Date: 05/12/10 06:07 am Title: Unleashed
Omg this is so automatic I just adore it lol I loved the waffle maker part lol ^.^
Author's Response: Tom and his waffle maker...I just had to use it....
Date: 05/10/10 01:24 pm Title: Never judge a man
Aw Tom, my heart is melting :) I would just eat him up, lol
Author's Response: me too me tooooooo
Date: 05/09/10 09:41 pm Title: Worth waiting for
AWWWWW!!!! ^_^
Date: 05/09/10 01:09 pm Title: Speechless
Okay, Chapter 11 is one of the best things I've ever read. It's amazingly erotic, it's poignant, and that scene with Tom playing the guitar....OMFG! My breathing was actually effected. I would have given ANYTHING to be a fly on the wall, watching him play. A very perverted, voyeuristic fly....Excellent work on this chapter. I really mean it. Now, to read the subsequent chapters....
Author's Response: *blush* thank you :) rnI would want to be a fly on that wall too....come to think of it, I want to be Elle in this scene haha
Date: 05/09/10 02:48 am Title: Please...
Wow, that was hot and woah. These boys know what their doing. Question? Is it me or did neither of them use protection. I'm gonna go read the last few chaps again, they are just that hot.
Author's Response: thank you...in my mind, they definitely know what they're doing haha ;)rnrnin regards to protection, to me if just breaks the flow of what I'm writing. In my head, they are on the pill and they are consenting adults who took a risk...
Date: 05/09/10 01:32 am Title: Please...
Let me tell you, every time I read a new chapter of this story, it seems to be getting hotter and hotter! Woohoo! Hahahaha keep going! You're doing an awesome job! :)
And to all my peeps out there who aren't reading this story: Where are you?! You're missing out on a hella lot of hotness! Your loss!
Author's Response: awwwwww THANK YOU!!!!!! appreciate the kind words :) xxxx
Date: 05/07/10 07:41 pm Title: Speechless
Oh.. My.. Gott..
I love it!
Helena and Bill's relationship just sucks you in and Elle and Tom... *swoon*
Author's Response: hehe I feel like a kid at xmas when I log in and see new comments, thank you muchly :)rnI'm waffling between who has my heart at the moment....I go from Bill to Tom and can't decide hehe
Date: 05/07/10 12:04 pm Title: Oh no you don't!
^_^ Love it.
Date: 05/07/10 07:04 am Title: Too much baggage
hey i really like your story,it's quite interesting,hope you update soon:D
Date: 05/06/10 09:43 pm Title: Speechless
New reader:) that was absolutely amazing. Tom and Ellie's part was amazing and beautiful based on how it started u gave us the impression it was just gonna be raunchy sex but it turned out to be absolutely beautiful. Almost made me cry.
Bill is so sweet I hope she tells him her story and she takes a chance.
Wonderful story, I can't wait for next chap I'm totally hooked.
Author's Response: thank you :) I didn't want it to be predictable. Plus it adds to where I'm taking the story ;)rnI'm totally in love with the Bill in my story. That's how I picture him in real life...a girl can dream hehe
Date: 05/06/10 07:21 pm Title: Speechless
Damn...I like the different POV.
Author's Response: thank you thank you :)
Date: 05/06/10 06:50 pm Title: Key to freedom
lol I was constantly giggling through this whole chapter. ^_^
Date: 05/06/10 06:38 pm Title: Breathe
I absolutely love Elle. ^_^ She reminds me of....me. I would have done the same exact things. lol
Date: 05/06/10 06:33 pm Title: Good text.
Hehe. "40 hours without food is worse than 40 days without a man". I'm not sure it's worse, but it's something close. lol I love this.
Date: 05/06/10 06:28 pm Title: NY screwed me!
I like the way you do this story. And I dig Elle so far. ^_^
I thought I'd comment cuz..well...I can.
Date: 05/05/10 04:00 pm Title: Too much baggage
I like where this story is going. :)
Author's Response: Thank you muchly...rnrnmore to come soon :)
Date: 04/26/10 11:43 pm Title: Good text.
This is such a cute story! It's very good so far! I hope you decide to continue with it :)
Looking forward to more... Good luck!
Author's Response: Thank you :) I've already written heaps more, pacing myself to an update a day lol
Date: 04/25/10 10:24 am Title: No, thank you...
Awww! I think it's pretty cute so far!
Update?
:D
Author's Response: Thank you sweetiejay :) appreciate the comment x