Date: 06/25/10 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 23 - “Persistent little bastard isn’t he?”
I love Audra! Actually, I love Audra and her kitchen knife! XD Btw, I volunteer to help her if Andreas doesn't get it soon... Oh, all the horrible, horrible things we could do to that man.. ;)
Author's Response: If he keeps it up, Audra will be doing horrible things to him!!
Date: 06/25/10 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 23 - “Persistent little bastard isn’t he?”
o_O
Audra is scary...
Author's Response: Ya but she's just protecting her twin from a psycho!
Date: 06/25/10 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 23 - “Persistent little bastard isn’t he?”
Audra is a rockin' gal-love her!
Poor Bill, how the hell can he even BEGIN to sort thing's out when Andreas is shadowing every move...like a creepy stalker. I think that's what Andreas is gonna be-obsessed with not having Bill and will try to make sure no one else does...whoop's-sorry, I tend to get carried away sometime's when reviewing.
Thank's for the quick update's!
Author's Response: Andreas is indeed stalker material! He gets even stranger. Stay tuned!
Date: 06/25/10 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 22 -- Moving Day!
Yay!!! Bill has moved out!! Hmm...I am curious to see if they will find anything when they look "under and behind" everything when they go back to the apt?
Author's Response: Oh I should have had him find something incriminating! But he found evidence a few chapters ago. Thanks for the plot idea though.
Date: 06/25/10 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 23 - “Persistent little bastard isn’t he?”
I love your story. Do you think you could possibly fix this chapter? I find it very hard to read in it's current format.
Author's Response: Thanks for the heads up. Some odd glitch. It's fixed now. Please go back and re-read it.
Date: 06/25/10 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 23 - “Persistent little bastard isn’t he?”
Ugh, Andreas deserves all that must be coming to him and more. Talk about not getting it. He's so self-absorbed in what he wants, he won't even try to put himself in Bill's shoes and understand that what he did was wrong. *sighs* I'm glad Bill finally saw him as he truly is, btw. And Audra with the knife was awesome, heehee! I actually hope she can 'deal' with Andreas if he keeps up bothering Bill. ;)
Author's Response: Oh Audra will deal with Andreas all right! Stay tuned!
Date: 06/25/10 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 23 - “Persistent little bastard isn’t he?”
Hey, Jax, I don't know if you noticed this, maybe it was a program glitch, but your formatting is shot to hell. It was really hard to read this chap with no paragraphing etc.
Author's Response: Thanks for the heads up. Some odd glitch. It's fixed now.
Date: 06/25/10 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 23 - “Persistent little bastard isn’t he?”
Honey, you might need to edit this to add some spacing. It's all jumbled together right now and it's a bit difficult to read, not that I won't try. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for the heads up. Some odd glitch. It's fixed now. Please re-read. It should be easier on the eyes now.
Date: 06/25/10 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 22 -- Moving Day!
Poor Bill, I can imagine how sad he is, despite his anger over Andreas' betrayal. And his confusion over his feelings for Tom is very well portrayed as well. The chapter was fantastic! Thanks for the quick update!
Author's Response: Glad you're into this. Bill will have to deal with some more emotional mess before he's finally free of the nut job. Stay tuned!
Date: 06/25/10 10:01 am Title: Chapter 22 -- Moving Day!
Loved it, as always. Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: If I'm lucky, I'll have another chapter up tonight or tomorrow. Enjoy!
Date: 06/25/10 09:03 am Title: Chapter 22 -- Moving Day!
AWSOME!!! more more more!!!
Author's Response: More coming quickly! Thanks for reading!
Date: 06/25/10 02:00 am Title: Chapter 22 -- Moving Day!
Oh poor Bill, even though he's better off without Andreas, a broken relationship is always painful. I only hope that Andreas doesn't make things harder. Wonderful updates honey, so glad your muse is back *hugs*
Author's Response: Andreas is not done being a prick yet! Stay tuned for some surprises!
Date: 06/25/10 12:47 am Title: Chapter 21 - “My kisses can do that to you, huh?”
What an arrogant S*O*B!!!
PLEASE tell me Andreas is not going to wear Bill down enough to make him talk about thing's with him!!!
Author's Response: Andreas is a very persistant prick! He's not giving up yet! Stay tuned!
Date: 06/25/10 12:42 am Title: Chapter 20 - You’d Better Not Hurt Him
LOL-love Audra, she's got the claw's out to protect Bill! I like the way Tom and Bill's relationship is developing, thank you for not rushing it.
Author's Response: Thank you for noticing that. It would be wrong to rush them too fast into it. Bill has a hurdle that he has to overcome before he can give Tom his heart. But I'm a sucker for happy endings so you can just about figure out how this is gonna go down! LOL!!rnrnOh, and Audra is my girl! Ya gotta protect your twin!
Date: 06/25/10 12:36 am Title: Chapter 19 - So it’s My Fault??
Andreas-typical male, blaming everyone else when they can't keep it in their pant's! I love the anger and emotion from Bill, really looking forward to seeing if Andrea's will ever accept the fact they are over, or continue to be an ARSE!
Author's Response: Andreas will be a typical prick. Delusional and blaming everyne else for his problems. Stay tuned to see how crazy he actually gets!
Date: 06/24/10 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 21 - “My kisses can do that to you, huh?”
TOMI MAKES BILL SMILE!!! :D
Author's Response: Yes Tom makes Bill smile, but he's gonna make Andreas mad! Stay tuned!
Date: 06/24/10 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 21 - “My kisses can do that to you, huh?”
Omgz!
More more D:
i need more
xoxo
Author's Response: More up real soon! Stay tuned!
Date: 06/24/10 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 21 - “My kisses can do that to you, huh?”
Ugh, I hate Andreas. He simply doesn't get it, does he? *shakes head* And now he's curious over who is making Bill smile. Mwhahahahaha, can't wait until he sees Bill trade up for someone who's actually worthy of his love. :D
Loving this story! And it's so sweet that your honey is as sweet and good as this Tom. You're a lucky girl!
Author's Response: Thanks! I am lucky to have him! rnAndreas was based off of a guy I used to date a while ago. He did wrong yet it was everyone else's fault but his. According to him, WE made him be an unfaithful prick. Thank god I never married the SOB! But ficcie Andreas is not done yet! He gets worse before he's done!
Date: 06/24/10 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning
andreas is so freaking dense, he just dosen't get it. i can't wait to see what happens when he meets tom. by the way does anyone know what the name ofstory is were bill is a robot that was created by tom's father and tom is engaded to an italian model but he starts sleeping with bill?
Author's Response: Still working on that angle....rnrnIf you find the name of that story, let me know too! It sounds good!
Date: 06/24/10 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 21 - “My kisses can do that to you, huh?”
Hmmm... if I were Bill, I'd get an attorney and start up divorce papers ASAP! Andreas doesn't seem to be firing with both lobes and he seems a bit unhinged.
Author's Response: Yes...Bill is headed down the divorce path, but surprise! Guess who's going to fight it?! Stay tuned!