Reviews For Waking in Darkness
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Reviewer: Shibby Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/10 11:40 pm Title: Watermelon Jello

The image of Bill and Tom covered in jello made me giggle1 :]

Excellent!

More soon!

Author's Response: Posting it now actually. And I must give all credit of the jello to goddesslala

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/10 11:38 pm Title: Darkness

yeah. you can ask for help on math and core subjects other than that good luck getting anything else out of her. makes you want to hit you head on a wall

Author's Response: Lol...I'm sorry.

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/10 11:02 pm Title: Darkness

trust me i know one person who is worse. she's smart but school text book smart only....it's pretty bad she's also little miss sunshine there's nothing wrong with the world XP

Author's Response: Wow...no common sense and wears rose-colored glasses? Wow...

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/10 10:51 pm Title: Watermelon Jello

I love how Tom is so child like but he isn't at the same time!

Author's Response: Thank you. I took bits of his somewhat "childlike" personality from extremely naive and sheltered people I know personally (although none of them are that bad).

Reviewer: xXfaithXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/10 04:27 pm Title: Breakfast with G

heya! =) *smile*
great chapter...well done over 3000 words! im proud of yah lol
*offers skittles*
i know patience is a virtue but could you ask goddesslala to update really soon ...because this story is like a drug and i need MAWR! lol

Author's Response: Lol...we're working on it, I promise and thanks.

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/10 06:09 am Title: Breakfast with G

i loved it~

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: han Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/10 05:15 pm Title: Breakfast with G

:) i love how bill is being so sweet to tom!

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: kittyskull Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/10 03:56 pm Title: Breakfast with G

Poor Tom!
Gosh Bill is so kind, I can't wait to read the next chapter. This is amazing. =]

Author's Response: Thank you. It'll be as soon as possible, just be patient.

Reviewer: Haleema Kaaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/10 12:51 pm Title: Breakfast with G

Where's Bill going?

Author's Response: Be patient...all in good time...

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/10 12:19 pm Title: Breakfast with G

I really like this! Tom reminds me of my Pup *sniffles* (I used to RP and one of the character, nicknamed Pup, was just like Tom)

Author's Response: Aw...I'm glad you like this, thanks.

Reviewer: Shibby Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/10 10:06 am Title: Breakfast with G

Ugh, Gordon is such a douche!

Yay for Tom at least knowing to lie to him for Bill.

Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you like it and we figured after a month of living with Bill, Tom should be...not as scared, timid, and naive

Reviewer: xLolloboll Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/10 09:06 am Title: Breakfast with G

You are an really really really good author. Make more.

Author's Response: Thanks. We're working on the next bits of this one and I'm (GJ) working on a couple of one-shots personally, thought I'd let ya know since you like me =)

Reviewer: tomik Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/10 08:49 am Title: Breakfast with G

you did a real good job writnig Gordon as a heartless bastard. Bill's ma was a slave? That definitely adds some dimension to the story. I'm still loving.

Author's Response: Thank you, we try. We have a plan for that and I'm glad you still love it.

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/10 07:26 am Title: A New Home

i hope that bill means what he said...this is so weird but one of those stories that i can't stop reading...it's good...

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it...and you'll just have to read on to see =)

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/10 07:17 am Title: Number 484

i actually knew both of those things...that it was manzini and about the pear shaped thing...i knew that from an episode of a tv show called bones...anyway...this is a very intriguing story and as bizarre as it is, i'm thouroghly enjoying it...

Author's Response: Oooo I LOVE Bones. And I figured some people would know, but I thought I'd share, just in case so google or bing wouldn't go on overload =)

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/10 07:07 am Title: Darkness

wow...this is very disturbing but oh so interesting...poor boy...i cringed while reading it...and sadly enough, there are parents out there like that...

Author's Response: I'm sorry you cringed...if it makes you feel better, I did while writing it.

Reviewer: THforalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/10 06:27 am Title: Breakfast with G

Loved it :D But please don't let Tom lift weights and get muscles, I love the innocent looking Tom not the muscled one :)

Author's Response: That one's undecided at the moment and if he does, it'll only be enough to make him a little toned, nothing reall big and muscley

Reviewer: kramllew Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/10 05:38 am Title: Breakfast with G

Bills dad is so nasty :S Poor Tomi. :/

Author's Response: Yeah...he's a bit of a bastard isn't he?

Reviewer: goddesslala Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/10 03:44 am Title: Breakfast with G

Ill try and get them done as quickly as i can, i am doing a lot of traveling in two week so ill try and have somthing up before then but i cant make any promises, like jumper says, please be patient

Reviewer: talyntokiohotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/10 03:17 am Title: Breakfast with G

FREAKINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG YAY u update fast. i think i love u. this is a great chapter. i love this story!

Author's Response: Thanks....love you too. And I'm glad you loved it.

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