aaah! billi got out, yay! but thats probably gonna mean bad news later...suspense!!! gonna read next chapppie xD

awww...gusti cares!! that's so sweet!! and hopefully tom can get the information that he needs...

omg!!! thats so terrible! and disgusting!!! sadddddd :( oh shit they have tom now what will they do to him??

wowww ;D
We needed that.

I loved it. (: It was hot and sweet. ^-^
You're an excellent writer.
I like the sexy side of Bill, a bit more than his weaker state. It's fun when there's Tom, and his little reactions to it. ;D hehe.

"I've got this one".....nice time. Just...nice. lmao

I'm going to go jump off a cliff if Tom is just another one of Bill's paper hearts D':

well, i won't say I didn't enjoy it, but this is the first time i have something to object on this fic. I mean i perfectly understand what you were aiming at with Bill's kind of split personality, the one which has learned that 'nothing is private' and for which having sex is only a routine; the other is the shy, slightly childish Bill under the veneer of a seasoned pro. But after the last lines of the previous chapter, Bill portraid as heartbreakingly confused and mentally fragile, it just didn't make sense. Either Tom should have put a stop to the way Bill, probably out of reflex, started to behave telling him it's not how it should be with them, or it should just have been the shy Bill. I hope you know what I'm getting at and I also hope you won't get offended, but this story has so far been one of the best I have ever read, a real gem and I seriously believe that this chapter was a step in the wrong direction. I would even consider rewriting and reposting it. *runs for cover* god, I really hope I haven't taken too much liberty with this. I adore your writing and this story is just too good to have even one small mistake like this left in it. Feel free to scream my head off if you feel, I've gone too far.

Author's Response: Hey, don't worry, I totally understand :D Of course, now you've pointed it out it looks mindbreakingly obvious...you're right, it doesn't really make a lot of sense. So I WILL redo it, and then post it alongside the other one as an alternative. Thank you so much, too, because isn't this the point of a review? To say 'yeah, good job' if it's worked, or 'no, no, that didn't make any sense' if it didn't? I'd much rather people told me what they were thinking if something isn't quite right. So thank you and don't worry about ever going too far, as long as you've given me something to work on I don't mind :D

I appreciate the sexy goodness of this chapter :)

oh wow. never thought that they'd jump right into it, but it's awesome :)

I really like this story. :) But I feel as though Bill and Tom's relationship is progressing very fast, and possibly unrealistically considering all of the trauma Bill's been through. I have a hard time believing that someone who was raped continuously for most of his life would be so open and free about sharing their body without some sort of mental instability or flashbacks. But that's just my opinion. I still enjoyed the chapter, nonetheless.