Date: 05/03/10 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 6
I wonder how many people went and looked up a Facebook page for Tom after reading that lol. Anyway, you're doing a really nice jonb, the plot seems nice and elaborate.
Date: 05/03/10 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 5
Poor Bill. You're doing a good job with this story too, I like it a lot.
Date: 05/03/10 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 13
“They leaked a single off his new album and I’ve got it as my new ringtone.” - this made me laugh...poor tomi.
and the message was brilliant :)
Date: 05/03/10 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ha, Tom better get a hold of his dad and get A LOT of things settled out lol. God :/ let's see how this goes with Bill.
Date: 05/03/10 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 3
Well we all know he has to go back. I have a pretty good idea of how things are for Bill but I am excited to find out rather I am right or wrong lol. This is good so far
Date: 05/03/10 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 13
oh Georg!! :DD What an awesome friend!! :DDD and Well at least now Tom has a stable job :DDD Things are slowing going in the right direction :]
Date: 05/03/10 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
Well he got in, that's a start. Now let's see what's wrong with Bill.
Date: 05/03/10 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 13
YAYY! :3
Tomi's in!
Review's sucky... I'm sorry.. Love the fic though! :3
Date: 05/03/10 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 13
Yay! I'm so glad that Bill isn't upset with Tom! Can't wait for more! XD
Date: 05/03/10 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 13
Yey! It's picking up now:3 I love it, really.
Date: 05/03/10 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 13
*Screams and squeals* Have I mentioned recently that Georg is actually my favourite member? lol *loves on him*
Date: 05/03/10 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 13
AwWWW Tom-orrow! Tom-orrow I love you Tom-orrow. hahah! Please keep updating Im really exited to know what will happen!
Date: 05/03/10 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 13
Yayyy!!! Tom finally has a way of getting messages back to Bill!!
Date: 05/03/10 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 13
This chapter was a definate WIN!!! Bill was so smart to leave a message like that for Tom. I thought the "Tom-tomorrow" did seem a bit out of place...because it was!
And Wow, Tom could easily be in my English class if he reads that far into things. All we do in that class is disect the "hidden meanings" in almost every boring piece of literature created by man, only to discover that there was no meaning behind it, just a guy with a pen who wanted to write a good story. =)
Date: 05/03/10 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 11 (2)
Aw, I like this alternative: 3
Date: 05/03/10 11:38 am Title: Chapter 12
*Sniffles* Bill's struck again, hasn't he?
Date: 05/03/10 09:38 am Title: Chapter 11 (2)
I think i like this second version better. It's more cohesive with the previous chaps.
Date: 05/03/10 05:04 am Title: Chapter 12
oh! Bill :[ and Tom.. *hugs them*
what a cliffhanger.. :D but i dunno i am a bit cynical and i don't think that is Bill calling.. >>;; I dunno why i but i think it might be David.. 0_________0;; i do hope i am wrong...
oh~ i did read the rewritten version of chapter 11 :D sorry to lazy to comment on another box.. but i just wanted to say it better :D cause Bill and Tom's personality flowed better :D but the original is still good :DDD
thank you for the super speedy updates :DD again .. LOL :D i can't wait for the next chapter :D