Date: 11/25/11 01:30 pm Title: Fini.
Wow. Even though the story is over I can't get it out of my head. Great job! I love it!
Date: 11/25/11 01:21 pm Title: Here we go...
OMG. Busted!!!
P.S. I think Georg and Gustav playing gay was totally cute and funny, even when Gusti was angry. You should totally write a story about them if you haven't already!
Date: 11/25/11 12:56 pm Title: Coincidence
Well it certianly seems that Tom is getting what he wished for. Hopefully Bill won't see his brother with his new girl toy...
Date: 11/25/11 12:16 pm Title: Information
MAN! He is so close and he doesn't even know it!
Date: 11/25/11 12:05 pm Title: New Starts
Yeah, new hair can make you feel as if you're making a new start for yourself. It's so odd how that happens. lol.
Date: 11/23/11 11:15 pm Title: Understanding and Accepting
Another good chapter. I could see Bill being the one to get lost. lol
Date: 11/23/11 06:44 pm Title: Is That You?
YAY! Jorg isn't a total douchebag! lol. I wonder how long it will take for Bill to decide to search there....
Date: 11/23/11 06:22 pm Title: Enough
YAY!!! I'm glad Bill came to his senses and is going to set everything straight between them. Great work!
Date: 11/23/11 05:55 pm Title: Bill
Awwwh Tomibear, that's so cute! I'm absolutely in love with this story! It's so cute and sad. great combination in my book!
Date: 11/23/11 05:35 pm Title: Departure
Go back Tom! Go back! Sweep Bill off his feet! DO SOMETHING BESIDES RUNNING AWAY!
Date: 11/23/11 03:44 pm Title: Trust
Hehe waffles. Anyway this was another great chapter. Honestly if I was in Tom's shoes I would probably do the same thing, only I'd be more spiteful about it. lol. Anyway I wonder what kind of relationship will frm between Tom and Elle.
Date: 11/23/11 03:34 pm Title: Kick in the teeth
Oh, that's a hit below the belt! Poor Tom. Now things are going to twice as bad for him.
Date: 11/23/11 02:31 pm Title: Lamentation
I don't think Bill hates him, he's probably still in shock over the confession and his own feelings.
P.s. poor Tom just left abandoned without a ride. lol
Date: 11/23/11 02:16 pm Title: Confession
OMG! I knew that Tom was going to admit his love to Bill but not this soon! I wonder how he younger brother is ging to handl it.
P.S. they are so cute together!
Date: 11/23/11 02:01 pm Title: Disappointment
I don't like Anita. It doesn't matter what the twins relationship is like, breaking up family is never a good thing. I hope Bill comes to his senses soon and dumps her. I know it sounds ma but still...
Date: 11/23/11 12:59 pm Title: Figuring
Uh-oh! Honestly, I thought this would be the other way around with Bill being the jealous one, but I'm kinda glad it's Tom that's jealous at the same time lol. I'm eager to see what happens next!
Date: 08/07/11 04:00 pm Title: Fini.
Lovely story. Great ending. Loved it.
Date: 10/26/10 12:53 am Title: Fini.
I like this story, but the ending could have been a little bit better. But thats just my opinion ;)
I think they kinda jumped right into it instead of talking and sorting things out, it made it kind of unrealistic to me.
But all in all its a really good story! :)
Date: 08/25/10 12:32 pm Title: Fini.
I liked this story. The twists and turns were interesting to follow and made me want to keep reading. :)
There were times however when it seemed it was written by someone who didn't understand the way the world works, that things aren't that simple, or that carefree. Other times however, you seemed to capture the emotions very well, and I was impressed. You had a weird mix of the two though. lol. Like, you paint a very grim picture of women, and the reason Jorg left seemed like BS, and Tom not having a job but the family has nice cars, and Bill marrying Anita at 20, sometimes it sounded like a fairytale where money grows on trees... but then Georg and Gustav were hilarious and I loved their plan and the way they talked. lol. So yeah, I guess even though I think the story was far-fetched at times, I still really enjoyed reading it. Your plot seemed a bit all over the place, but I find your writing nice and pleasant to read so it was easy to keep reading. I'm happy Bill and Tom found eachother at the end, like they obviously would, but I still get happy for happy endings. :)
Author's Response: Do you know what? I'm SO glad you gave me criticism! Seriously, thank you. I'm really glad you liked the story and it made you want to keep ready. I do tend to make things a little fairytale-like which I'll try to correct for the next story I write :) xx
Date: 08/21/10 03:42 pm Title: Figuring
Okay, the review I just did a min ago didn't show what I actually put :/
Seeing as I'm a close personal friend and have a chapter, I think you should carry on with this tbh.
I fackingg over the moon that the twins are together and high 5 to fiction Bill for socking Chantelle xD
You did brilliantly Kaulitz ;)
Author's Response: I have nothing to carry on with though :(rnMaybe you can help me try and think of a sequel or something ^.^rnHehee, I thought you'd like the bit with Chantelle ;)rnThank you very much, fellow Kaulitz, I'm glad you liked it :'D