like hugging Koji (well, not that's a big surprise to you; after all you gave me that wonderful birthday present haha). I think he never expected, not in a billion years, what he was getting into when he kidnapped THAT set of twins and I have this feeling that he'd be the one to suffer the most. Again, Bill has no doubts about what he wants to know and what he wants to do but Koji... From a selfish kidnapper to an extremely confused and torn guy; the moments in the playroom really moved me to the core.
Tom is priceless! He doesn't even want to talk about what went on between him and Koji, he doesn't want to make love to his brother but he doesn't want him to get intimate with anybody else either. This is SO brilliant! It's exactly what I think a macho boy would do in such a situation.
On another subject, I agree with you; it's impossible to please all the readers, no matter how good and coherent a story is. It goes without saying that lots of readers enjoying a story make the author happier (I used to write FF too, in my native language) but I think that what matters more is that you enjoy what you write and, while accepting suggestions, you stick to your plot. After all, writing for a hobby is all about this :)
Author's Response: You're right - Koji had NO idea what these twins would do to him and he's really torn up about his feelings. I love how much you sympathise with him. So nice to know you're on his side. I'm sure he'd appreciate knowing that too ;) About Tom...I hadn't intended for him to be so reluctant; it's just how his character has developed and I'm glad you think it's believable. I do enjoy what I write and I love to hear readers' ideas. Some of them I will use and some I will not but I'll just keep going where I want with the plot and hope it surprises people! PS. When's your birthday again? I should do another one of those for you *grin*
Date: 04/06/14 01:20 pm Title: New Beginnings
I'll be here no matter the pairing!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you ^^
Date: 04/06/14 07:13 am Title: New Beginnings
Even if I don't review I'm still here. I'm just super lazy. I love the concept of this story. Even before the pairing issue came up I expected it geez they have been abducted ppl must have seen this coming.
The only thing I wonder about is if anyone is missing the twins. Or give another reminder of how long they have been missing.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing even though you normally don't, MissAnna! Lovely to hear from you. And yes, people will definitely be missing the twins but I will remind people how long it's been just so they know :)
Date: 04/03/14 11:24 am Title: Bill Finds Out
Just read this story. Enjoyed most of it except for a few chapters. Did not like the sex between Koji and Tom but I was waiting for Bills reaction. Too mild imo. Really didn't like them dressing as each other either, especially Tom who has went so far trying to not dress like Bill that he swims in his clothes. Will never understand why people feel the need to make him look like Bill. Most of all I hate how Bill wants Tom to be with Koji again and he would actually want to watch. Wanting to see the person you love most in the world, your soulmate, do something that intimate with someone else, and being turned on by it; URGH! Plus all the stuff happening with suddenly gay Tom but Bill can't even get a decent kiss from Koji and, yeah, ik, Negative Nelly here, but its easy to say "Oh, I love it, please update", just givin ya my real thoughts here, and now final thoughts; Koji and Bill just need to hook up and let Tom go back to his girls, or now girls and guys, and lastly, you have some serious talent ;P
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review and your honesty! Writing is hard; I know I can't please everyone. What I like, someone else hates. And hey, threesomes are fun for those open to it ;) I appreciate you taking the time to tell me what you think and will warn you in future chapters of certain pairings so you can decide if you want to read them or not. But thank you. I do enjoy detailed reviews :)
Date: 04/01/14 06:07 pm Title: Bill Finds Out
Humph ......I think the decision has been made *sighs* it's been a good story .....and nice to meet you bye
Author's Response: Sorry I can't give you exactly what you want but I have to consider all my other readers as well and what they want to see. Thank you for reading up until now.
Date: 03/31/14 02:10 pm Title: Bill Finds Out
More tom and koji!! :) thx so much for the updates
Author's Response: Tom/Koji is on the way. Thank you for reading!
Date: 03/31/14 07:24 am Title: Bill Finds Out
What a wonderful mess!
The tangled situation between them is intriguing as hell and I'm a bit scared of myself because I can understand this all, without getting lost in their reasoning (I must be weirder than I thought XD)
I'm still not convinced about Koji's expectation of a possible love story (not just sex) between Bill and Tom. Bill is hurt because Tom hasn't shared a secret with him but I'd bet he's suffering more because of Koji's rejection and, if he wasn't feeling for him, he wouldn't be.
I'm really sorry for poor Koji.
In my opinion, he's in love with Bill, so he's realizing he can't take a life devoided of love anymore. Yet he seems to deny his feelings because it's like he's sure that loving Bill equals to tanting his innocence.
All in all, I think Bill is the only one who's not afraid of his own feelings.
I hope I explained my point of view in an understandable way..... -_-
Author's Response: Haha, if you're weird then so am I because your reasoning in pretty much spot on! I love that you always delve into the characters much deeper than most readers do, to try and understand them. And yeah, Bill is probably the bravest one here, not afraid to show how he feels. He just wants everyone to do the same! Thanks for your review, as always :)
Date: 03/26/14 09:41 pm Title: Taken
oh wow!!!! I'm in love with this story and i can't decide what pairing i like the best! I love Tom and Bill of course because they're perfect, but Tom barely sees Bill in that way, and even if he did i don't think he would ever have a real sexual relationship with him (or from what i've gathered) But i also love Bill and Koji as a couple!!! They're so cute, the way it started out as Bill hating Koji, but grew to love him and now he flirts with him shyly. I would like for them to be a couple but i don't know that it would work. BUT i also like the angry Tom and Koji sex xD I would be so happy if Tom and Koji fought more, (nothing super serious) i love it when they fight, theres something about it that's...sexy? I'm not sure hahaha. As you can see it is a very big dilemma. But anyway it's your story so whatever you decide i will be more than happy with :D
Author's Response: Thank you, Brooke172! I'm glad you're so easygoing as to who gets partnered up. It's impossible to give everyone what they want but at least you won't be disappointed with whatever I do! Thank you so much for your positive feedback and I'm happy that you're enjoying the story so much :)
Date: 03/23/14 03:59 pm Title: Twinning
Wow, that was funny XDD I't obvious that Koji is sexually attracted by Tom - the boy's tough attitude adds to it a lot, I think - but I think he knows he has no chances with him. Again, no matter what I read and what Koji says (OMG, it's you, Rina, but I keep thinking of them all as they're the ones who think, speaks etc XD), I still think Bill has no Stockholm syndrome. I may be wrong as hell but I see him back to his usual outfit (makeup and all) as him not being a captive anymore but his true self. Whatever his intentions are, it's now clear that Koji's original plan is not working as he thought it would. Tom is still talking about girls, Bill is wondering if he'd eventualy find someone to love... They could be having each other only for the rest of their lives but, up to now, I think it'd be a strong, mutual bound of friendship and understanding. I'm curious beyond any measure about further development of the plot!
P.S. Thanks for giving us a glimpse of good, old Bill as he used to look XD
Author's Response: Thank you! I had fun in that chapter :) I also think the characters speak for themselves; I just hear them in my head and write it down! No, Koji's plan is certainly not working out like he hoped but then again he's never met twins like Bill and Tom before, haha XD The plot could go any way from here. And yes, it's nice to picture Bill with long hair and makeup again *sighs wistfully*
Date: 03/23/14 03:31 pm Title: Opportunity
I haven't read the following chapter yet so I voice my opinion without knowing what's gonna happen. As much as I love twc, here I see a perfect love between Bill and Koji and I'm explaining why. There might be mutual attraction between Bill and Tom but, on Tom's side, this seems already too much buried under layers of rules set by society, not to mention that the glint of attraction he displayed could fade once they're back to their world, leaving Bill with an unrequited love. Bill, on the contrary, has learnt a lot about himself and his orientation thanks to Koji, not because Koji lectured him but due to a mutual, natural connection that is far deeper than sexual attraction. As for Koji, his feelings for Bill have soften him (though not weakened him) to the point that he's letting out some of the pain that has been gnawing at him for so long. In my opinion, Bill doesn't have Stockholm's at all; he's just falling in love. What I can't figure out is how Bill and Koji could live together or have a love story, considering the way and where Koji lives....
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your thoughts; I really enjoyed reading them! Your theory about Bill not having Stockholm Syndrome is highly intriguing and you're the only person who's suggested that. Interesting idea! He and Koji definitely have a connection but is it only due to the situation they're in or is it something deeper? Who knows? (well, me, of course...but you won't find out until later what's really going on :P) And poor Tom, everyone seems to have given up on him having feelings for Bill. I guess he's hiding them so well that it seems he has none! Maybe I need to get him drunk again... ;)
Date: 03/19/14 10:51 pm Title: Twinning
SNEAKY! SNEAK!!! oooooohhhhhh, Kujooooo!
Author's Response: Yep, he sure is!!rn
Date: 03/19/14 01:51 am Title: Twinning
Like I said please I'm begging you make this a sweet TWINCEST STORY ....... I love it to bits ........ ..but I think I would stop reading it if you made it a different pairing I don't like Tom and Koji or Bill and Koji TWINCEST ALL THE WAY ....BUT YEAH I LUV THE STORY
Author's Response: Thank you; I appreciate your input!
Date: 03/10/14 01:42 pm Title: Opportunity
I'd like the twincest! HELL YES! i've been waiting for it for years :D i want more fighting and angry sex - koji/tom. i love humiliation and anger (but onl tom/koji). im loving this so much!
Author's Response: Thanks, lidzi! Will definitely take your suggestions on board. I like the angry Tom/Koji too ;)
Date: 03/10/14 01:05 am Title: Opportunity
more love and sex - a threesome could be good.
Author's Response: A threesome would be great! I'd love to do that but I'll have to see if it will fit within the storyline or not. Thanks for the suggestion!
Date: 03/08/14 10:55 pm Title: Opportunity
No pairings with Kujo... That'd be weird since I don't find him sexy at all lol. I would LOVE more fighting and drama and maybe a lil sex... haha. I just really like it when Bill and Tom fight cause its cool to imagine an angry side of them. Anyway, yeah. No Koji, more fights, more ESCAPE! Eheh. And more food. POST SOON! I love you!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! There will be more fighting for sure and maybe a lil sex too but I can't guarantee that Koji won't be involved in some way. Food! Hahaha, yes, more of that as well ;)