Date: 05/03/10 12:55 am Title: Chapter 12
Ahhhh!!! OMG!!!! Bill cant hate Tom... Update soon please.. I hate not knowing wats happenin wat if it aint Bill callin and it David...Ewwww... worried and sad... :[
Date: 05/02/10 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
You came up with a great idea, you really did lol. I am excited to keep reading too, it sounds interesting.
Date: 05/02/10 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh my god!
Want to know what will happen! You know im totally addicted to your fic!
XoXo!
Date: 05/02/10 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 12
but it can be silent and viberate!!! oh god please tell me Bill will still forgive Tom, he needs help. i totally didnt think youd make Bill snap like that.. it wasnt a part of his character at all. Tell me Bill make the taxi turn around and take him back to Tom? they cant part even once with tears like that... too sad. i dunno, you need to clean up that mess.. those boys need each other just as much as Bill needs to be away from david...
Date: 05/02/10 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 12
Nein! this is way to sad, ugh Tom can be such an idiot sometimes! Ugh! I can't wait for the next chapter hopefully Tom will see that Bill tried calling him before something else happens....but still good chapter
Date: 05/02/10 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 11 (2)
I think this 2nd version of chapter 11 made a lot more sense... not that the 1st version didnt make sense, but it didnt fit with the story as well as this one did. v.1 felt like they rushed into bed a bit too soon, perhaps before Bill was mentally ready, and Bill was acting too normal. I think it was really smart to write v.2... it's a lot more constructive to this story, like you can see Bill developing in it, and it feels like it means something. Very sweet. :)
Date: 05/02/10 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 12
the situation is going from bad to worse!!! ;_;
pick up the damn phone tom!!!(even though i have a feeling its not really bill calling)
Date: 05/02/10 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 11 (2)
awwww! This ones to cute! I kind of like it a little better than the other one cause it seems moe bill like but either way they both are good. :3
Date: 05/02/10 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 12
oh no-Tom, check your phone!! I can imagine it's Bill after he's been "punished' or maybe he's changed his mind and want's to come back to Tom...can't wait to find out!!
Date: 05/02/10 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 12
That made me cry
Date: 05/02/10 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 12
That made me cry
Date: 05/02/10 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 12
Eh this chapter kind of...doesn't fit with the rest of the story either lol.
Date: 05/02/10 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 12
To u fucking moron pick up ur damn phone
Date: 05/02/10 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 12
Aaaah! tomi put his fat foot in his mouthhh!!! but silend mode?!?!?!?!? nooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!! you're killing me here, hahaha. love it!
Date: 05/02/10 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 12
More plz! It's addicting! Btw, I love a whole lot more version 2 of chapter 11 :o)
Date: 05/02/10 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh shit. I didn't see it coming. You managed to throw me off guard here completely. I can understand Tom's reasons, but sending Bill back to that hellhole is just a no go.
Also, I can't tell you how happy I am that you decided to rewrite the previous chapter. Now it's perfect as all the other chapters and I have nothing to object so I can sink back into my usual state of total adoration of you.:)
Date: 05/02/10 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 11 (2)
i like it. yahhh this one is better, tho the other one was still fun to read :)
Date: 05/02/10 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 12
I really like this :)
I enjoy the storyline, but I think it's developed a little too fast, like the falling in love at the click of a finger type thing, although thats just my opinion.
Either way, it's still a really good story, and you write it well. Love the timed updates too!
Well done sweetie!
Date: 05/02/10 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh no, it's not Bill :(
I hate when they fight. And this was so sad. I kind of sympathize with both of them, really. Poor things. Bill just doesn't want to go back and Tom doesn't know how to support him :/
I hope they make up ;___;