Date: 05/05/10 08:08 am Title: Darkness
im glad you feel better! do you have yahoo... or msn? if so id like to be friends, if you could use anouther. im lacey
Author's Response: Me too. I have a yahoo, my screenname is the same it is on here and my real name is Bonnie. I also have a facebook and livejournal.
Date: 05/04/10 03:25 pm Title: A Chip
Awww poor kid :( I want more!
Author's Response: I'll update as soon as I can. I hav to clean the apartment tomorrow and then take my last final exam on Thursday before heading home, so I may not get to work on it until this weekend, but you shouldn't have to wait too long
Date: 05/04/10 03:13 pm Title: A Chip
awww poor Tomi! I feel so bad for the poor thing. Least I get why Bill totally snapped on him earlier.
Author's Response: I'm glad I managed to clear that up...and yeah, Tom is a pathetic little thing isn't he?
Date: 05/04/10 02:49 pm Title: A Chip
great last two chaps... i hadnt been able to coment the last before my computar died... but they were great... im still a bit confussed but im trying to follow you... like tom sleeping with bill... dont like the idea of a chip in tomi's head though... but i understand if its important to the story... kudos... more as soon as time alows and i hope you feel better soon.
Author's Response: Thanks and the reason he's sleeping with Bill is because Bill's trying to show him not everything is about sex, that's why I had Tom so confused about the situation. Um...as for a chip being in Tom's head, I can't really explain more without giving away something. But whatever else you're confused on, just let me know and I'll try to explain. And thanks, I honestly already feel a bit better, my Uni's health center gave me so many meds I can't feel a thing =)
Date: 05/04/10 02:47 pm Title: A Chip
Tom you're safe with Bill!!! Get it! D:
Author's Response: Wow...not sure what to say to that...
Date: 05/04/10 04:24 am Title: A Chip
i loved it and understood very well. i hope you feel better babe. then ill be begging you for more of this tasty story. love you!
Author's Response: Thanks...I already feel a little better, if I could just breathe through both nostrils...ugh, anyways...I'll update as soon as I can, promise! Love you too.
Date: 05/04/10 02:21 am Title: A Chip
Poor Tom! Lost without his cage.
I was a bit scared Georg would try and have his way with Tom while Bill was out since Tom's just a slave and all.
Glad he didn't! :]
I'm guessing slavery is legal or, if it's not, everyone just turns a blind eye to it and doesn't do anything to stop it.
Love this! Can't wait for more! *hugs fellow allergy sufferer*
Author's Response: I had to have something semi-funny in there and the cage presented the perfect opportunity. And to be honest, I thought about having Georg try, but then I decided against, I figured it'd be too mean too soon...and slavery isn't legal, the cops try to stop it, but it's kind of like prostitution, they can't catch them all. And I'm glad you love it *hugs back*
Date: 05/04/10 01:56 am Title: A Chip
awwww...Tom's on his way to normalcy.
Author's Response: Possibly... =)
Date: 05/04/10 12:47 am Title: A Chip
This story is amazing, and I love it! This chapter was great and explained a lot!! Fantastic job!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really glad you love it.
Date: 05/04/10 12:42 am Title: A Chip
Ah I love how Gustav is so intellectual. It was like he didn't even need to think about what he was saying and it still all came out perfect. I know it kind of seems mean but I like how confused Tom is about everything, it does make him seem like a child and it's kind of cute.
Author's Response: Thanks. I had to have one really smart person, I couldn't help it. And I always end up being so mean to Tom in my stories, I don't why, but others seem to like it, so yeah, thanks again!
Date: 05/03/10 11:06 pm Title: A Chip
OMG... This is really good... Keep writing...and u explained things pretty well..Well hope u feel better and good luck on ur finals!!! :]
Author's Response: Thanks...on all of that. My University's health center gave me a bunch of meds...so I should be good in a day or two...it's all this damn pollen...but yeah, I'm glad you like it and I'll update as soon as I can.
Date: 05/01/10 05:29 pm Title: Where's Perry?
awwww Tom's so cute!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it. And thanks for reviewing the chapters.
Date: 05/01/10 05:17 pm Title: A New Home
Im glad you didn't wait until the next chapter to bring bill in. i feel so bad for poor Tom.
and as for the gloves i have no idea. mamybe he now has some weird phobia to touching people like that guy from the show deal or no deal XD
Date: 05/01/10 04:50 pm Title: Darkness
im guessing the kid is bill xD i have no idea, am i just that lame xDD but good chapter! im off to read the next now hehe
Date: 04/28/10 02:04 am Title: Where's Perry?
awwwwwwwwwwww, i hope Tom trusts Bill again, maybe a bit easier than before, poor thing...
Author's Response: Yeah, I couldn't help it, I had to cause some kind of drama =)
Date: 04/27/10 05:32 pm Title: Where's Perry?
Hey! I do that too. Make layouts of the rooms and buildings in my fics, that is.
I think that if Tom were really trained the way you say he was, then his instilled desire to obey and please would override any hesitations he may have about not eating or taking care of himself. Just a thought.
Author's Response: Lol, glad I'm not the only one who does that.
And I thought about doing that actually (making his training kick in) but then I thought I'd make it more of a difficult problem, like it's not just his training, but also some psych damage due to the methods of the training...if that makes any sense.
Date: 04/27/10 12:49 pm Title: A New Home
Everyone seems to want to know about those mysterious black gloves. Well, written story so far.
Author's Response: I have a couple of theories, but the truth would be nice. And thank you.
Date: 04/27/10 11:55 am Title: A New Home
one girls said that she thought he had H1N1, but I really doubt that is the case cuz I doupt he would be public.
Maybe he is trying a new style, maybe he is wearing those glowes with cream inside for his hands (cuz he playes guitar). Im shure it is all good.
Great stry! love the way you made Bill nice!
Author's Response: That goes with one of my theories about he's wearing them to protect his hands, which I've heard musicians (though usually orchestra musicians) do after taking out an insurance policy on their hands.
Thank you, I'm glad you like it.