Date: 01/09/11 07:51 am Title: Chapter 48 - Bill and Tom's Excellent Paris Adventure
About this chapter...
- Tom impressed me. Multi-lingual? but with his international job, it's not too surprising....
And I must agree: Tom speaking french with the german accent....TOO SEXY, I'm dying!!!!! It's something I always wanted to hear in real....Too bad he's not so fluent in the real life!
- First glimpse of Paris for them.... plans, Food....But I look forward to theit other trips in other cities.
- I like Bas...He's a bit cliché but I like him.
- Ouch...Tom wanted to go further in their relationship. A shared shower would have been a good step forward....but Bill isn't ready! I'm afraid their first time won't happen in Paris. The mood and Bill's issues will be on the way. It has to wait a bit. But Bill is improving nonetheless.
And most of all....He is trully surprising. All that in five minutes!!!!!
Author's Response: And a good five minutes it was!
Date: 01/09/11 07:29 am Title: Chapter 47 - It’s a Flying Apartment!
Hi there.
Here we go for the next three chapters in one go!
- Tom saves a few more surprises for Bill. He is taken aback by all this luxury. But he will soon be used to it since Tom plans to spoil him from now on.
- You always manage to put a small patch of humor in your chapters: the 'joke' about Bill's bags and the barrel rolls.
- In Paris, Tom and Bill will be like princes being Bas' guests...But right now let's them sleep. Paris can wait a few hours.
- Miller is really....a swine!
Audra will surely bring charges but to do it, she'll have to convince Bill to really be the one doing it....She will have a hard time but sometimes, hard things must be done!!!
If not, this rape would always be a stain in Bill' life.
Author's Response: Who said Audra was going to take care of Miller in a legal way???? rn
*Insert evil laugh here!*
Date: 01/07/11 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 46 - Paris... Here We Come!
Hi there.
Long time not read, but Christmas holidays were a bit frantic and I didn't have the time to read....ANd now I'm a bit ill. WHat a fucked up way to begin the year.
By the way, I wish you an happy new year!!!!
Now this chapter.
- A little brother/sister time before the trip begings...
Audra always knows how give opinions, advices and support to his brother. And maybe it's all Bill needs: to open his eyes about Tom, to forget Andreas and his pain.
And Audra is so into his brother relationship with Tom that she would make a good fan of slash :p
- And I beg to differ: I think Tom is perfect....for Bill, even with his surely numerous defaults.
And I don't remember. I'm sure Tom has already said to Bill "I love you", but I don't think Bill said it, did he?
Maybe Bill doen't feel love yet to him, it's abit too soon. But he has feelings for Tom and it's just a matter of time before it turns into real love.
- How many suitcases has Bill? six or seven? I bet it's seven since it's a lucky charm....
But poor Tom, he discovers the pleasures of really dating Bill. He discovers a Bill who is natural, not shell-shocked by his life or the trial.... He can discover the Real Bill and they can trully begin their relation.
- A privet jet? we see that Tom is very well off, but he doesn't show it off. He knows how to stay simple and it's really a beautiful side of his personality.
- Last time you said I found a change direction in this chapter based on my hypothesis....but which ones? Is it about
* Audra's future boyfriend that would be Georg?
* Bill and Tom's first time in Paris?
* Miller's future problems thanks to Audra?
I saw a bit of each one in this chapter....
Maybe I will find more in the next. See you later then, maybe tomorrow.
Big kisses
Kiki
Author's Response: Kiki I LOVE your reviews too! Such insight. I appreciate them and I love reading them! Looking forward to your next review!
Date: 12/31/10 01:23 am Title: Chapter 49 - Cupid and Psyche
one of the best and most well written FF I've read.
Author's Response: Thank you ! I'm glad you are enjoying it!
Date: 12/27/10 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 49 - Cupid and Psyche
Wow. That was amazing. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it!
Date: 12/27/10 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 49 - Cupid and Psyche
ooooh, pretty sculpture! oooh, pretty chapter! :D
Author's Response: I agree...that sculpture is one of my favorites. And thank you!
Date: 12/27/10 08:51 am Title: Chapter 49 - Cupid and Psyche
Awwww Georg and Audra make a cute couple, lol at getting sprung by Dunja. Tom's a meanie bean but those two are so adorable. Love it honey.
Author's Response: Hey there! I'm not sure how far I'm going to take Geo and Audra yet...they have some interesting possibilities... Audra ishardcore...can Geo handle her?rnAnything in particular you'd like to see happen?
Date: 12/27/10 05:23 am Title: Chapter 49 - Cupid and Psyche
hate so sound crude but..... Arg v i'm ready for them to do it!!!
Author's Response: They will...in the next few chapters...hang in there!
Date: 12/27/10 02:40 am Title: Chapter 49 - Cupid and Psyche
beautiful art...*stares*
Author's Response: I know! I just love that piece!
Date: 12/27/10 02:02 am Title: Chapter 42 - Truth or Justice? (Part 3)
I LOVE BETTY!
Author's Response: Betty is a pretty kewl hippy chick!
Date: 12/27/10 02:02 am Title: Chapter 41 - Truth or Justice? (Part 2)
I LOVE TOM!!!!
Author's Response: Me too!
Date: 12/26/10 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 23 - “Persistent little bastard isn’t he?”
I LOVE AUDRA!
...that is all
Author's Response: Me too!!
Date: 12/26/10 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 49 - Cupid and Psyche
AWWW georg and audra! quite the cozy couple i say! ah!
and as always, bill and tom, simply ah-dro-ah-ble! hehehe
*mumbles from bills suitcase*
Author's Response: Did Tom see you yet hiding in Bill's suitcase? Well hang on...you're going to see a few things that maybe you shouldn't! Here comes some smut! LOL!
Date: 12/26/10 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning
hop in one of bills suit case !
Author's Response: : - p
Date: 12/26/10 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 48 - Bill and Tom's Excellent Paris Adventure
MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!!!!! good chapter, i enjoyed it muchly!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks and Merry Christmas to you too! The adventure continues!
Date: 12/26/10 11:32 am Title: Chapter 48 - Bill and Tom's Excellent Paris Adventure
happy holidays!
awww, their toooo adorable!
little rascles.
oh i just loooove the sights of paris!
thehehe.
Author's Response: Merry Christmas to you too! I am stil trying to get to Paris so I can love it in person too! Sigh...one day...
Date: 12/26/10 05:52 am Title: Chapter 48 - Bill and Tom's Excellent Paris Adventure
AWWWWWW
Author's Response: Aren't they just too cute!
Date: 12/26/10 02:40 am Title: Chapter 48 - Bill and Tom's Excellent Paris Adventure
Awwww so sweet *snuggles in bed with them* LOL never under estimate the shopping powers of Bill!! Merry Christmas darling, I hope you were thoroughly spoilt *smooshes*
Author's Response: Thanks and Merry Christmas to you too! Santa was nice to me. Hope he was nice to you too! Bill is about to do some heavy damage to his credit cards though next chapter! I have a friend that's a sneaky shopper like that. You turn your back on him for a few minutes and he's back with a bag. We still can't figure out how he does that! LOL!
Date: 12/23/10 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 47 - It’s a Flying Apartment!
That was an awesome chapter! I can't wait to read about the rest of the week! : D
Author's Response: Bill and Tom's Excellent Paris Aventure Begins!
Date: 12/23/10 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 46 - Paris... Here We Come!
WhooooOOOO???
Author's Response: My, you're fast! I just posted this! LoL!