Date: 04/22/10 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 3
oh wow! i totally love this, please update it soon? love you~
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I will update it as soon as I can. I love you too :)
Date: 04/22/10 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 3
yaaay!!!!!!!!! awsum poor Billy :( so mind controlled hopefully Tomi will be his knight and sweep him off his feet lol cant wait for next chap.!
Author's Response: I know poor baby :( Tom will of course do something very cool - at some point - and next chapter will be up as soon as possible :D
Date: 04/22/10 01:19 am Title: Chapter 1
I am in love with this and it's only the first chapter.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much!
Date: 04/22/10 12:17 am Title: Chapter 2
so he got in...and then fainted...holy hell! this is a good story and i enjoy reading it...leave it to getting drunk to have bad ideas that seem brilliant at the time...
Author's Response: Haha oh thank you :D I always have ideas while I'm drunk that are FANTASTIC, and then I do them, and suddenly I think 'WHAT THE HELL AM I DOING???'
Date: 04/22/10 12:11 am Title: Chapter 3
I think you've got something good going here.. very unique, and pretty captivating I must say. :)
The part about Tom sneaking in and climbing ivy was a bit far-fetched, but it did the job. And then David and the pills... the wheels are churning in my head as to what's going to happen next.
And as to the first 2 chapters- Hillarious! Keep writing, I wanna hear more!
Author's Response: Haha, yes, climbing the ivy, whilst drunk, is not exactly likely, but I had to find a way of him getting in without getting caught. So I stole from Enid Blyton :p More is coming, I promise!
Date: 04/21/10 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
he's going to beat him to death...at least he won't look like him anymore...this is an interesting idea and can't wait to see where this goes...
Author's Response: Yeah, if he beats his face in enough he won't look like anyone at all :D
Date: 04/21/10 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 3
aww poor Bill! the whole 'leaving-his-phone-behind' thing was quite clever - i was wondering how Tom would have a reason to see him again lol :)
Author's Response: Ahaha, Tom is going to HATE you for saying that...but it's true. Oh so true...:D
Author's Response: Ahaha, Tom is going to HATE you for saying that...but it's true. Oh so true...:D
Date: 04/21/10 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
OH MY GOD 0___0
BILL MY BABY! They are BRAINWASHING you and DRUGGING you so you have no say in anything!!!!!!!!!!
TOM YOU BUTTFACE GO RESCUEEEEEE HIIIM
:O
ily btw
Author's Response: I KNOW!!! BAD BAD PEOPLE!!!
Tom will of course get out there and try his best to rescue him :D
And I love you too :)
Date: 04/21/10 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 3
I want to
know Moore!!! :0
Author's Response: More will be as soon as I can write it! And find the time to get onto an internet connection, lol.
Date: 04/21/10 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
Lmfao I just can't get enough of Toms attitude and how you've written him.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you. He's so fun to write, he just reminds me of myself when I'm drunk.
Date: 04/21/10 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lmfao I love Toms attitude.
Author's Response: I know, he just makes me laugh :D
Date: 04/21/10 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 3
Awe poor Billa! I love the story. AMAZING! must keep writing hun!
Author's Response: Oh, thanks!! I will keep writing, I promise!
Date: 04/21/10 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
poor Bill... *hugs him* :[ Contracts are such nasty things especially with the fine print. :[ Taking Pills to continue working is not a good sign. :[ I wonder how many more films he has to do before his contract is up. Tom go redeem yourself and help Bill!!
Have fun at work! :D and thank you for the speedy update~ :DD
Author's Response: I know, contracts are evil (mine steals money off of me for food and stuff even when I'm not there. Grr.)! Of course Tom will redeem himself, he's too sweet not to :) And I will update asap!
Date: 04/21/10 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 3
Awww. Poor Bill sounds like he was wrapped into the industry, :(
Author's Response: I know :( Poor baby thing.
Date: 04/21/10 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
:D
Drunk Tom makes for an exciting night. :P
Author's Response: Oh yeah. I wouldn't say no to a drunk!Tom :D
Date: 04/21/10 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like this a lot!
Normal stories don't catch my attention this quickly,but this sure did. :D
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'm glad it did, I like reviewers :D
Date: 04/21/10 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 3
Really good story! I lurve it. :)
Author's Response: Oh, thank you :D I'll try to keep it up!
Date: 04/21/10 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 3
Aw, I really like this. You're a really good writer ^-^
I adore the idea of Bill as a broken-down porn star. And Tom being mad at him for something he can't really control. I love thinking ahead, to the time when the romance comes, so with this story I'm thinking the romantic times will be adorable. I'm glad you've gotten so much feedback, you deserve it :)
Author's Response: Aww, thank you :)
I have to say, it took me forever to decide how to make Bill "work", if you know what I mean. I couldn't decide how to portray him but I'm glad I DID go for broken-down, because it seems to have had a good response. And I figured, people all over the world fall in love and hate celebrities and people without even meeting them, so Tom getting pissed that he looks so similar just seemed to fit in :) And yes. The romantic times are - from what I've written and what I think - very sweet :D Thank you so much :)
Date: 04/21/10 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 3
poor bill! update soon plz! n.n i don't even think i can wait, but i'll try :)
Author's Response: I know, poor Bill :( I'm updating very soon, I promise :)
Date: 04/21/10 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 3
So I love the parts of this fic. The way you portray Tom has me cracking up laughing. But then Bill has me near tears. I feel so bad for him already!
Aww I can't wait for Tom to rescue him because yes already thats what I am thinking about! (But its ok, I can wait until whenever/however long that takes.)
So I am totally loving this! Thanks!
Author's Response: I am so glad the contrast between Tom's randomness and Bill's...Billness (can't think of another word...) works. I was so scared it was going to be like 'wtf??' so yay!! And thank you for reading and reviewing, it's you guys who keep me alive :D