Date: 06/06/10 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 10
i just feel like crying for poor billa. i really do love this.
Date: 06/06/10 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 19
Nooo!!!! everything was going so nicely :( i hope that bill gets a bit less spacey with time. god everything about what was going on is horrendous. luis needs to go to prison bad
Date: 06/06/10 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 9
i did not see that coming in only the 9th chapter. o.o LOVE IT!
Date: 06/06/10 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 8
David probably had bill for a long time before he turned 18 to have him like this. poor poor billa. it's like, mental abuse he is putting on bill to make him feel worthless and that david knows what is best for him, and i bet if david says that what he is doing is good then he won't really know what he feels cause david is controlling him? wow that was a run-on sentence if i ever saw one....
Date: 06/06/10 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 7
i still think they are doing something to bill. grr stupid david. Haha Georg is just being funny in this chapter. very possessive of that iphone. ^_^
Date: 06/06/10 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 6
so i believe bill is being forced and that is why they drug him?
Date: 06/06/10 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 19
That is a horrible cliffhanger to leave us with. Please update soon, because I'm really curious to know what will happen!!
Damn. Right when Tom and Bill get all cute, Luis (the creepy asshole) has to suddenly apparate to the scene. WTF Luis?! Seriously.
Like I said before, please update soon, I really love this story!! And congrats on the nomination!! I'm nominated too!! Good luck, I'll definately vote for you :)
Date: 06/06/10 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 19
OMGOMG!
O: so long waiting!
was worth it!
Love it ;3
Date: 06/06/10 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 19
Um. Passenger lists don't actually work that way. You have to physically show up at the airport and check yourself in before you make the final list of passengers. :
Date: 06/06/10 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 19
That was one hell of a cliffhanger to leave us with
Date: 06/06/10 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 3
oh no! what is gonna happen to his phone?! and why are they forcing these pills down his throat? okay they are not physically doing that, but get the picture
Date: 06/06/10 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
oh silly drunk tom...
Date: 06/06/10 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
dun dun duuuuuuuuuun. liking it already
Date: 06/06/10 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 19
aww i love this story :) someone kill luis before i jump in this story and do it
Date: 06/06/10 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 19
Revenge?! I can't wait for the next chapter! Oh, and where exactly is the 19th chapter? I think you labeled this one incorrectly by accident. That's okay for the fact that you're writing such an interesting story.
Date: 06/06/10 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 19
Uh oh, hopefully Luis won't be able to get his revenge.
Date: 06/04/10 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 18
EH?! No more chapters! D: I started reading this yesterday, and as the angst and hurt/comfort whore I am, I loved it! It's sad and heartbreaking, just how I like it xD I hope this Lous guy stays out of the picture, I don't like how he's still hanging around >_<
There were a few errors here and there, but nothing that distracted from the story.
So basically I loved this idea you had and yeah, I'm definitely tracking this.
Date: 05/27/10 04:19 am Title: Chapter 18
half way there boys! now they just need to capture luis. bill has lots of money, they should hire some detectives.
Date: 05/26/10 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 18
ANd Luis Cantos is comming after them, isn´t he?