Date: 06/07/10 05:50 am Title: Chapter 18 - Forgive me??
OMGz! More from bill and tomi *O*
pretty pleaseee
love it
xoxo
Author's Response: More coming your way soon! Thanks!
Date: 06/06/10 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Forgive me??
Make up with Bill? WOW-Andreas has some ball's doesnt he?!
Can't wait for the next update
Author's Response: Andreas is a moron! Why do guys always think we should forgive them when they cheat? Thanks for reading!
Date: 06/06/10 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Now what?
Hm...wonder if Bill will fall apart after the evening end's and he has time to reflect...I hope him and Tom meet up so maybe Tom can help Bill through the rough night!
Author's Response: Bill will have a few rough nights. But of course, Tom will be there for him! Stay tuned!
Date: 06/06/10 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Forgive me??
Hee, thank God Bill wouldn't take Andreas back no matter if he crawled over broken glass to apologize. Loving this!
Author's Response: Thanks for loving this! More up shortly!
Date: 06/06/10 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Now what?
Hee, I'm glad Tom was so cool about Bill's revenge! And even happier by how much he calms Bill's emotions of betrayal and anger and replaces them with the attraction he feels for Tom. Fantastic chapter!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Thanks for reading! More up shortly!
Date: 06/06/10 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Now what?
Ohhh moreee *O*
Pretty please! I totally love it ;3 but you know that! ahah
xoox
Author's Response: I love you for reading it! Thanks!!
Date: 06/06/10 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Now what?
NIce! I really thought Tom would be mad! Update soon! :)
Author's Response: I thought about it but then Tom lived through it so he coudln't be mad. Sympathy sells!
Date: 06/06/10 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Now what?
AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! hahhahhahaahhahaha. i was laughing hard at how ironic it was that tom and that whore were together :DD
Author's Response: Ya but of course when one gets busted, guess who gets kicked to the curb?
Date: 06/03/10 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Busted!
Wow! That's certainly one way of outing them. I'm so proud of Bill, I just want to hug him. Can I assume that the lone figure is Tom? Wonderful honey *hugs*
Author's Response: Next chapter will reveal our mystery guest! Stay tuned!
Date: 06/03/10 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Busted!
omg omg!
D: I WANT MORE I NEED MORE!
Update soon!
yayy
Author's Response: Life interrupted again. Next chapter up today!
Date: 06/03/10 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Busted!
love it, love it, love it. Keep writing :)
Author's Response: I'm writing as fast as possible! Thanks for reading!
Date: 06/03/10 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Busted!
Tom was watching???
Author's Response: All will be revealed in the next chapter! LOL! Stay tuned!
Date: 06/03/10 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Busted!
I knew Tom would be there! Now i'm dying to know what his reaction will be to the whole thing-as you said anger and sadness, can't wait to see which emotion win's! Awesome chapter
Author's Response: Tom is an emotional boy. Stay tuned to see what happens!
Date: 06/03/10 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Busted!
hmmm....i bet that its Tom in that corner...probably thinking that Bill used him or something ^^a....was laughing when everything was revealed...it was funny to me ^^a...there his revenge and ow what will happen next ^_^
Author's Response: Stay tuned...the begging begins!
Date: 06/03/10 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Busted!
Tom was there?! Is he mad at Bill with anger and sadness or that bastard Andreas? I have to know! X) ps..once again I LOVE IT!
Author's Response: I'm going to make Andreas suffer some before he's gone. stay tuned to see what happens!rnrnI'll probaby upload the next chapter today sometime. This story is just flowing out of me and I'm glad I can post it quickly for you guys!!
Date: 06/03/10 10:21 am Title: Chapter 15 - Independence Day
Omgzz csnt wait for the next chapter!! Loveee it
Author's Response: Next chapter will be uup soon! Stay tuned!
Date: 06/03/10 08:52 am Title: Chapter 15 - Independence Day
HA! If you really loved Bill you wouldn't have cheated on him! Repeatedly, Andreas you're a fool *grrrrr* Oooh he makes me mad. I'm on the edge of my seat here, can't wait for the next chapter. Great honey
Author's Response: People who cheat often say that they really do love the person they cheat on, but still feel the need to stray. And when they get busted...it's a whole other story!rnCheaters are ridiculous! They really have some fucked up logic rolling around in their heads!
Date: 06/03/10 07:22 am Title: Chapter 15 - Independence Day
This is really good I can't wait till the next chapter I've been looking foreward to the breakup. Well done and I hope you update soon
Author's Response: The breakup and divorce will be just as nasty! Stay tuned.
Date: 06/03/10 06:18 am Title: Chapter 15 - Independence Day
You are KILLING me with the build-up here!!
Author's Response: I know..I'm sorry! I don't usually like short chapters but for some reason this one is writing itself with lots of good breaks in action in it! Stay tuned for more!
Date: 06/03/10 06:12 am Title: Chapter 14 - Countdown to Destruction - Part 2
i dont think i reviewed this chapter (sorry)
aww bill is smitten..its cute..
i really am in love with this story..i think you write well *hugs you and runs away*
Author's Response: I am so happy that you like this story. Huggles back!