Date: 04/20/10 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ahh, you're mean for cutting it right there. XD Tom is quite a character, and I was laughing at him many times during this chapter. XD But must find out what happens next!! Update soon, please. ;3
Author's Response: Ah, I'm sorry, but then you get a lovely lot of Bill&Tom next chapter instead a little in both :D I love Tom, he's just stupid, really...next update will be soon, I promise!
Date: 04/20/10 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
AHH the suspense! i really like the premise of this story and i can't wait to see where you go with it. can't wait for the next update! :)
Author's Response: Ahh yes, suspense...the old favourite. Aww, thank you so much! Next update will be soon, I promise :D
Date: 04/20/10 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
I just love how you portray Tom! He's so hilerious, and especially while drunk! xD And all those obstacles of getting into the mansion in his drunken haze I could really picture in my head! xD
Author's Response: Haha, I love Tom. I had fun writing him, it was so much like going 'hmm, what shall I do next? *spots mansion* THAT looks fun!' Thanks so much :)
Date: 04/20/10 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 2
Bahaha!! Tom makes me laugh :)
But poor Bill! That makes me want to cry!!! I dont ever want to imagine Bill being locked away in some room!
Can't wait for more! Thanks Hun!!
Author's Response: Whoop I got Tom right at least :) I know, poor Bill! Next chapter has more of him, so I won't say anything else just yet so I don't ruin it. More will up very soon! And thanks for reading ^--^
Date: 04/20/10 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
I really like this story so far.
I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Yay, thank you! More will come as soon as I can write the chapters, and stuff :D
Date: 04/20/10 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 2
Loving it! Your style of writing is very engaging. Hilarious and I'm already into the plot. I hope the updates keep coming quickly, I'm hooked!
Author's Response: Yay, thank you! Oh, I'm glad it comes across as funny. I mean, I find it funny but that's 'cause I'm writing it :D Updates will come as quickly as I can write them, and as I've written the next two or three, they'll be updates quickly for the next week or so at least :D
Date: 04/20/10 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
Omg, this... is amazing. Whatever Tom's reaction will be to a depressed porn star is going to be priceless. (:
Aah.. I love this. XD
Tom is such an ass but he's so funny... Bill-bashing. XD Poor Bill though...
Beautiful. ^-^
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'm glad you like it, I was all worried. Haha, now writing THAT chapter - with Tom's reaction, the one I'm posting very soon - was fun :D I like to think Tom's only an ass when he's drunk, but I guess we'll find that out later. And of course, poor little Bill :(
But thank you so much!
Date: 04/20/10 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
0.0 omg I want to know whats wrong with bill!!
Author's Response: Well, I would tell you, but that would ruin everything plotwise :) The GOOD thing is that I'll be updating very shortly, so you won't have to wait TOO long, I hope.
Date: 04/20/10 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 2
you're so close! to fifty, i mean. i liked this, very entertaining. really stupid idea to get smashed before breaking and entering...but whatever lolll. aww billa's unhappy?
Author's Response: Yay! Fifty! Thank you so much! Of course it's a stupid idea, though, only Tom could think of it. And actually bother to try and make it work...you will find out about Bill later on, if I tell you now it RUINS the whole thing :D
Date: 04/20/10 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 2
Hahaha seriously lmfao!!! I can seriously picture Tom doing this things!!!! Great descriptiveness!!! Bill-bashing... XD
Author's Response: Hahaha yeah me too :D I cannot wait for him to try so we can get all the pictures and laugh a lot...thank you so much! Bill-bashing is my word of the day today :)
Date: 04/20/10 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 2
really good story drunk tom that just too funny
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I love drunk!Tom, he just makes me laugh a lot :)
Date: 04/20/10 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 2
really good story drunk tom that just too funny
Date: 04/20/10 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 2
Zomg this is so great ^-^
I really REALLY can't wait for more.
This is like... pink lemonade koolaid, giant cookies, and MGMT good ^-^
Author's Response: YAY PINK LEMONADE KOOLAID!!! I love that stuff. It's awesome. Thank youu!! I'll try to post more as soon as I can :)
Date: 04/20/10 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
i love stories that make me laugh:)! i'm going to enjoy reading this, that's for sure! can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Yay! I love making people laugh! That's so great, and next chapter will be up very soon, I hope.
Date: 04/20/10 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
So much to love in this chapter! If I start quoting I'll never stop.
Drunken Tom...love him!
So looking forward to the next chapter! :]
Author's Response: Haha, well thank you! Trying to get quotes is my second-favourite thing EVER. Lol. Next chapter will be up very soon I hope :)
Date: 04/20/10 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
okay im really tired,, so just a quick review so you can get those 50 you want. err... okay, so i love this story and can't wait to read more! GOODNIGHT and sweet dreas or whatever.
*yawns*
lmao, that was one random rerview.
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you for helping :) And thanks so much! I will get more up ASAP. Haha, random reviews are the best :D
Date: 04/20/10 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
OMG!!! bills all depressed. i love Drunk!tom he makes me laugh. awww he passed out. so much for bill bashing! UPDATE LIKE NOW! please? *offers cookies as incentive* i love this fic :)
Author's Response: *takes cookie* nom nom nom. I'll update very soon, promise ^--^ I love Drunk!Tom. He's so much fun to write. I couldn't actually LET him go Bill-bashing - at least not yet - that's so mean!
Date: 04/20/10 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
very well written
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! I always get really scared it comes across all wrong.
Date: 04/20/10 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 2
whoa...can't wait to see what happen's-lot's of scenerio's swirling around in my head...
Author's Response: Yeah, I'll try not to keep you waiting for too long. And then you'll be able to see which scenario is right :)
Date: 04/20/10 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
You know, I was laughing aaaaaaaaaaaaaall the way to the end there before that voice spoke, which I will assume is Bill.
And I just love how Georg so totally went along for the ride to maybe give his buddy support before he got his ass thrown in jail for assault, breaking and entering and a whole sleuth of things that would put him away for good. XD
But...I'm now worried about Bill, because I still insist that's him there and omg, when Tom wakes up from his drunken moment, oh boy, this is gonna be interesting! And I'm sure Bill's gonna notice the similarities if everyone else does!
Author's Response: Oh yay! I really love making people laugh when I write. Really only because I laugh so much myself when I write it, so if other people don't I get all embarrassed, haha. Of course Georg just went along. He has questionable morals, haha. And of course, he thinks it'll be funny...oh, do worry about Bill. That is Bill, of course, because who else would it be? I'll leave you to wonder about the rest, though, until I post a little more :)