Date: 05/24/10 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 18
SUSPENSE!!!!!!!! :DDD
*claps*
this is going deliciously. Bravo. Keep it coming.
Date: 05/24/10 11:10 am Title: Chapter 18
Hm, I wouldn't even think that Luis could have been a bigger threat to them. But now, there seems to be some very scary possibilities left for this story.
Date: 05/24/10 04:09 am Title: Chapter 18
Yay! David's in jail! If only Luis was there with him.
Love this! Can't wait! :D
Date: 05/24/10 01:11 am Title: Chapter 18
yay~ justice is being served!! sort-of...
this looks like it is gonna be a happy ending which makes me happy~ :] I can't wait to see more~ :D
Date: 05/23/10 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 18
zomg, i hope luis got shipped to mexico or something... i totes hate that dude... please let the boys stay safe?
Date: 05/23/10 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 18
David, insane? Conniving, yes.
Something tells me Luis is going to be hiding in a dark corner somewhere ready to kill them both.
Please tell me I'm wrong!
More soon!
Date: 05/23/10 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 18
Yay, I'm so happy for this update. Can't wait for more.
Date: 05/23/10 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 18
Oh no, they can't forget about Luis, because that's when he comes back and makes them all fear for their lives and Bill ends up almost getting killed and Tom beats the crap out of him while gaining a terrible injury and then there's tears and sadness and...and... ;_____;
Oh, but I was curious...in the summary you talk about the paper hearts Bill has in his bedroom, but I don't think you even mentioned them once in the fic. I was just curious where they went to or if you just didn't mention them because they weren't really an important part of the fic and the title was more symbolic than literal ;P
I can't wait for this to end, not because I'm excited for the end but more because I want to see what happens :D
Date: 05/23/10 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 18
JUSTICEEEEEE or at least half of it...luissss dun dun dunnnnnn!!!!
Date: 05/23/10 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 18
DAMN STRAIGHT! Jost is in jail! woooooooooooo! but uh oh...WHAT ABOUT LUIS???? update soon my dear, you know i love this fic and cant get enough!
Love,
Ashley
Date: 05/23/10 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 18
OMG! D:
I want to know what will happen!
Continue soon!
XoXo
Date: 05/23/10 03:24 am Title: Chapter 17
Hmmmm. Wondering about Luis now. Was he just working for David or were they partners?
Love this! Can't wait for more! :D
Your job sounds awesome!
Date: 05/22/10 09:21 am Title: Chapter 17
I have no words... o:
Date: 05/22/10 03:41 am Title: Chapter 17
oh nein! please let the boys stay safe? i hate luis so much... come on gusti, haul your ass inside!!!!!
Date: 05/22/10 02:25 am Title: Chapter 17
:D
Tom sure is dealing with he rape well.
Date: 05/22/10 12:39 am Title: Chapter 17
Luis and Gusatv should have been hauled away with David(IMO). Maybe they are the mastermind's behind the whole thing, I mean look how eager Gustav was to get Bill out of jail! God I hope they don't make movie's of Bill & Tom together.
Really looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 05/22/10 12:21 am Title: Chapter 16
Damn Jost to hell-that man and his goonie's better pay! Poor Tom-I can't believe it. I'm biting my nail's trying to figure out why Bill did what he did...
Now to the next chapter to catch up...
Date: 05/22/10 12:18 am Title: Chapter 17
You just had to build all the fluff up and then kill it with Luis going back into the house, didn't you? -___-
Oh well, this was good to come home from graduation to and I'm very happy you're finding enough time to write the rest of it. That job sounds really awesome, by the way XD And so yeah, I wish I could say more but your talent just blows me away, and you deserve all the reviews you get :)