Date: 04/20/23 06:23 pm Title: third time's the charm
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 09/10/13 07:34 am Title: third time's the charm
That was really well done, it progressed so naturally nervous, never feeling forced. beautiful and so cute.
Date: 09/06/13 02:21 pm Title: third time's the charm
I think u know that this fic was basically just smut. Lol. And it was good. :) Very good. :)
That is all. XD lol
Date: 04/15/13 07:28 pm Title: third time's the charm
What a sweet, romantic story! Love it!
Date: 08/29/12 10:43 pm Title: third time's the charm
*Tears of amazement and joy*
I. Fucking. Love. You!
You're just so....
*Lost for words*
I want to hug you right now!♥
Date: 03/06/12 12:04 am Title: third time's the charm
Very well done. Lols, it was so cute how awkward they were with each other the first two times XD They were ready, but the time wasn't right. It wasn't... I dunno, natural enough. That's one thing that I've always found hard to figure out when I'm writing a smut-fic: When, exactly, does the smut start? 'Cause I usually write first-time, so it's always a little awkward... I've often wondered how people manage to make it NOT awkward, but reading this, seeing two awkward ones and one not-awkward one side by side really helped ^-^ Thanks =) Also, it was just good smut XD Awesome job, Kish-san ^-^
Date: 12/22/11 06:29 am Title: third time's the charm
And I love this.
Date: 11/07/11 09:40 pm Title: third time's the charm
This is the most gorgeous fluffy sex, of sexy fluff. Idk, but it was GORGEOUS. I'm all ohhhh and want to find myself a nice boyfriend/girlfriend who is like Tom's Bill or Bill's Tom in this fic :) My hearts is all fluttery now, I LOVED this (n_n)
Date: 12/17/10 12:24 am Title: third time's the charm
It's sweet and romantic. I love how they took their time that it wasn't about the destination it was about how they got there.
Date: 09/24/10 05:15 pm Title: third time's the charm
oh my god,i love it so much!
Date: 09/05/10 06:11 am Title: third time's the charm
cute, sweet, and sexy. lovely
Date: 08/23/10 10:05 pm Title: third time's the charm
Wow I loved that. I loved the nerves and the longing. I loved Tom's feelings towards Bill, how much he loved him and wanted to be near him. It was so sweet and when they finally got the nerve up to be together it was hot, sexy and so loving. I loved it! You are absolutely one of my favorite authors on this site.
Date: 06/29/10 04:03 am Title: third time's the charm
My GOD! If this isn't making love I honestly don't know what is. So freaking incredible and filled with love. This doesn't just feel like a PWP.
Their love is so evident and just so overwhelmingly there! This is not just sex, not just fucking, this is love. Thank you thank you thank you! Amazing.
Date: 05/02/10 10:20 am Title: third time's the charm
Lovely passion between the guys. Over and over you convey the tempestuous feelings they have for each other.
Good stuff :)
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Maria
Date: 04/27/10 05:26 pm Title: third time's the charm
Magnificent!
Date: 04/27/10 04:49 am Title: third time's the charm
Wow. That was...Intense. The temperature in my room went crazy hot. This is so sweet too, I love it. You can practically feel them loving each other *_*
Date: 04/26/10 07:29 pm Title: third time's the charm
Just gorgeous. *_*
Date: 04/26/10 03:37 pm Title: third time's the charm
this was amazing, i wish i could write a more constructive review b/c you obviously put a lot of time in to this but i don't know what to say, it was perfect, i liked that they tried to plan but that didn't really work out, it seemed more real and it was wonderful
Date: 04/26/10 02:52 pm Title: third time's the charm
Such a sweet, sexy love story! :]
Date: 04/26/10 10:11 am Title: third time's the charm
I've already read this but it's even more brilliant the second time... I really like the twins in this, so in love and in sync with each other. Beautiful.