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Reviewer: THforalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/10 05:35 am Title: A New Home

OMG! I LOVE THIS STORY

Author's Response: Thanks!!!

Reviewer: sarahyellow Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/10 04:27 am Title: A New Home

I like how you made Bill so nice and trying to help the skittish Tom , but he still couldn't break the slave habits that had been taught to him.

I wonder why Bill doesn't just go to the police? Maybe he doesn't want his dad to go to jail, or maybe he knows Tom can't live independently? You should give a reason for that eventually, to fill in the logic gap.

And that's weird, why the hell is Tom always wearing gloves? I want to know now,

Author's Response: Thanks...and I do plan to explain the logic gap eventually, at the moment I'm just trying to get them acquainted and the current plan is for it to be explained after they get to know each other and Tom trusts him enough to asks questions...or when Bill's dad screws up, whichever my brain decides.rnrnAnd yeah, the glove thing bugs me, I searched it on every search engine I could think of and there's no answer...

Reviewer: anklebiter Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/10 04:08 am Title: Number 484

Got to love the Pear of Torture.

Author's Response: Yep, I've got a bunch of books on torture devices and this one just seemed perfect.

Reviewer: Levanna Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/10 03:09 am Title: A New Home

First I Luv ur story and please keep updating. :D And second thats what I was wondering!!! About the whole glove thingy. Bill also wears white gloves too. Its kind of "creepy".

Author's Response: Thank you, i'm glad you like it and the story will be updated soon. On the gloves, I'm used to Bill's ever-changing, odd style...but Tom's gloves just kind of stick out...

Reviewer: Felicia08 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/25/10 03:02 am Title: A New Home

Aww poor Tom! I want to hug him! And give me more now!

The glove thing with Tom. I don't know he had them in sweden too I think. I don't remember. But yeah he wears them alot.

Author's Response: I'll update as soon as I can.rnrnAnd yeah...they don't really bug me, just the fact that he went from never wearing them almost always wearing them...

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/10 01:37 am Title: A New Home

*picks up from last review* OH MY GOD! that is horrible! how could anyone do that? I never heard of that till now. goes to show ya learn something knew each day. :}

Bills so nice.

and the pic Hes taking Bills hand covering style for a ride?  



Author's Response: Yeah...torture devices can get even worse than that...I guess I'm a bit sadistic on that point. Being a history geek I know alot more about that stuff than most...dunno if that's a good thing or not. =)rnrnAnd yeah, I had to have someone be nice to Tom. I'm always so mean to him in my stories...rnrnrnpic: maybe he is, I don't know, it's be nice if some interviewer would ask...

Reviewer: love-is-death Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/10 12:50 am Title: A New Home

i am loving this story so far! i hope you update again soon.. please?? as for the picture and your question to it i have no idea but you have to admit he looks cute lol.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoy the story. And Tom will always be cute...even if he wore girls clothes...hmmm, that's an idea =D

Reviewer: ReadyxSetxGoxTHx13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/10 12:45 am Title: A New Home

YAY it's bill....poor tomi though being abused like that....but bill is nice so yeah....bill should get rid of that cage though and let Tom sleep on a bed....that's a very good question why dies Tom wear gloves in public now? Maybe his hands get really cold and the gloves are to keep them warm....or he has invisible hands and he wears gloves to make it look like he has hands....:)

Author's Response: Bill might get rid of the cage...but he's wanting to Tom to trust him first...I googled and binged the glove thing and found nothing...the invisible hand thing is funny though =D

Reviewer: musicmaniac Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/10 12:13 am Title: A New Home

Love this chapter and I'm glad youbintroduced Bill.

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: frida_kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/10 11:53 pm Title: A New Home

cant wait for the next chapter :]

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: BreatH_of_BlisS Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/10 10:20 pm Title: A New Home

I have no idea about the glove thing. Bill's been wearing white gloves and not the kind that he usually does. The twins also started wearing scarfs around their face - Michael Jackson anyone?

Author's Response: That's exactly what I thought when I saw the scarves and gloves! Are they that germophobic or what? Wish someone would ask in an interview...

Reviewer: Atlantis Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/10 09:47 pm Title: A New Home

So glad Bill is being nice to Tom.

Now I'm afraid Gordon is going to come and take Tom away from Bill.

Looking forward to next chapter! :]

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it and that's not a bad idea...but we'll just have to see.

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/10 05:11 pm Title: Number 484

Oh i cant wait for more and that pear thingy is just down right creepeh. 

Author's Response: Thanks! And I know right? Sad thing is, is that's not the worst torture device. One I found that was worst was called the Bronze Bull. Basically it was created as an art piece but the king tricked the maker into the belly of the bull so he could see how well the horns sounded (you blew on a horn to make a bull sound). The king then set a fire underneath it. The person inside burned alive and theeir screaming made the statue sound like a bull in heat because of the horns.

Reviewer: goddesslala Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/10 02:56 pm Title: Number 484

mmmk so the little one is tom... nice... didnt see that comming... good job. im very interested to see where this fic goes... so please update as time alows...

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it and I'm currently working on the third chapter now, so it should be up soon.

Reviewer: goddesslala Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/10 02:43 pm Title: Darkness

liked the first chap... good writing... and i think its bill and the other is tom... only tom may be older in this... ima read the next chap now.

Author's Response: Lol...thanks

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/10 04:55 am Title: Number 484

oh wow, this is getting good hun! i hope Bill bought Tom. if not, i hope it was someone who wanted to buy Tom for Bill to own~ love ya babe!

Author's Response: Thanks...and you'll just have to wait and see... love ya too!

Reviewer: sarahyellow Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/10 02:54 am Title: Number 484

It's not the most eloquently written story, but I'm interested in the plot. I see in the summary that the only pairing is Bill/Tom. So I guess Bill just paid one million big ones for Tomi. Can't wait to see waht happens there.

Author's Response: Yeah...hopefully the story will flow better once it actually gets started...that's the plan anyway. And maybe it was Bill...maybe not...you'll just have to wait and see =)

Reviewer: ReadyxSetxGoxTHx13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/23/10 07:55 pm Title: Number 484

Oh......well I was wrong but it was very clever how you decieved us all.... Tomi was auctionedhopefully it is to bill and bill is at least a little bit nice to him....

Author's Response: I do try to be clever...sometimes I succeed =) Honestly I was surprised I was able to deceive so many...and you'll just have to be patient to see who bought him...

Reviewer: Haleema Kaaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/23/10 07:36 pm Title: Number 484

Ahaha number 483! And Poor Tom! I hope whoever bought him isn't too horrible to him!!

Author's Response: 484 actually...just to poke fun at 483...and on his owner, you'll just have to wait and see... =)

Reviewer: Atlantis Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/23/10 06:25 pm Title: Number 484

Is the person who bought Tom, Bill??

Looking forward to more. :]

Author's Response: I'm not gonna tell...you'll just have to be patient and see =) I promise not to make you wait too, too long

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