Date: 04/20/10 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
Hola!!! My name is Cristina, I'm from Spain. I love your fic, and wish that continue soon.
byye!! ^^
Author's Response: Hi, I'm Lissa from England :) Thanks so much for reviewing! I'll update as soon as I can :)
Date: 04/20/10 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh, god. Tom, why?
But this line kind of made my day :D
"Tom at his most terrifying looked like the kind of guy who could call on all his homies from da hood to beat up whoever got in his way."
XD
Author's Response: Why? Because poor little Tomiboo is getting all sad about being mistaken for a porn star...poor bubba.
Haha, I really like that line. I'm going to put in a line every chapter that I love and see who else likes it :)
Date: 04/20/10 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
ooohhhhh gooseybumpses. You are hilarious. moremoremore
Author's Response: Oh thank you :) I try my best. More soon :)
Date: 04/20/10 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
I can't wait for the next update! I love this story soooo much!!
Author's Response: I'll try updating tomorrow - although if planes aren't cancelled again I'll be on one of those for a while. But thanks so much!
Date: 04/20/10 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
omg awsum but wats BDSM? plz be a fast updater!!!
Author's Response: Here's a link to the wikipedia article on it : http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/BDSM
I've got the next couple of chapters written so I'll be a fast updater for a little while at least :)
Date: 04/20/10 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
this cant be your first fic on the site?
-dies-
you're an amazing writer... wow. just wow :)
characters are believable but funny and you deserve every last review :) x
Author's Response: Haha, well thank you so much :) I'll try to keep it up :D
Date: 04/20/10 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
Tom you idiot..getting drunk to beat someone up?!? *smacks his head* I am actually thankful he passed out. Cause i am not sure i would want to see security drag his sorry ass out of the mansion. oh...the second hand embarrassment. Oh.. Tom seems nice enough to care but i dunno. I really hope he does try to see past his blind hatred and be logical to see something is wrong and try to him (since he is already there). Ah~ Keep up the good work! :D I can't wait for the next chapter :]
Author's Response: Yep, Tom is a complete idiot. It would be so awful if he'd got thrown out quite so quickly. Poor thing. Of course Tom is nice enough to care. Except when he's drunk, of course, because then he gets all pissed off about things :) I'll put the next chapter up as soon as I can :)
Date: 04/20/10 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
Nooo, you can't end like this! I wanna know what's happening next xD
But anyway, this was a good chapter! I just love Tom, espcially when he's drunk :D
Author's Response: Ah, I hit my word limit :) You'll find out soon, I promise. And I love Tom, too, he's just so dumb. And stuff :)
Date: 04/20/10 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 2
LMAO I absolutely love drunk!Tom :)
Author's Response: That's 'cause drunk!Tom is so funny and idiotic :) He's brilliant to write, actually, he just makes me laugh all the time.
Date: 04/19/10 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this so far! I love the situation Tom's in, too. This is going to be interesting. :D
Author's Response: Poor Tom, I almost feel sorry for him. Thanks so much :) I'll make it as interesting as possible, I promise :)
Date: 04/19/10 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Poor Tom. XD This sounds so interesting though. I'll be looking forward to the next part! :)
Author's Response: Haha, I know. Poor little boy. I feel bad for him...Thanks so much :) Next part will be coming as soon as I can write it :)
Date: 04/19/10 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is interesting! :p
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'll try to keep it that way :)
Date: 04/19/10 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG! Poor Bill!!!
hahaha! Im kinda excited for more of this fic :)
I think its funny that Tom Mr. Play Boy himself, is in this situation. Im excited for this :)
Looking forward to more!!
Author's Response: Oh I'm glad :) I think Tom, being Mr Playboy, could probably get more out of it than he's doing right now but then again, if he did, there'd be very little to write about. Haha. More will be coming very soon, I hope.
Date: 04/19/10 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
this made me laugh. XD
this is freaking brilliant...
I love it. (:
update soon. ^-^
Author's Response: Oh yay! I like making people laugh :) I'll update as soon as I write it, 'kay?
Date: 04/19/10 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOL and i mean it, im literally laughing out loud. loveee the drunk genious! ahahaaaaaa lollzzz but that would suck, really. aw, for a second i wished bill WAS a porn star, cuz then i could watch it ;) oh well, theres always fanart
Author's Response: Oh, yay! I love making people laugh :D I alway come up with really stupid ideas when I'M drunk, so giving them to other people is just easy, lol. Yep. There's ALWAYS fanart. Which is a little scary, lol.
Date: 04/19/10 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
“I’m going to go to Magdeburg and beat the shit out of him, and then when I come back, people will be like 'oh hey, you look like that porn star that got beaten to death a few weeks ago.'”
Worse drunken plan ever!! LOL!
Being mistaken for a porn star would be soooo awkward...and embarrassing...and so funny!
Really enjoying this so far! Looking forward to next chapter!
Author's Response: I know!! Worse than anything I'VE ever decided to do (note to self - never EVER get drunk on a beach again, swimming in the sea, in Scotland, in October, at half-ten, is NOT a good plan). I actually think I'd love to be mistaken for a porn star, it would be interesting...
Oh yay! Thanks! Next chapter very soon, I hope.
Date: 04/19/10 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
lol i like it tis great lol i can't stop laughing at drunk!tom whos making absolutely no sense at all. anyway, i like you had me hooked with the summary. keep it up. i look forward to more chapters!
Author's Response: Drunk!Tom is really fun to do :) I just draw off other people's *coughmyowncough* experiences, they come up with some REALLY bad plans. More chapters will come as soon as I can write them :)
Date: 04/19/10 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Uh oh. Tom doesn't seem very happy. Can't wait to find out what happens next :)
Author's Response: No...poor Tom. He's VERY not happy. You'll find out, as soon as I can write it :)
Date: 04/19/10 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hahaha! I really love this story, it has good characterization and I'm loving the plot so far. BEST OF ALL: GOOD GRAMMAR AND ITS WELL-WRITTEN.
I havent read any stories or left any reviews for WEEKS, so this is an enormous compliment coming from me telling you how good you are (and how you should update, like, really soon)
:)
Author's Response: Haha, I can't stand bad grammar and stuff, I'm a total grammar Nazi. At least, when I'm writing, anyway. I didn't realise that before, haha.
Oh, thank you so much!! I'm so proud, this is my first on here :) I WILL update soon, I promise. As soon as I can write the next chapter :)
Date: 04/19/10 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well, I really like this begining! The story is orginal and I already love Tom's character :D
I'll follow this :)
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I tried on Tom, I somehow always feel he gets stereotyped a lot. Thank you so much :)