Date: 10/23/10 03:17 am Title: Chapter 37 - Return to the Scene of the Crime
YEY! Another lovely chapter! : D
Author's Response: School has me very busy but I'm tryig tyo alot time to keep this going. I think it will probably wrap up in another 10 chapters or so...but I'm not sure yet...
Date: 10/16/10 01:48 am Title: Chapter 37 - Return to the Scene of the Crime
AWwww yay for Bill, that's so awesome that he could over come his fears. Just womderful to see you back sweetie, missed you *huggles*
Author's Response: Thanks hunny! I'm trying to put everything in order so I can focus on this again. Glad you're still with me! Huggles!
Date: 10/15/10 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 37 - Return to the Scene of the Crime
yayaya ! your baack!
haha didnt loose mee!!
ahahh a cockblock! aw, some smut but noooo audra had to ruin it!
yay for bill!
alalalla loooooooved it lik always!
Author's Response: Isn't that what siblings tend to do? LOL! Thanks for hanging in there with me. A busy life sidetracked me for a bit but i'm trying here...Huggles!
Date: 09/22/10 02:36 am Title: Chapter 4 -- The Truth Hurts
Wow, that was a great chapter. Great job Jax! I love this story so far!
Huggles, Kristen
Author's Response: Thanks hun! More goodness to come!
Date: 09/22/10 02:30 am Title: Chapter 3 -- I Need Help...
Haha~ Gusti Bear as a detective!
Author's Response: Yup...and a darn good one! Thanks!
Date: 09/22/10 02:17 am Title: Chapter 2 -- Suspicions
ohhnoow! Andy? Affair? Who is Wednesday?
In love.
Author's Response: Well read on! I'm so happy you are interested in my humble little story!
Date: 09/01/10 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 36 - Therapy
well damn, hope all that wasn't for nothing now that Bill is going to have to face that douche Andreas! Thank God for Tom and Audra!
Author's Response: I think Bill is a lot stronger than he thinks he is. We'll see how he deals with the trial...stay tuned!
Date: 09/01/10 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 35 - Released
Andreas done pissed off Audra-lord have mercy on him! LOL I love her character. Now to catch up...
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I'm so glad you like Audra. I love writing strong female support characters!
Date: 08/31/10 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 36 - Therapy
aww poor bill i really like the idea of tom trying to paint to get bill painting again!!
Author's Response: It's called diversion. To get someone to do something you want them to do, you sort of trick them into them thinking you can't do it (or you do it wrong on purpose) so they do it for you. It works really good on boyfriends and husbands! LOL!
Date: 08/31/10 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 36 - Therapy
I would think something was wrong if he didn't have PTSD!
I just hope he'll pull through, but with Tom and Audra at his side I'm sure he will!
XD
Author's Response: Yes...Bill has soem great care -- mediacal and personal. he'll get through it fun, after some trial trauma that is...
Date: 08/29/10 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 36 - Therapy
Good times...
Author's Response: And more good times to come!
Date: 08/28/10 02:40 am Title: Chapter 36 - Therapy
*hugs Bill* I feel for him, I really do. He's lucky to have Tom and Audra there for him as a support network, that's so important. I love how Tom's made himself a steady part of Bill's life, even through all of Bill's current issues, he's there when it counts. Terrific chapter honey *hugs*
Author's Response: Don't you wish all guys were like that in real life? Although...Tom is my lovesick fool right now...
Date: 08/27/10 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 36 - Therapy
oh dear lord.
bills traumatized.
aw, toms to sweet ( :
trial....oh good grief.
Author's Response: Not sure how long I'll make his trial yet...still researching that! But stay tuned for some drama!
Date: 08/25/10 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Did you ever really love me?
Andrea's is a horrible, horrible person who deserves to rot in jail. I'm going to keep reading.
Author's Response: I think I'm going to be mean to Andreas. I think I'll let karma be the bitch that it is! *evil laugh!* Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/02/10 11:44 am Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning
I think sanity is the best bet, lolz.
Author's Response: Sanity can be overrated! LOL!
Date: 07/31/10 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 35 - Released
:DDDDD
I LOVE THIS STORY! I'm not one for long chaptered fics, but this is an exception! I finally started reading it yesterday (and had to stop because mom came home and I'm banned from the computer lol), but I'm up to date!
I just wish that if this was in Texas, and if Bill (I don't really wish this) had 'died' for like 2 minutes, then by a techinicality Andreas would get the death sentece (I think that's how it goes down there)!
I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Oh! Don't get in trouble on my account! But glad you're enjoying it! rnHmmm...I'll have to look into that Texas situation further! Thanks for that info!
Date: 07/31/10 10:33 am Title: Chapter 35 - Released
Hehehe loved all the teasing in this one. Yay Bill's home and I get to play, I mean, look after him. *wink* Looking forward to the next chapter sweetie *hugs*
Author's Response: Now don't you be a naughty nurse! Tom might get a little jealous! Thanks for reading this! Stay tuned for new chapters!
Date: 07/31/10 08:53 am Title: Chapter 35 - Released
Yay! Awsome chapie!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading it!
Date: 07/31/10 03:38 am Title: Chapter 4 -- The Truth Hurts
I just started reading this story and I love it. Everything in the story flows nicely, you focus on what's happening in that moment and you describe everything very well so it's very easy to picture it. It feels like I'm watching a movie instead of reading.
I really like the idea of Gustav as the P.I and the fact that his office looks like what a private detective's office would look in a 1940s or 50s movie.
Author's Response: Thanks for sharing that with me. I always wonder how the scenes are going over with you guys. I appreciate your critique!
Date: 07/31/10 12:40 am Title: Chapter 35 - Released
Yay, Bill is released!
Tom is so adorable!
Can't wait for more!
XD
Author's Response: Shoud I make Tom annoying or keep him sane when taking care of Bill?