Date: 04/29/10 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 9
Okay awww...
I loved this chapter. You explained everything without making it seem ridiculous. You wrote it very well.
Tom is very very sweet. :3 He deserves a cookie, and Bill needs a cookie.. because, it'll cheer him up I'm sure. :D
It's hard to picture the real David Jost while reading this considering TH's manager looks kind. I picture him as another guy. :P
Luis... ? o-O
I wonder if Bill was raped. I'm sure he was. This makes me wonder if there are real stars in this similar situation you know?
I'm sure this will get featured. Don't doubt yourself. Stories not as good as this have, plus this was blasting with reviews. It's bound to get more so much more once it's on the home page. =)
Author's Response: Oh, thank you. I was terrified it was all going to come out and people were going to be like 'wtf??? that's just stupid.' So I'm so glad it worked!
Tom totally deserves a cookie, he's just so lovely, and Bill deserves all the cookies in the world because he's so badly treated, and all. And I actually feel awful for the real David Jost, because I made him such as asshole, but someone has to be the bad guy, right?
Luis = scary, scary guy. He freaks me out and I sometimes have nightmares about him, even though I actually made him up. But yes, Bill was raped, and I really REALLY hope other stars aren't like this. That would suck so bad.
Oh, well thank you so much :) I try not to doubt myself, but mny boss at work is a little like David. Not too much, but enough to sometimes make me think 'hey, he's right, maybe I should just stop'. That's when I come on here and think 'screw him, I've got more than 200 reviews!' So that always makes me feel better :D
Date: 04/29/10 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 9
....*in shock*
Author's Response: Oh, I'm sorry :( *gives you cookies* out of shock? Pleases?
Date: 04/29/10 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh wow! I have to say it again, Poor Bill.
Being molested for so long and losing his parents and being forced into porn and drug addiction. :(
Love that Tom has figured it all out and wants to help Bill and that they're falling in love with each other.
Quite the cliffhanger at the end! Can't wait for next chapter! :]
Author's Response: Aww, Bill is just so sad. It's so awful. And I can't imagine not ever knowing anything but porn and drugs and stuff, so really, I think he's doing spectacularly well, considering. Yep! Tom has is alllll worked out, and now they're in love it'll all be fine.
Once, you know, all the bad shit that's going to hit the fan has hit it.
Date: 04/29/10 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 9
D: this is just full of twist and turns.
So let me see if i understand this fully.
David jost is a former family friend who got bill into porn when he was 15, (after molesting him for god knows how long) Bill is now on drugs (addicted?) and is constantly raped, which is the porn that is actually filmed and sold. He is under the illusion that the tame porn is the one being sold, when that probably isn't even really filmed or it's in David's own private collection. Am I right?
And Georg is wrong because I think Tom is about to get raped too. :/
Author's Response: Yes, all twisty. I like to keep you all on your toes. Yes, you have it all right, even the tame porn :D David likes to watch it every now and again. And I'm not commenting on that last bit, not yet.
Date: 04/29/10 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 9
Omg nein
Author's Response: It's so awful, I know :(
Date: 04/29/10 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 9
Holy shit ;_;
Author's Response: Oh, I know. Bad times :(
Date: 04/29/10 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Bloody Hell!!! They caught them... AHHHHH.... PLEASE update soon!!!! And thanx 4 tellin us Bill's background!!!
Author's Response: I know! So awful! I'll update soon, I promise. And it was my pleasure, you all deserved to know a little more.
Date: 04/29/10 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 9
............OH NOEZ! what will happen next? *runs around* update soon!
Author's Response: Aha, you will find out what happens next when I update! And I will update soon, I promise!
Date: 04/29/10 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 9
O_O PoorBillTheDisneyCreature is in trouble omg! D: they cacht them! Omg omg!
D: update I cant wait O_O REALLY I CANT.
XoXoH
Author's Response: I know! BillTheDisneyCreature is going to be in serious shit pretty soon, I think. And poor Tom! Being caught by Jost! No!! I'll update soon, I promise.
Date: 04/29/10 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 9
OMK!!!!!!!!!!!
GO ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I know!!! And I will soon! I promise!!
Date: 04/29/10 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 9
AHHH WHAT THE HELL!!!! NEIN!!! T-T
Author's Response: I KNOW!! SO AWFUL!!
Date: 04/29/10 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 9
oh gawwwwwwwd!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I know! It's so baddd...
Date: 04/29/10 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nah I agree too! Lol I wonder what he's like when he is drunk in real life. XD
Date: 04/29/10 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yeah all stories just have to have that one obvious thing happen xD
Date: 04/29/10 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lol that's very true! Lol
Date: 04/29/10 11:37 am Title: Chapter 8
Aww Bill's such a darling! So... Think I can arrange 5 minutes alone with David? *smiles sweetly, hiding baseball bat behind back*
Author's Response: Bill is so adorable I actually love him :D Sure, you can have five minutes with David, although I think you may have to join the line.
Date: 04/29/10 11:23 am Title: Chapter 8
O.O bill said i love u....already????
Author's Response: Aah, he's so cute though! He just jumps right into things :p
Date: 04/29/10 02:18 am Title: Chapter 8
yay~ i am glad~ :D Tom has turned his anger for David into something productive~ :D and i am so glad that he went to see Bill without anyone forcing him to or the intent to hurt (thank goodness)~ :D aw.. Poor Bill...*hugs him* omg.. Thank you so much for always posting so fast!!! :DDDD I think you should take a break, relax at the beach :] Cause you deserve it! :D *keeps giving you tons of cookies*
Author's Response: Yess!! Productiveness!! Otherwise he'd just be sitting there like 'oh, Bill, he's stuck in a room somewhere, oh well, tea and cakes anyone?' And he's just so scared about Bill. He had to go see him really, otherwise I would never get anywhere! And I would relax at the beach, only today it's decided to rain :( So I may as well write anyway!! *keeps eating cookies* God, I'm going to get so fat, lol.
Date: 04/29/10 01:36 am Title: Chapter 8
awww tom is falling for bill
i cant wait for the next chapter
amazing story :]
Author's Response: I know! So adorable. And the next chapter will be up soon, and thank you!