Date: 06/30/11 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 1: Your Spine is Ablaze
YOU ARE FUCKING AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 04/26/10 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 1: Your Spine is Ablaze
this is AMAZING!
i love how its written! its gripping from the very first line and i love how you show bill's train of thought
Date: 04/25/10 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 1: Your Spine is Ablaze
Hi
I am sure that if you love reading it as much as I did while reading it, then we both fucking love it!
It was so great to read, it has been a while since the last time I read something so sexy with an ending so bittersweet. Awesome.
I will read it again -have to- just for the pleasure of doing it.
Hugs!!!
Date: 04/21/10 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 1: Your Spine is Ablaze
So... I read this actually already maybe two nights ago, but I had to leave reviewing until now, because it didn't feel right at that point, when I couldn't concentrate on reading this properly. Hopefully I can do it this time :).
I never get tired of this style and you know it. It was very fascinating to read Bill's POV and somehow his POV was more twisted, more... schitsophrenic in a way than Tom's. Tom's was twisted too, but in a different way. He struggled with whole different things. Here the whole sex and wanting was built around need and want and power. Somewhat more twisted way Bill's thoughts drifted between his own wants, desires, longting and suddenly back to Tom and again back to him. It was like he tried to fill two needs at the same time not knowing how to do it. The need of power and wanting was in both of them and it made this impossible mystery to solve. In a good way. In a sick, wrong way.
Usually twincest is written as a savior, a good thing, fulfilling and completing them. In your fic it was completeting them too, but somehow it was destroying. I don't know if you meant it? It's like tearing each other part, pushing over the limits and laugh and comecomecome while waiting for everything to crash in pieces. And love as a tool of power mistaken to be for good. I don't know how to approach this, because sick and twisted love can be called love, too, right?
Few lines and sentences really got me and made me wonder. They were so... questioning and/or clearing up. I thank you for those little stops, which left me confused, almost unpleasantly aware of questions I haven't thought about or I've more like refused to be too aware of.
Example: My pretty older brother who has never taken control over anything in his life.
So yes, you know I adore these kind of fics, because they make me conciontrate, focus and give nothing for free. Great job again, Shelly! :)
Date: 04/20/10 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 1: Your Spine is Ablaze
So fucking amazing. I adore the way you wrote The Night & this. You own me.
Date: 04/20/10 05:53 am Title: Chapter 1: Your Spine is Ablaze
uhhhh... I really can't decide if I understood this or not...
but anyways!!! it's awesome!
Date: 04/19/10 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 1: Your Spine is Ablaze
I don't know which POV I love more, because it's hot either one. >.>
When you first came up with The Night, I was all over that fic and it left me breathless and weak in the knees and omg, Tom taking Bill and that pretty much had me melt on the spot.
But now here's this sequel and it's Bill's POV and shit, you just can't help but be mesmerized by this evolution of thought and feeling.
It just makes my head spin.
These two will never stop being perfect together no matter what.
Thanks for writing this part! It was simply amazing and I still can't pick a favorite. >.>