Date: 04/26/10 07:40 am Title: third time's the charm
aaaaw. thats cute. ^___^
love it
Date: 04/26/10 03:46 am Title: third time's the charm
Hot, hot, HOT.
Author's Response: Glad to hear it! ;) Thank you!
Date: 04/26/10 03:46 am Title: third time's the charm
*_*
Author's Response: :D!
Date: 04/26/10 03:04 am Title: third time's the charm
That was beautiful and so fun to read. I love how they kept getting distracted and getting off the easy way. The language was rich and it flowed. I liked how you made their sex dialog more noises and sounds than anything else, and the words they did say were short and half-finished because they were so into it. That made it seem quite realistic.
One question: what was the concert that I sometimes see a clip of where Bill got down on his knees in front of Tom and Tom sort of thrust his crotch out at him? It was an outdoor concert in the middle of the day, and I think Bill was wearing red?
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, they're easily distractable. And I'm so glad it came across as realistic; at first I tried writing it with more extensive dirty talk, but I think they were just so lost in their first time with each other that they couldn't manage coherency!
As far as your question goes, I'm not sure I've ever seen that clip! I do have this one in my faves: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Keq06gldrgk That's Bill kneeling in front of Tom during Reden, but that's at an indoor concert. D: Now I really want to see the one you mentioned, though!
Date: 04/26/10 02:16 am Title: third time's the charm
aww, it's beautiful:')
Author's Response: Thank you! ♥
Date: 04/26/10 01:53 am Title: third time's the charm
This is officially my favorite fic on the site, every inch of it was beautiful bby.
Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. I had fun writing it, too. :)
Date: 04/26/10 01:02 am Title: third time's the charm
Aww, the twins were so adorable in this! I love it!
Author's Response: Thank you! They're a pair of cuties, for sure.
Date: 04/26/10 12:38 am Title: third time's the charm
awwwwwwwwwwww
Author's Response: ♥!