Date: 05/17/12 04:59 am Title: Pray For Me
This story is so good but, also hella sad xD
I feel so sorry for Bill. He's not sure if he's in heaven or hell xD
Date: 09/17/11 10:12 am Title: Pray For Me
Hey, just wondering if this will get updated soon. It's a really great story!
Date: 07/20/11 01:35 pm Title: Pray For Me
I Love this story so much,
Even more when I just found out that it's based on The Gazette song with the same title,
I LOVE this story, Please write another chapter soon b29;
Date: 06/04/11 07:56 am Title: Pray For Me
hello there,
I realky love your story Taion,
it's so thrilling, I also really love your writing style,
I hooe that there is going to be a next chapter soon,
I am curious to know if Bill is ever gonna get home, and if Tom will let him go,
Nice tought train you have.
well now bye bye
Date: 02/19/11 09:20 pm Title: Pray For Me
Poor Bill :'( I don't think it's bad to wish for death at all. *Especially* given the torture he's going through.
Date: 12/26/10 12:39 pm Title: Pray For Me
when all that pain come to the end?
I mean it's enough for him ! poor Bill
Author's Response: i know.... ~_~ *gives giant cookie and Bill*
Date: 12/26/10 08:11 am Title: Pray For Me
.....bill..?
Author's Response: *covers eyes* sorry?
Date: 12/26/10 01:13 am Title: Pray For Me
that's not a very merry christmas for Bill though was it?...but merry christmas to you anyway...the chapter was good, but very disturbing...I look forward to more anyway.
Author's Response: thank you and yeah i feel really really bad for Bill. *gives giant cookie*
Date: 12/26/10 12:57 am Title: Pray For Me
OMG! This just makes me want to cry. I can't imagine anyone taking so much abuse & it not killing them. Poor Bill! Thanx for the update, can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Danke Schon......and sorry it makes you want to cry. *hands tissues and giant cookie*
Date: 12/25/10 11:19 pm Title: Pray For Me
There were some spelling and grammar mistakes in here... And some symbols that didn't go through but came out as z88 and r12.
If you want, I could beta edit it for you and send it back. And then you could just paste over the current text. *shrug* Just a suggestion.
And oh god, I thought things would start getting better for Bill. But they're only getting inconceivably worse.
Author's Response: opps my bad.... ~_~ and yeah if you dont mind being a beta that would be awesome....and yes its gonna get rough from here *covers eyes*
Date: 12/25/10 11:15 pm Title: Pray For Me
can u e'xplain the reason of such an harassment ? I just don't get it
Author's Response: the whole thing about them keeping Bill? Well they basically are bored and with Tom its pleasure for him about controlling someone else besides his friends. its weird i know but this story is based on a true horrible event and even that is a little difficult to understand really. if you still need some kind of explaining just message me and i'll try to help. but if you want to know about the real story i have a copy paste link in the story notes.
Date: 12/25/10 11:01 pm Title: Pray For Me
*speechless*
Author's Response: awww....*hands giant cookie*
Date: 12/21/10 11:02 pm Title: Please........?
*is angry at Tom and ready to go out and kick some ass*...*gets distracted by giant cookie* mmm yummy cookie...good chapter. I hope we get more soon!
Author's Response: lol....yay for giant cookie! and i'm glad that you liked the short chapter and hope you'll like the next one too. :)
Date: 12/18/10 05:53 pm Title: Please........?
please update soon. its really gud.
Author's Response: awwww thank you....and i will update soon :)
Date: 12/17/10 05:24 pm Title: Please........?
short but good chapter!
i was scared this story was going to get abandond >
Author's Response: no not abanded just running around like mad for the holidays ~__~ and thankyou i'm happy you like it
Date: 12/17/10 05:15 pm Title: Please........?
YOU UPDATED! YOU UPDATED! YOU UPDATED! YAYYYYY!!!!
Author's Response: lol yes i did.....hope you like it even though its so short ~___~
Date: 12/17/10 05:13 pm Title: Please........?
yes i want to kill your tomi! but this is just too good for me to be mad and not read anymore! It's like I HAVE to keep reading! ggaaah! that boy is going to drive me mad!
Author's Response: lol thank you and i'm so happy you like it :D
Date: 12/17/10 02:20 pm Title: Please........?
Horrible. I'm surprised Bill's mind hasn't gone.
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: lol no prob....i'm happy you liked it :D
Date: 12/17/10 10:36 am Title: Please........?
:'( I have waited the new chapter for long time
and now it's to short
please soon
I want to read the next ^^
Author's Response: i know i'm so so so sorry but its the best i can do for now. this holiday stuff is driving me mad. i am working on the next one, and i will make it extra long for you ok? again i'm really sorry it is too short :(