Date: 04/01/12 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 5
Finishh this story ! Pleaseee!!! >.< Ahah I love it and Im dyingg to know what's gonnah happen nextt , pleaseee dont leave us hanging like thattt
Date: 07/09/11 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wait a second. I just read five beautiful chapters, enjoying myself peacefully, when suddenly the chapters stopped showing up. What now? When’s the next chapter? Because you can’t possibly stop it here! Your story is really good! I really like the plot and I really like your writing style. You HAVE to continue it!
Author's Response: Sorry about the huge hiatus. I had a lot of personal and family drama. I was working on getting things back on track when I forgot my laptop charger at a friends house memorial day weekend. I've been iPad only since then. Hopefully my charger gets here soon.
Date: 12/02/10 10:25 am Title: Chapter 5
I like where this story is going so far! And personally, I think Manzini should go after Andreas. I know that wasn't an option, but I think it would make an interesting plot twist
Date: 11/17/10 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 5
Now this is a bad cliff hanger I dunno how to answer that poll so I will keep it quite.
Date: 11/17/10 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 5
What i'm worrying about is who they have to fear the most: Andreas or Manzini.
Author's Response: That worries me too.
Date: 11/17/10 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 4
Bill isn't very clever.
Author's Response: But he totally thinks he is.
Date: 11/17/10 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 3
Yeah and there's going to same club with the same intention.
Date: 11/17/10 04:20 am Title: Chapter 5
i think bill. manzini had tom and is done with him, id like to think. plus, chasing bill would fuck with tom :) so that serves two manzini-ish purposes! oh by the way, i have...hopes...about this staying over the night. not nc17 hopes tho, probably too soon for that....
Date: 11/17/10 03:59 am Title: Chapter 4
ooooooooh that was so hot and tasty at the end there~!
Date: 11/17/10 02:50 am Title: Chapter 3
yayyyyyyy tigers eye sexy time!!! lol reminds me of Tiger Heat, the gay club i like to go to :3 good place to dance and watch gay boys makeoutt
Author's Response: I tend to go to S4 here in Dallas. Your reviews make me have the giggles.
Date: 11/17/10 01:51 am Title: Chapter 2
i like this...:)
Author's Response: Yay!
Date: 11/17/10 01:20 am Title: Chapter 1
ooh sexy. naughty bill and horny tom, just how i like them. with a bit of kink for the teacher student dynamic
Author's Response: Haha thanks. Chapter six should be up this weekend. Misa Sugar lit a fire under me.
Date: 11/16/10 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
XD Awesome! I posted a link to this on my new chapter of my fic Seduce Me, Resist Me, so I hope it helps get this a bit more well-deserved attention. :3
Author's Response: I legit thought I was going to cry when I read this. You honestly have no idea how touching this is.
Date: 11/16/10 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 5
Okay, so I just read this.
I like to consider myself something of a connoisseur of teacher/student fics on THF, which is a fancy way of saying I'm obsessed with them and hunt them down and read and re-read them because I have no life. :3
I have to say this is definitely one of the better ones I've read. The storyline is more than 'Bill is a horny student who wants to fuck his teacher', although it seems that way at first, you have so much more going on in it. The original characters add to the story rather than dragging it down, as is apt to happen with some fics. I really like Bill's issues with Dmitri and Andreas, and how they help both make up his character and create tension in the story. It's also cool that Tom's friends own a psychic supplies shop, because of the way you've written it, it doesn't seem like that was thrown in there just to be cool, it's just part of the story.
It's just a really cool story with complexity beyond the average teacher/student smut fic, and I really appreciate that. (Though I wouldn't say no to a little teacher/student smut either ;D)
So you should totally update this soon. :3
Manzini should woo Bill more, because then Tom has more inner conflict. Should he fight to save Bill from Manzini's clutches? Should he try to ignore it and keep Bill as just a student? It could make for some lovely inner ~DRAMAZ~. XD
Author's Response: AH thank you so much. I've been trying to get back to working on this story, but I've had serious massive family drama. One step brother went off his meds and joined scientology the other is trying to deal drugs while on probation and my mom is divorcing their dad atm. I should be able to get something posted this weekend since my boyfriend is going home for thanksgiving. rnrnTotally agree Manzini is gonna cause so much DRAMA. He absolutely will go after Bill to mess with Tom.
Date: 07/10/10 09:22 am Title: Chapter 5
I want Manzini to go after Tom!! :D Bill always gets guys going after him, so I think it'll be a nice change for Tom to get a guy going after him for once :D
Date: 06/26/10 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 5
wow. Brilliantly written.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 06/25/10 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nice. I like it so far. Onto the next chapter!