Date: 05/14/10 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 16
Wow. I knew Jost was gonna pull some crap like this. Excellent chapter. I hope Bill is making out okay.
Date: 05/14/10 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 16
Wow. Poor Tom. I feelso sorry for him :( I wonder what's going tohappen.
Date: 05/14/10 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 16
oh poor Tom! D: i had a feeling this would happen but I really hoped it wouldn't. regardless, i liked the chapter and im looking forward to your next update!
Date: 05/14/10 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 16
Poor tomi! :( I hope David doesn't get the sick idea of making tom into the new Bill, seeing as he's even more unwilling than Bill. :/
Date: 05/14/10 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 16
Oh, and please write a painfully sweet, beautiful scene somewhere along the way with mutual hurt/comfort - well, the hurt's already done, so I guess just mutual comfort - but them being gentle and sweet and loving to each other and slowly tending to each other's wounds. That kind of thing is always heavenly.
Date: 05/14/10 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 16
As heartless as this is going to sound, I think this is a good thing - well, obviously not for poor Tom, but for the overall plot and their relationship. I'd be pretty furious if I thought you were going to leave him there or have him permanently broken, but I have some faith in your direction towards a positive, loving ending, and I think Tom having suffered what Bill has suffered will ultimately strengthen their bond and give them more compassion for each other. Now - get him out of there soon! And spring Bill from prison somehow. Man, you've got a whole host of problems to sort out. xDDD
Date: 05/14/10 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 16
im starting to get piss off with this story. i might have to stop reading.
Date: 05/14/10 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 16
WTF? THIS IS HORRIBLE! not the fic...whats happening....OH NOEZ! update soon i want it all to be okay!Love,
Ashley
Date: 05/14/10 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 16
Awh :(
Now Tom knows what it's like to be Bill and see that stuff all the time ;__; Poor thing. He has to go and get Bill and bring him back home with him :/
Date: 05/14/10 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 16
aww no poor tomi if i was bill i would feel like total shit if i found out he took my place and it was kinda my fault
Date: 05/14/10 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 16
........i don't know what to say.
Date: 05/14/10 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 16
ooooh yes! i was like, dude there havent been any updates on my tracked since yesterday, come on paper hearts! *clicks refresh* YES! hahaha. omg omg! poor tom! poor bill! that's horrid....reminds me of snuff films, some people are just so disgusting they deserve to burn to death over and over.
Date: 05/14/10 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 16
Poor Tom!!! :( Hope Bill and Georg rescue him soon.
Love this! Can't wait! :]
Date: 05/14/10 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 16
Mein Gott...
I'm gonna kill him...
Date: 05/14/10 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 16
Oh my GOD! Poor Tom! Is Bill coming for him? Where did Bill even go?
Date: 05/14/10 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 16
Omggg poor tommiiii! D;;;
Update soon hun!!
Date: 05/14/10 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 16
I'm probably going to sound creepy for saying this, but I absolutely loved this chapter!! I've been waiting so long to catch Jost pulling some kind of crazy BDSM trick like he did in this chapter. It sucks that Tomi had to be on the receiving end of it (literally), but now he know what's really going on! Although, gasp! He was totally high on meds the whole time, so will he remember?! I'm so incredibly excited for the next chapter now!! :)
Date: 05/14/10 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 16
Tomi... *cries* Why did they do this to him? TOMIII! Now I want Billa to come and save him. *sobs*