Date: 12/13/10 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 44 - The Day Bill Could Finally Breathe Again
this story is so good. i loved every word of it.great job
Author's Response: Thank you Hanna! I'm so happy you are enjoying it! New chapters up soon...
Date: 12/10/10 08:04 am Title: Chapter 44 - The Day Bill Could Finally Breathe Again
Hi.
I wasn't too stressed waiting for this chapter....Because I knew the trial would end well.
But I was curious about the verdict Andreas would get.
He deserves everything and so much more...
But If I have been the judge, I would have required psychiatric follow-up! This guy really need to have therapy!!!!!
But now it's over! Sure there is appeal, but Bill don't need to be there for it, and I'm sure another trial will only find Andreas guilty once more!!!
Now, Tom and Bill can move on with their lives and their relation ship....And unfortunetaly the troubles that will arise for them...
I'm a bit nervous about what will happen, but I know whatever happens, they will overcome it!
Oh and by the way...it's time for them to find a man for Andra. It's good seeing her there for his baby brother, but now it's Tom's job to protect Bill. Audra must think about herself now!
Why not Georg???? I think they'd do a great couple!
See you next chapter!
Kiki
Author's Response: Thanks Kiki I loved your review! There are some brands of crazy that therapy just won't help. And Andreas falls into that "wont help" category. He's a sociopath and he will never change. And...have you been reading my story outline? You just hit too close to my next scenes! Did you guess, or are you just...that...good??!!
Date: 12/09/10 08:10 am Title: Chapter 44 - The Day Bill Could Finally Breathe Again
Oh yes! The trial is over and Andreas has been found guilty. *sighs in relief* Honey you wrote the trial so well, it was an emotional roller coaster and you handled it brilliantly.
Awesome chapter. Now I can't wait to see how Bill and Tom's relationship blossoms and Bill's art career flourish. *smooshes*
Author's Response: Thanks love! YOU inspire me! I'm glad the trial didn't come off boring. I rushed though it but tried to make it descriptive enough so that everyone could follow. I have good things coming for Bill and Tom. I can't wait to hear your thoughts on it! *Huggles!*
Date: 12/08/10 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 44 - The Day Bill Could Finally Breathe Again
YEY! The trials are over and we move on to happiness! : D
Author's Response: Yup I have good things planned for Bill and Tom!
Date: 12/08/10 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 44 - The Day Bill Could Finally Breathe Again
I hope there will be an epilogue! And I think Andreas' sentence should have been longer. Life without parole maybe.
LOVED this!
XD
Author's Response: Oh Andreas will definitely be punished severely! Count on that!
Date: 12/08/10 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Did you ever really love me?
bastard....... am i allowed to warp into this universe and kill him NOW??????
Author's Response: Feel free! It'd be no great loss if he disappeared! wink wink!
Date: 12/08/10 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 29 - Karma is a Bitch!
heehee, me like karma..... XD
Author's Response: Me too! Karma is a bitch! Tee hee!
Date: 12/08/10 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 23 - “Persistent little bastard isn’t he?”
hehe, andreas pissed off bill-sister.... BAD PLAN!!!!!!
Author's Response: Audra is VERY protective of her little brother. Audra is a sister that is NOT to be messed with!
Date: 12/08/10 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 21 - “My kisses can do that to you, huh?”
am i allowed to pop in there and murder andreas myself yet?????? *bill pouts* pwease??????
Author's Response: Feel free! LOL!
Date: 12/08/10 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 19 - So it’s My Fault??
HA, TOLD YOU, ANDREAS!!!!!!!!! heeh.... i'm done........ XD
Author's Response: Andreas gets to be predictable...
Date: 12/08/10 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Forgive me??
haha, good luck, dear andi..... do you REALLY think bill's gonna take you back now, baka????
Author's Response: Andi's an idiot! It's amazing how many people do dumb stuff and expect to be forgiven!
Date: 12/06/10 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning
o have no clue.
i think we should fight agianst it.
or be partners in crime!
Author's Response: Partners in crime? I'm always up for a good caper! Just name it!
Date: 12/03/10 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning
Here's the link.
But until then, I only wrote in french...
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/796559/Magical_Girl_Kiki
Author's Response: That's OK. I always wanted to learn French. Good place to go for material!
Date: 12/03/10 11:55 am Title: Chapter 43 - Truth or Justice? (Part 4)
Well that's a curve ball! Poor Bill! There's no way that Andreas is going to get away with this.
LOVED this, can't wait for more!
XD
Date: 12/03/10 09:47 am Title: Chapter 43 - Truth or Justice? (Part 4)
That was amazing sweetheart!! This was so well done, and omg Bill was raped, I had tears. I was impressed with the way Alexander gleaned the truth out of Andreas, that was brilliant. Watching him snap was pure joy. Can't wait for more darling *smooshes*
Author's Response: Grant never should have let Audra know Bill was raped. Now she's got some work to do!
Date: 12/03/10 01:38 am Title: Chapter 43 - Truth or Justice? (Part 4)
Another awesome chapter of course! I was hoping to get the verdict but I'm sure that'll come next time. You got this out really quick. I'm impressed :) Can't wait for the next one! Thanks for all your hard work! You're amazing! : D
Author's Response: Thanks for hanging in there with me.
Date: 12/02/10 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning
I'm an author too.
But not in Th fandom yet...It will come soon.
But I was often said that I'm good at guessing plots....by english and french authors...
Maybe I juste have a good ability to read between the lines, I read a lot and watch a lot of movies...and I mostly have a very good imagination!!!
Author's Response: Well you have an author's heart. Your reviews are insightful and inspiring! I'd love to read some of your work. I'm sure it's awesome, no matter the fandom or subject! If you get a chance, I'd love to have a link to where ever you store your work. *Huggles!*
Date: 12/02/10 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 43 - Truth or Justice? (Part 4)
Hi.
It's the first review I leave you, but I hope you will like it.
I'm french, so don't lash my 'poor' english....
- I chose to read this story a bit randomly. I saw it many time but never went and read it. Why? I don't know..
But when I began, I couldn't stop. I didn't realize. I read chapter 1, then chapter 2....until chapter 42...And then again you published a new one.
- This story seems a bit slow but I think it makes the plot and events more realistc.
Same thing for Bill and Tom's relation. Despite love at first sight, their relation goes slowly and it's somehow better. I wouldn't mind sexy moments but their tenderness is so cute.
- Andreas....juts one word: despicable!!
- Tom...I find him a bit retiring...but he's always by Bill'sides...maybe he will take more importance now that Andreas will be really out of the picture.
- Bill...poor him. Could you be meaner to him??? I think he had had enough of it now. Happiness soon? He deserves it!!
- I really love the way you did some things. The divorce court, Bill's recovery and therapy, the trial...
They are very detailed, with specific jargon. But it's never incomprehensible. Everything goes smoothly, whatever it is.
- I'm sure Bill will win the trial but after????
-Will he really be done with Andreas? -Will his relationship with Tom trully begin? I'd hope the important meeting would be Tom's parents but it would be too soon....Maybe later.
-What about Miller? Andra will be out for his blood!!! He doesn't know what he put himself in, by raping Bill.
M-aybe after, it will be Tom the one having issues. With the ex that broke his heart when Bill and him will go to Germany????So that Bill could for once be the supporting one!!!
I fell in love with this story. It's not the most incredible I have ever read, but it touched me in several ways.
It happened to me with other stories yet.
ANd do you know what I do when a story catches me like that????
I want to translate it!!!
I have already one totally translated, one in progress, and a few projected...
And I'd love it to have yours as well in the futur.
So I ask you: would you allow me to translate your story into french???
See you for the next chapter, for sure!
Kiki
Author's Response: Kiki...wow...that was an interesting review. You are very honest....I'll give you that! And your English is fine...I understand you perfectly. You kind of amazed me because you have come close to guessing a couple of my plot lines. You must be an author yourself because you think like one. I appreciate the fact that you understand why I moved slowly through their relationship. Sex can be fun, but Bill is a broken person and sex is a touchy subject with him. I wanted Tom sweet and kind, so that Bill could feel safe and secure with him first before they moved the relationship further. rnrn
I am happy that you like this little tome enough to want to translate it. I would be honored! Please just let me know where it is posted (with a link) once it has been translated. Thanks for your time and attention. Redaers like you inspire me to keep writing and entertaining!
Date: 12/02/10 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 43 - Truth or Justice? (Part 4)
well-that was a great chapter!! I must say that bit of news Bill dropped had me O____O -didnt see that coming! Thank you for posting another update so quick-look forward to the next one!
Author's Response: I have a paper to finish for school and a presentation and final to get ready for, but this was killing me. I just had to get it out! Glad I could shock and surprise you!rnIt may be a week before the next chapter is out but I'll see what I can do. Thanks!
Date: 12/01/10 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 42 - Truth or Justice? (Part 3)
Awesome chapter as always! I love the court scenes, but I must say that I can't wait till they're over. :)
Author's Response: Just posted the last court chapter....we roll on now! Enjoy!