Date: 04/20/23 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning
I've mentioned this on other reviews: I came into the TH / THF fandom in Jan’22. The vast majority of fics I've read are quite old and I'm sure the authors have moved on (and probably wont even see new reviews), BUT I figure why not leave one anyway… I enjoyed this fic and wanted to say thank you for writing and sharing it!
Date: 08/30/13 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 69 - The End...?
Wow, just realized that I NEVER reviewed this chapter. Why not? Oh, I'm so sorry! I'm so happy for Tom and Bill, and Andreas, god.. I.. Fuck! Well, I've already read the sequel, it was awesome! :D You know what? After my last review, I've read this story at least 5-6 times ^^ I never get tired of it, and when I know I'm in for a boring weekend, I just make myself a nice cup of tea, find my most comfortable blanket, and start reading this story! It makes me so happy, and sad and angry and ugh... It's like a really good tv-show ^__^ Or the best book ever, I dunno! I haven't reviewed the sequel, but I am going to do it, because this story, and the sequel, are so FANTAMAZING, that they deserve every review in the world < 3
Date: 08/21/12 12:50 am Title: Chapter 69 - The End...?
i think i found them all, but if i find more during the million more times i read this i'll let you know ^^
Date: 08/21/12 12:48 am Title: Chapter 61 - A Night to Remember
right after geo shows bill the ring he says
“I’m so scared Tom. What if she says no?”
then tom walks into the room
Date: 08/21/12 12:47 am Title: Chapter 57 - On the Road Again...
“Oof!” Tom responded and lightly rubbed his stomach. Bill’s punch didn’t even register on Tom’s rock hard abs, but Tom pretended so Bill felt justified. Tom giggled at his silly boyfriend.
isn't it saposed to be bill giggling ?
Date: 08/05/12 08:07 am Title: Chapter 44 - The Day Bill Could Finally Breathe Again
*flops down*
Man, my logic knew that it just -had- to end well, with Andreas going to jail, but the whole thing was stressful regardless.
It's 5am here now, so I'll read the rest tomorrow!
Date: 08/05/12 07:46 am Title: Chapter 42 - Truth or Justice? (Part 3)
Lol, honestly, I gotta agree with Jazmyne. It feels like I'm watching one of those court scenes in a movie!
I was biting my knuckles during Bill's whole testimony.
And damn. Grant's obsession with the witnesses having romantic feelings with Bill or Andreas is just pathetic. He's looking like a cartoon character, that's how ridiculous it is.
Date: 08/05/12 05:26 am Title: Chapter 28 - Welcome to Divorce Court (part 2)
Au contraire, I thought this chapter was fascinating. I took Applied Liberal Mathmatics in college and they taught us (in a basic way) how to split assets after a divorce or regarding an inheritance. It was pretty interesting :)
Date: 08/05/12 04:43 am Title: Chapter 24 - Meeting Ms. Roth
Really excellent characterization of the lawyer :D
My parents had an incredibly messy divorce six years ago, and my father is *still* harassing us -.- So I know what it is to have one party digging in their heels and just trying to inflict as much emotional damage as possible.
Date: 08/03/12 03:23 am Title: Chapter 64 - The Wedding of His Life: Part 1
I read this story a while ago, when I didnt know how reviews were working and that you can actually get a conversation starting.
So, in order to be able to fully enjoy the sequel, Im reading this again.
I liked it the first time, but the second is even better.
The characters are very well done, the good and the bad ones. I like that you took time and developed all of them. I imagine it was a lot of work and I appreciate so much what you have done.
I do feel you went a little overboard, especially with the celebrity guests at the wedding, but finally I went with the flow and I enjoyed myself.
The best part of this story, except that it was very well built and had a very good rythm and they all had to pass some bad times before the good ones, was that all the vilains got punished. Sometimes one dont see that in stories (and even worse in real life) so it was very welcomed.
My favourite part was how Audra kicked Andreas butt protecting her Bill!!!
So thank you for this wonderful and long story and I only hope the sequel will be long enough for my taste.
Oh, and the chapters notes are awesome, especially the pictures. I love that in a story, when you share this too...
Date: 07/31/12 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 69 - The End...?
Okay, it has taken me three very long days to read this all. It was amazing. Toward the beginningyou were using waaay too many exclamation points but that seemed to sort itself out as the story moved on. I loved it and I can't wait to head over to the sequel.
I do feel the need to note that Jessica (the hired lawyer) didn't seem to do too much for the trial against Andreas.
And also, here toward the end you mentioned something about not being this happy since they were born and their grandma took them to 5isney, but earlier when Tom and Bill were in Paris you said Bill had never been to either Disney...
Any way, considering this is 69 chapters long, and those were the only issues I caught. Amazing.
Date: 07/30/12 12:55 am Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning
oh not a problem. i shall repeat, never be insecure. and feed me more! hehehehe can't wait for more :P
Date: 06/01/12 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 69 - The End...?
...... -head explodes rather dramatically- morrrrrre! please? pretty please with cherries on top? PLEASE!? loved it, absolutely fantastic.
Author's Response: More on the way!
Date: 05/24/12 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 62 - One Very Sexy Night
never be insecure in your writing! absolutely fabulous! -giggles- loving everything!
Author's Response: Oh thank you ! Glad you like my writing style!
Date: 05/17/12 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Did you ever really love me?
Thoughts on Andreas...: the word asshat comes to mind but... that's too kind! should have let Audra gut him like a deer!
Date: 05/16/12 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 23 - “Persistent little bastard isn’t he?”
oh dear lord you must know me! Audra seems suspiciously like me.. what with the "I'll cut your throat" comments... hehe i love her :)
Date: 05/16/12 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Now what?
so... i'm hooked! this is wonderful! hehehe Bill! >:)
Date: 05/02/12 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 69 - The End...?
:o yes! Sequel! Where Andreas gets put in a coma or something!
Love how you finished on chapter 69 btw!
I've been following this story for aaaggeessss and it only gets better :) I love how you've put pictures at the end too :D
Author's Response: Thank you! I like pictures! They help you visualize the story a bit better. Glad you like the pictures!
Date: 04/27/12 08:26 am Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning
I had been tracking your story since forever but then you came in with a surprise of Andreas jailbreak! Gosh I'm pissed and ecstatic as well, Please do the sequel....BTW your story is very informative and I don"t have to elaborate what it is but you really give me a lot of ideas on how the situation goes in reality. Thank you for sharing. The sequel pls. I'll keep on track....goodluck!
Author's Response: That's just the reaction I was looking for! Sequel is up now. Enjoy!
Date: 04/25/12 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 69 - The End...?
God god god, Noooooooooo! Fucking Andreas >__< shiiit! Is this the end? I'm gonna explode!
Author's Response: Hang in there! The sequel will complete it for you! Stay tuned!