Date: 05/04/10 03:40 am Title: Chapter 12
ah!!! our poor boys. tom--remember gustav!!
Date: 05/04/10 03:28 am Title: Chapter 11 (2)
Oh, I liked this one much better. I think it flows more with both Bill's and Tom's characters. very nice.
Date: 05/04/10 12:27 am Title: Chapter 13
omg!! yay! i was so devastated when i read the beginning and realized itd been a while. yayyy secret messages!!!! i sooo cant wait for the next one! and bother those other waitresses, they mustnt rag on someone so awesome. just be like "if you knew who i was on the net you wouldnt be such a bitch" ahaha no thats lame but lol
Date: 05/03/10 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 13
ahhhhhhhh please don't let him fuck it up this time, OKAY??? He's an exec now, and anyway money doesn't fucking matter, just let him get Bill out of there and worry about how to support him later. I will not forgive you if you leave Bill trapped in there much longer! >:O
Date: 05/03/10 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 13
awww that was ever so clever and adorable! ;) i hope Tom will take this chance to make up with Bill. can't wait until your next update!
Date: 05/03/10 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 13
Awh, Bill is sending Tom messages :') How sweet.
This is just too adorable. Tom needs to go and take Bill away from his house as soon as he can, and then they can go and live happily ever after :')
Date: 05/03/10 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 13
It took me like, five seconds to finally see the message. xD I saw Tom-tomorrow first, but then I couldn't fine "Tom I miss you."
that's clever. :D
haha, it made my smile. :D
Date: 05/03/10 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 13
Hahahaha lmao. It was so funny XD Everything of that, it's kind of fun to see a depress Tom over the fact that he can not rescue Bill (And that's not the fun part, you know?)
Kisses
-Loves
Date: 05/03/10 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 10
Wow, I like your realism on the subject and I like how Bill got out. Let's see how the search for him goes lol.
Date: 05/03/10 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 13
Aww. Too cute. It better be a message worth while tom!!!
Date: 05/03/10 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 12
answer the phone you numb nutts!! >:(
Date: 05/03/10 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 9
Great, here we go.
Date: 05/03/10 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 8
Awwww, how cute, S'nice too
Date: 05/03/10 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 11 (2)
I like this chapter better than the original. It seems a bit more realistic. and I like how Tom took the time to make Bill comfortable and understand the aspects of a "relationship", instead of jumping straight into the sex. Which bill is already accustomed too, whether consensual or not.
Date: 05/03/10 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 13
OMG!!!!! OMG!!! OMG!!! wow....omg! so sweet and amazing and.....wow! Update soon!
LOve
Ashley(formerly hummer07)
Date: 05/03/10 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 13
Love that Bill sent Tom a message!
Can't wait!:]
Date: 05/03/10 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 13
Awwww happy
Date: 05/03/10 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 7
We'll see >.> Bill has been fed so many lies to tell.