Date: 07/28/11 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 3. Torture
this is a good story!
when will u post the rest?
Date: 09/18/10 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 1. Struggle
Please continue this story!
Author's Response:
I will continue it. I have the start and the final part of the next chapter written, I just need to get my head in the right place to finish it. *sighs* Hopefully soon.
Date: 05/22/10 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 3. Torture
I really love this. I'm so happy it wasn't a one-shot. Poor Tom he is suffering so much. I hope Bill puts him out of his misery soon. I can't wait to read more from this story, and I will definitely check out your others.
Author's Response: Ugh, the interwebs swallowed my response. Thank you so much for reviewing! And I'm glad you're loving this story. I'm loving writing it, too, although lately my muse has been otherwise occupied (impending surgery on Tuesday so doesn't help, either). I have the next chapter already started, it's just a matter of sitting down and actually finishing it.
Date: 05/03/10 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 3. Torture
It's amazing how much you can fit into such a short chapter. It's the perfect length (that's what she said... sorry, I couldn't resist). Anyway, you are soooo good at showing TOm's STRUGGLE to do the right thing for his brother, or what he thinks is the right thing. Bill, I'm sure, will show him otherwise ;) Hope you update soon :D
Side note, do you ever beta read? Just curious...
Also, I was looking through your favorites and you have very eclectic taste - so many different authors, genres, story lines, etc. Wondering what, to you, makes a good story (since you are clearly a fabulous writer just waiting to be discovered)? Do I have a point in asking this? Nah, I don't think so... I just thought it was cool to see some variety around here :D Wow, long review - hope it's somewhat coherent ;)
Date: 05/03/10 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 2. Strangle
Awww... one of my favorite things about the twins is how Bill will sing directly at Tom when they're performing. I'm happy you included it :D I'm so excited to see what Bill's going to do to get his brother, how he'll make Tom see the light! :D
Date: 05/03/10 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 1. Struggle
Losing Bill would be like… losing his other half, his heart, his soul. Oh, poor Tomi. He loves his brother so much. That WOULD be a struggle, since they are practically attached at the hip! Love your writing :D
Date: 04/29/10 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 3. Torture
Fantastic chapter! I love Tom's inner conflict and all his sexy thoughts about Bill. hehe... oh how I looooove twincest :D So excited to find out what happens after Tom opens the door ;) I really like the short chapters, too. You always leaving us on the edge of our seat and I love it!
Date: 04/28/10 05:29 am Title: Chapter 3. Torture
Haha poor clueless Tom...I wonder what'll happen next!
Date: 04/27/10 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 3. Torture
i like it! hope to read more soon!!!!!
Date: 04/26/10 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 2. Strangle
I'm glad Bill's aware of Tom's feelings for him, since Tom seems to be oblivious. I definitely want to know what Bill's planning...
I really like the way you've set this up - we get to experience Tom's perspective in chapter one and Bill's in chapter two. You've done such a great job at portraying the differences in the way they choose to act upon their love for each other. It is very realistic and it's exactly how I imagine it would happen in real life... if it were to happen in real life ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the lovely review! Yes, Tom is completely oblivious and I'm having too much fun making him like that. He has no clue, at all. *giggles* It means a lot that you think the story is realistic, that's what I'm striving for.
I'm trying to do a chapter from each of their perspectives, makes it easier for me to get a grip on their characters, or has so far, at least.
Date: 04/26/10 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 1. Struggle
I love it! Beautifully written! I guessed from your reviews that you would be an excellent author and I was right :) It makes sense, though... you say you're a lawyer, right? Isn't there a saying about lawyers having a silver tongue?
Author's Response:
Awww, thank you so much, honey! I'm so honored you think so. *blushes*
Yes, I'm a lawyer, and I guess there might be a saying of that sort, silver tongued devils maybe? Writing is sort of an escape for me, a way to relax... at least when my muse is actually behaving and not being her usual pain in the ass self. ;)
Date: 04/24/10 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 2. Strangle
I like this--it's the classic twincest inner turmoil story, but you tell it so well. I can't wait to see where you go with this.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm actually having fun writing this, more than I though I would for sure and it's a good way to get comfortable enough writing Tom and Bill.
Date: 04/23/10 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 2. Strangle
cantt waitt for the nextt chapterr
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope to post the next chapter by Wednesday. :)
Date: 04/23/10 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 2. Strangle
You go for it Bill! Get yours!
Author's Response: LOL, no worries, Bill will definitely get his. ;)
Date: 04/23/10 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 2. Strangle
ooh there's more. I like this! I like a scheming, sly Bill, and a clueless Tom =)
Author's Response: Yep, there's more. Muse is quite set on giving the boys a happier ending. Thank you so much for your kind words!
Date: 04/23/10 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 2. Strangle
lol ok
its good though
Author's Response: hee, thankee!
Date: 04/23/10 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 2. Strangle
I'm liking this so far, please update soon :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I plan on updating Wednesday, hopefully.
Date: 04/20/10 07:29 am Title: Chapter 1. Struggle
>>No, it was better not to say anything at all, to keep going as they had all along, even if his heart broke every single time he heard his brother talk of wanting to experience what love was, when he said he was waiting for ‘the right girl’ to come along.
That part really hit home for me, like, I felt that one. Because Bill really does talk about wanting to feel love quite often, and I can almost see Tom's heart breaking.
I really liked this ficlet. It was sweet and well-written. It's hard to write something so short and have it feel complete, but this is great. Well done. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm so happy you liked that part so much and I agree, it's difficult to write something so short and have it feel complete, my stories generally go overboard because of that.
Date: 04/20/10 05:56 am Title: Chapter 1. Struggle
Aw, a little sad, but I liked it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 04/20/10 12:11 am Title: Chapter 1. Struggle
yea
easier said then done
sequel?? Please??
Author's Response:
Awww, yes, I guess it's easier said than done, indeed.
Sequel? I had no plans for one, but maybe if muse cooperates or if I get another word that calls to me like this one did. Any ideas? Hee.
Thanks for reviewing!