Date: 07/18/10 12:18 am Title: Chapter 1
I hated that cocky bitch. I wish they would have just tossed her off the moving bus. "They both want me and i'd let them share because i'm just that fucking awesome." Um no... Okay now that I've got that out of my system it was great. I loved that they all faked surprise when she woke up screaming. Great job as always.
Date: 04/25/10 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
HAHAHAHAHAH OMG THIS WAS EPIC! hahhahahahahahahahah i'm glad i read this one :DD
Date: 04/25/10 07:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Mean little boys! *s*
Clever cover up though
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Maria
Date: 04/24/10 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
lmao stupid bitch
Date: 04/24/10 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
You're very welcome ;)
Date: 04/24/10 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well, here I am.. =) I really liked it actually.. And that girl just got what she deserved, she just wanted tom for his 'famousness' anyway! :p you really are a good writer =) x
Author's Response: Thankies. ^-^
I'm glad you liked it haha.
Date: 04/24/10 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
bahaha, i really liked this one (:
It found it amusing how she thought that the brothers were going to fight over her love, when in reality, neither of them really wanted her around [except for the 'cover-up' thing xD]
Tom was pretty clever in putting her on the couch and acting like nothing happened, such a smart boy :DD
*faving*
----Samantha (:
Date: 04/24/10 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
I couldn't help chuckling when I read the part when she thought the twins were fighting over her , and when she walked in on them I was like " I SAW that coming " . Still , it didn't stop me from laughing out lout and earn a nasty scold from my Mother ( it was 1.40 in my country ) .
Anyway , great job .
Author's Response: Hahaha, thank you. I love making the girl annoying to the point where you want to shoot her.