Date: 06/08/10 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 20
um... are you effing shitting me... you did not just kill tom...
Date: 06/08/10 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 20
OMG Oh nooooooooooooo D:
Please please more!
D: need to know!
xoxo
Date: 06/08/10 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 20
...that better have been someone shooting luis!
DONT LET TOM DIEE D:
Date: 06/08/10 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 20
ONYD!!! That gunshot better be because someone shot and killed Luis!Tom is hurt badly enough already, and maybe he realized that it's all over and Luis is dead,
and finally let himself pass out...Ok-i'll stop guessing...but update soon PlEASE!
Date: 06/08/10 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 20
omg crazy!!!! i have to believe he didnt die...but oh, man! that guy's a crazy asshole. aahhh suspense!
Date: 06/08/10 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 20
D: Urgh, why do you always have to end it at the most important part?
Date: 06/07/10 06:37 am Title: Chapter 1
WTF Luis????
i really like your story.....keep it going....
it was an amazing situation....then came Luis........i wanna kill him.......
xD
Date: 06/07/10 01:04 am Title: Chapter 19
Damn, I knew it---when thing's are too good to be true...they are. Please don't leave us hangin' long!
Date: 06/07/10 12:26 am Title: Chapter 19
I don't see them getting out of this one without a lot of pain...
Date: 06/07/10 12:24 am Title: Chapter 19
i knew it. you are truly trying to drive me mad, aren't you? d:D i loooooove it. ^_^
Date: 06/07/10 12:13 am Title: Chapter 18
okaythat last sentence was definently some foreshadowing.
Date: 06/07/10 12:08 am Title: Chapter 17
oh gosh Luis is going to do something...every time you mention luis i imagine my friend and then it's just weird. lol
Date: 06/07/10 12:02 am Title: Chapter 16
don't make me want to hurt you, please. d:(
Date: 06/06/10 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 15
okay, why on earth did Bill justdo that?
Date: 06/06/10 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 19
O____O oh shit oh shit oh shit !
Next chaptttyerrr please !
I hope that bastard doesn't kill anyone !
OMFG PLEASE NEXT CHAPTER ! :)
Date: 06/06/10 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 19
I knew it! I knew Luis would show up and do something stupid like this!
I can't believe he effing shot Tom!!!
MORE SOON PLEASE!
XD
Date: 06/06/10 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 13
so bill is reaching out to tom! yay for him, but i still have a feeling that they will not be in the clear for a while. LOOOOOVE
Date: 06/06/10 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 12
so there still is some hope for them. unless david found the phone and is calling tom to tell him somehing bad...
Date: 06/06/10 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 11 (2)
i like this one better than the last. it shows how badly Bill had been brought up to where he doesn't even know how to think for himself. Even though he has freed himself from Jost he still does what he had had him do. Tom realizes this and trys to show him that he can do what he wants instead of doing what other people want of him. ^_^ this earns the tomi smiley!!! d:)
Date: 06/06/10 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 11
o billa, you really should take a break from the sex. and what on earth did they do to him after they caught him with tom? and i totally knew Jost was a pedophile.