Date: 04/30/10 11:12 am Title: Chapter 9
Fuck David, fuck him! UHU! Bill, you're not BAD!
Author's Response: Of course Bill isn't bad. David's just an asshole!
Date: 04/30/10 09:50 am Title: Chapter 9
AHHHHH!!!!!!! omg woa u left me on the edge of my seat
Author's Response: Oh yay! That might sound weird. But it's good to know the story's working :D
Date: 04/30/10 09:00 am Title: Chapter 9
No no no...we can't be left hangin' like this! Please update soon *make's puppy dog eye's and beg's*
Author's Response: Ah, I'm afraid I did have to leave you hangin'. But I AM just about to update, so that should be fun!
Date: 04/30/10 07:00 am Title: Chapter 9
Oh noes! What happens next?! Updaaaate
Author's Response: I'll update as soon as I can, I promise!!
Date: 04/30/10 05:54 am Title: Chapter 9
I think you skipped the word 'hit' in the last sentence.
This was a great chapter!! we learned so much. poor poor bill though. I am so glad Tom is going to save him...after he gets out of this spot of trouble he is in. thanks for the speedy update! I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Ooh, you're right, I did. *goes to change that*
I really wanted people to know a little more, 'cause I kept getting questions in reviews and stuff. So I put that in! And yes, Tom is definitely going to save him. Or try, anyway, once he's managed to find his way out of this particular mess. I'll update soon, I promise!
Date: 04/30/10 02:21 am Title: Chapter 9
Holy crap! I can't believe that just happened!! Poor Bill. :(
I love this story, I think it's well written and really captivating because of all the mystery. I keep hoping Tom will find a way to save Bill, however it seems he's just dug himself a big hole, and Bill is so helpless, poor thing. The way he says all that "David says" stuff so factually is heartbreaking.
Cant wait to read more. Keep writing. :)
Author's Response: It's so sad :( poor Bill, and poor Tom too. Oh, but thank you! That's so sweet of you to say! And I really hope Tom will figure out a way, too, because otherwise poor Bill is totally doomed. And it really is so sad that Bill keeps going 'David says', it just makes me cry a little sometimes. More will be coming soon, I hope!
Date: 04/30/10 01:02 am Title: Chapter 9
Alright, alright now the action begins!
Author's Response: Yup :D Although maybe not just yet.
Date: 04/30/10 12:41 am Title: Chapter 9
Shit. It's gettin better with each chapter. I mean...worse. Because what has been done to Bill is horrible. And now Tomi is caught and I don't know how they will get out of this mess! Amazing job as always.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! And I know what you mean, of course. Poor Bill, and poor Tom, and this is going to be one hell of a mess for him to sort. Thank you again.
Date: 04/29/10 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 9
OMFGGGGGG
Author's Response: I KNOW!!
Date: 04/29/10 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 8
awwww....I feel sooo bad for Bill-I certainly hope Jost get's what's coming to him! Maybe Tom can be Bill's saving grace.
Off to the next chapter to catch up...
Author's Response: Oh, I really hope so. I would love for Tom to do that, it would be so lovely.
Date: 04/29/10 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh noes! They've been caught! MORE! SOON!
Author's Response: I know! More must come soon, I promise!
Date: 04/29/10 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 9
OMG! NO!!!
So, David is a dick! and HE needs to be punished, not poor Bill! That's horrible, and really makes me want to cry...
Uh-Oh getting caught! I really don't think I want to know what is going to happen to them both now either! But I can definitely not wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I know, he is such a bastard. He should really be killed in very painful ways. And yup, Tom was caught!! Which is NEVER good! And the next chapter will be up very soon :D
Date: 04/29/10 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 9
Omg nein
Author's Response: I know, it's so bad :(
Date: 04/29/10 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 9
WTF kind of cliffhanger is this??!!! *throws up arms in crazed lunacy* Right when Bill tells Tom enough evidence to have David sent to prison for a long time, creepy Luis and his damn master have to show up with syringes! I'm so insanely psyched for the next chapter now. Quick update please?? =)
Author's Response: Oh, I'm sorry :( But of course creepy Luis and bastard David had to turn up, really, 'cause otherwise, nothing would ever happen! And I'll do a quick update, I promise.
Date: 04/29/10 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 9
Shit! That's not good!!!! He has to run and tell every body. I currently hate David sooo much >:[
Author's Response: No I know! It's never good when that happens. I have to agree with you, David is a total asshole.
Date: 04/29/10 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 9
Aw, poor twins :/
I mean, honestly. Bill needs someone he can talk to, someone who actually cares for him, and that's Tom, and if Tom ends up being taken away...*sigh* Then he's not going to have anyone. I really hate how Jost is making him do those things and how he's keeping him locked up :/
This is major depressing but still so very good ^-^
Author's Response: I know. Poor little things :(
And you're completely right. Bill needs his little Tomi, Tom is so completely right for him, and then David comes along like an asshole with a big gun. I mean, he doesn't actually have a big gun, but you know what I mean. He should really stop being such a bastard or he's going to seriously piss a whole lot of people off.
And thank you so much :D
Date: 04/29/10 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 9
ohhmyybill what happenedd!?!? i cant wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: It will be up very shortly, I promise!
Date: 04/29/10 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 9
oh dear gawd... DD: It was going to be sooner or later when David found out but now. I feel so bad for Bill. ;_______; poor bill. I really hope they are ok..even though tom is in deep trouble. :/ There is going to be a happy ending right?!?! ;_; I am scared but exticed to read the next chapter. D: Keep up the awesome work~ :D *gives you sugary goodness* :D
Author's Response: Yep, it had to be either very soon or much later on, and much later on would mean nothing really happened, which would have been a little dull. So it had to be now. But yes, poor Bill!!! He should be okay, eventually, I think I'm going to make this have a happy ending, but God knows what they'll go through before then. Next chapter will be up soon! *eats sugary goodness* yum :D
Date: 04/29/10 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 9
oh no! i hope Bill gets out and Tom does too!!! i love this~ *stares at inbox for update*
Author's Response: It's so bad! But hopefully they'll get out soon, everything will be okay, and fluffy bunnies will rule the world. I'll update soon!
Date: 04/29/10 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 9
Grrrr I hate David and Luis! But great story by the way! Everything about Bill is so mysterious, and I'm dying to know about his paper hearts...
Author's Response: I hate them with venom. Lots of venom. But thank you! And his paper hearts will come in again, I promise.