Date: 08/30/13 08:53 pm Title: II: ... It Was Meant to Be.
Wonderful beautiful perfect story! Loved it! Loved it Loved it!
Date: 12/13/10 11:56 pm Title: II: ... It Was Meant to Be.
oww *0* precious, excellent!
Author's Response: So sorry for this very, very, very late reply, but I just wanted to express my gratitude. Thanks so much for reading! :)
Date: 09/10/10 09:32 pm Title: II: ... It Was Meant to Be.
I'm so glad you wrote an happy ending, I can't really stand unhappy ones regarding the twins...
I LOVED the ending, such a good idea to finish it with young and adorable twins discovering they were each others special person!
I'm glad everything worked out, I felt very bad for Bill... I like how the emotions Bill was going through matched the lyrics of his songs!
An other great story from you, I really enjoyed it :D
Author's Response: Yeah, me neither. I know it's bad, because life doesn't work that way always but... who cares. xD I'm so happy you liked the ending! I always felt it was too much, but now I'm happy~~~~ I love mini twins~~ ^--^ Thanks for reading and reviewing, you're so kind! =D~~~~ ♥
Date: 09/10/10 06:24 pm Title: I: It's As If...
I decided to check this one out too!
Omg, young twins are the most adorable thing ever! I’ve always loved story where you can see them at different ages and follow their evolution so I really like how this fic is written! I just love how protective Tom is in the beginning when Bill is hurt, it’s so cute! Reading the next part now!
Thanks for responding to my Dsquared question btw! I must say that I agree, those outfit were quite ridiculous... lol
Author's Response: =0 *gaspZ* i'm very happy you did! Another older piece. ^///^ Protective Tomi is my favourite. He shows up a lot. =3
Yes, the concert outfits... I can't even really look at Bill directly during clips from the DVD. So I don't don't. And I hate that. D:< Heh.
Thanks for reading! *hug*
Date: 09/06/10 01:45 am Title: II: ... It Was Meant to Be.
....that was just too cute. >,< Tooo too cute. That was the absolute CUTEST little!Tomi Bill I've ever read...
Eeek!! I'm reaaally excited to see what you will write for our story now!!! :D :D :D
Author's Response: I don't know what it was (previously) that tipped me off that this might be you, but aha - success! xD Hello there!
Eeee~ I'm glad you find them cute! I thought so too. :3 I just love mini twins, I must write them more often.
I'm excited too! I must pull through~ ò.ó Work hard, Lore! Anyhow, thanks for reading and reviewing! ^---^
Date: 09/01/10 02:40 am Title: I: It's As If...
Oh, and the words you use, you're like a thesaurus and it's beautiful.
And the weather that shadows the actions in your fic...
And the little twin quirks "red juice" and "round" breakfast, lmao, so cute that those little behaviors stuck around past their youth.
And the realistic way they fight..
And Bill's monologues...
And Tom's brotherlyness...
And the way they know what the other is thinking, but not always, cuz of their own clouded judgement...
...It was all so good that I had to leave another review pointing out more LOVE moments from your fic.
This fic is severely under-apprecieted, I hope you know that.
I'm just trying to show appropriate appreciation here. lol.
Yup.
Ok, bye now. :)
Author's Response: Haha, it wouldn't be the first time someone has pointed out my extensive vocabulary use. xD Though, to me, it's a compliment to be called a thesaurus, so thanks! :D Goodness, thanks for pointing out your favourite things! Uwaaa~~ I didn't think it was that good at all. Haha I felt I was lucky to receive what reviews I did, and I still am. Now I'm more so, with your kind reviews. Thanks! ^---^
Date: 09/01/10 02:29 am Title: II: ... It Was Meant to Be.
Wow, like totally WOW. That was definitely the most awesome fic I've read in months.
Gosh, there's so much I want to say about this story....
The way you weave their younger selves in with the older selves, and it fits so well, and every little sentence tells such a story. You said at the beginning that some parts may appear to be useless, but that's so far from the truth. It was beautiful. Every part of it. You describe everything so well, and it sucks you in and you can feel everything the twins are going thru. And it's so real, it's eerie. Your characters feel like real people with multi-dimensional feelings and attitudes. Esp your younger twins, who act every bit their age, yet show a lifetime of meaning with their little words and whimsical interactions.
This was unique. *sigh*
The scene where Bill finally tells Tom and Tom hits him... the drama! the angst!!-that deserves to be in a movie. SOMEONE needs to make this story into a movie because it's so well written. Nothing is out of place, everything contributes to the story, and the plot comes round full circle so well.
I hope this is a genre you'll write more of. Twincest-related is my fav and you've just become one of my fav authors.
You're very talented and this story deserves a trillion more reviews I think. I absolutely LOVE that it was so long and the build-up moved along nice and slow.
Ok, I could keep talking for another hour... lol. I'll shut up.
Just, well done. :)
Author's Response: *Taken aback* It's so awesome to receive such an amazing comment on a fic that's bee long completed. It's so wonderful, really. You've really thoroughly read this story, I'm impressed and honoured.
Haha I giggled aloud with your 'the drama-the angst!' xD I actually had the same thoughts. Afterward I thought it was all too silly, over dramatic maybe, but it was sure a lot of fun to write. A movie!? Oh my! XD Don't say such things, it's certainly not that good, but your enthusiasm is too sweet! I may touch on this genre in the future, since I most definitely did enjoy writing it. Twincest - related is my favourite too, however I'm not so talented with related stories, not like some other truly amazing authors on this site. (I tend to dip into AU more often than not.) I'll try in the future to bring out more and work harder to improve!
Thank you very, very much for your thorough and kind review. It's been such a pleasure, and your support has not gone unappreciated! ♥
Date: 09/01/10 12:54 am Title: I: It's As If...
OMG, it most certainly was NOT crappy. I've fallen in love with this story, and now I'm only sad I didn't start reading it sooner. The effortless and childlike quality of your "mini" twins is touching, and your big twins are so real. Gosh, everything feels like its right in your face. I really hope you don't make me cry with this fic, cuz with your writing caliber I'm sure you'd have no trouble doing so. I'm so glad I've discovered you as a writer, you're amazing.
On the the next part- AHHHHHH!!!!! XD
Author's Response: It's been a while since I posted this story, I appreciate your new review on it! I hope I didn't make you cry either. Though, thankfully for this fic, no one has claimed to have cried yet, I don't think. O.o
I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and thought that it was something special! Goodness, your praise is too high, but thank you. *bow* ♥ Gee, too nice of you.
Date: 06/08/10 07:37 pm Title: II: ... It Was Meant to Be.
that was so CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Why, thank you. =)
Date: 05/30/10 09:50 am Title: II: ... It Was Meant to Be.
I love this..well done,its amazing and very well written + i cant wait for your next story x
Author's Response: Thank you very, very much! ♥ I'm happy you liked it.
Date: 05/28/10 04:57 pm Title: I: It's As If...
I absolutely loved this story! It seemed pretty realistic. And, I'm glad there was a happy ending, but if it was an unhappy ending, it still would've been awesome. :D
Author's Response: Oh, I'm ecstatic you liked it. Makes me happy, when I'm told my stories are enjoyed. Thanks for your review darling!
Date: 05/27/10 12:10 pm Title: II: ... It Was Meant to Be.
I'm glad you didn't write unhappy ending:) I'm so into happy endings like this one, and I'm even more into sequels, so please, write one:D
Author's Response: It's funny you say sequel, because I was writing this one-shot this past week I almost made into a squeal. After a lot of thinking, I kept writing it as something separate, but now you have me thinking... We'll see. I don't know. Squeals, I don't know if I have strong enough ideas for a squeal! Haha, anyways, my deepest gratitude, thank you for reading. I'm very happy you enjoyed it.
Date: 05/10/10 12:59 am Title: II: ... It Was Meant to Be.
Aw the fighting in the rain. Blood, shoving. So angry yet so freaking awesome. And yup, I did read your review on The Bartenders :) Thanks so much for the support, and here I am supporting you! Hehe. Really good stuff.
Author's Response: Thanks once again for reading, I wholeheartedly appreciate it, truly. *big hugs*rn
Date: 05/06/10 03:35 am Title: II: ... It Was Meant to Be.
i'm so glad you did not make this an unhappy ending. that would have been too heartbreaking. bill's pain was so real, if it ended unhappily i would have been so sad. i loved the surprise the tom was pissed because it took bill so long tell him, not because he loved him. great job! =)
Author's Response: *giggles* I'm a total sap, I have too many soft bones in my body to have turned this into something terribly unhappy. (Though, I try. xD) Thanks for reading so much darling! I enjoyed your reviews, incredibly sweet. ^--^
Date: 05/06/10 03:11 am Title: I: It's As If...
th =e mini twins were very cute. this is great so far, i love it. i'm glad the next part is already posted.
Author's Response: Mini twins! ♥ ^---^ - And I'm glad you're reading~
Date: 05/05/10 06:49 pm Title: II: ... It Was Meant to Be.
Ok so that whole thing was absolutly beautiful and I'm tearing up needlessly. Very emotional, well done!
Author's Response: Ah? You really found it emotional? If it has touched you deeply, I'm overwhelmed with a sense of accomplishment. Thank you for reading, so very much.
Date: 05/05/10 03:57 pm Title: II: ... It Was Meant to Be.
Awwww, that was the perfect way to end this. They came full circle from that moment and I, for one, I'm very happy for the happy ending. (I'm not too fond of unhappy endings, we get enough of those in RL). This is just what I needed after the last couple of days I've had, so many thanks for this.
I really hope things get better for you!
*hugs*
Mari
Author's Response: *puffs out breath* Yeah, you're right; life is full of unhappy endings, indulging in fantasy now and again keeps one balanced. It sounds like we both had some rough times these past couple days. If I helped any, you're more than welcome, it's my pleasure. Keep smiling, Mari. Thanks for reading, as always, love. ♥
Date: 05/05/10 12:46 pm Title: II: ... It Was Meant to Be.
Life would be so much easier if Tom could remain a heartless jerk his entire life. That way, Bill wouldn’t be pinballing all over the place clandestinely.
“Why, can’t you just let me hate you instead...”
I think that just about summarizes Bill's plight. If Tom could be a jerk all the time, he wouldn't be fighting the feelings he has for Tom.
However, it quickly morphed into something sounding much more like ‘Grow up, you don’t love him like you think you do. It doesn’t exist, it doesn’t exist, it’s a phase.’
“What if I said I couldn’t spend another fucking day keeping it to myself, and what if I told you I don’t think I could deal with it anymore? It really hurts, Tom! It’s messing me up, it’s messing me up so bad...”
“You’re right, Bill.” Tom said at last, the look in his eyes hardening, “You’re sick, twisted and selfish.”
My heart is breaking for Bill at this point, it took so much for him to say it and to get that answer, must have crushed him. *sighs*
“Do you know how long I’ve waited...? Do you know how fucking scared I was to lose you?” Bill narrowed his eyes, blinking past the quickening raindrops hitting his face. Tom was using a preterite.
“Why didn’t you tell me sooner?”
Damn! And now you threw me off a loop. *blinks* Double damn, I so wasn't expecting that. And I'll have to finish reading/reviewing once I come back. Just when it was getting even better.
Author's Response: Whaai~ ♥ ♥ ♥ Thanks for pointing those parts out. It's wonderful to see someone take the story seriously as you do. *makes squishy face happily*
Date: 04/26/10 06:49 pm Title: I: It's As If...
That would've been one loong one-shot. I loved this. No confusion between the time gaps at all, I get what's happening every step of the way. Can't wait for part 2
Author's Response: Goodness, I'm really honoured. I don't know if you read my final review on 'Bartenders', but yeah, I'm fond of your work! xD Oh jees, I'm a bit flustered. Now I'm exceptionally worried you won't like part 2 (I don't care for it, like I had part 1), but your reviewing my story means quite a bit to me. Thank you so very much, in any case.
Date: 04/26/10 03:16 pm Title: I: It's As If...
Awwww, I'm heartbroken for Bill. You made me feel so much for him, feel his pain over all the confusion his feelings for his brother bring him... and that kiss, damn good kiss, too, which could potentially change things between them, I suppose.
I especially loved the going back and forth between different times in their lives and how they went through them. How they are so connected in so many levels and in others, well, not much so, because of the different feelings running through them at the moment.
I'll be looking forward to more!
Mari
Author's Response: D: Poor Billa~~~ I always look forward to your amazing reviews, thank you for the awesome feedback. ^---^