Date: 04/14/10 05:10 am Title: New York Lights
Awww the end of this was really sweet. x]
I'm glad Axel finally stood up to his dad.
And that his brothers were there for him when he needed them. :]
Great job. :]
Date: 04/13/10 08:02 pm Title: New York Lights
Oh, and I forgot to mention...the Axel/Jörg thing was really sweet. I'm going to be boring and say I can relate, because my mom is a psychobitch and I'm planning on pulling an Axel when I'm eighteen and able to get out of the house. "Fuck you, Mom. Fuck you." So that was enjoyable :)
GO AXEL <3
Author's Response: Axel: -smiles-
Date: 04/13/10 08:00 pm Title: New York Lights
I really like the relationship you portrayed between the three brothers. Even though Lyric is an original character it's like he's been there all along and I really love that closeness. It's so sweet :) Axel's always going to come home to his Tomi and his Lyric.
I think it's pretty cool that you have this planned out to the point where you can write a oneshot that's post-story. It's also pretty good publicity for St. Hell because people are getting glimpses at it, pre- and post-, and it will make a lot of people (like me) want to read St. Hell as soon as they have a chance to sit down and really get into the story :)
I don't want to be nitpicky, but you spelled 'past' wrong in the summary and I'm a spelling Nazi so it's bugging me xD The way you use it, it's spelled 'passed'. Feel free to ignore me as I'm such a terrible nitpicker at those kinds of things >.<
Anyway. I like the conciseness of each oneshot and you can tell you really love your story, which I adore <3
Author's Response: aww thanks so much hon. i'm glad you like it and GUH!!! i knew it was wrong. i saw it before i hit "post story" and was like gotta fix... then i got distracted and... yeaaaaaaaaah. buuuuuut, i'm glad you like this ^^
Date: 04/13/10 07:59 pm Title: New York Lights
OMG! You tell him Axel!
*Hugs* I am so happy for you standing up to Jorg like that! You definitely showed him who the better person is!
Definitely Love all these one-shots. they all are so great :)
Looking forward to more of St. Hell though!!
Author's Response:
Axel: -tenses slightly- u-uhm... -looks at Tomi-
Tom: -carefully pulls Axel away- Uh, no touching, pleasekthanks.
Alcie: sorry. Axel kind of has a don't-touch thing. :D but i'm glad you liked the story for sure. ^^
Date: 04/13/10 06:08 pm Title: New York Lights
YOU TELL HIM AXEL! :D
[woop woop *hands in the airr*]
I liked this onee,
not alot of one-shots [even if in a series] are enough to hold up on their own, you know? this onee can ^-^
plus, i think i love Axel :O
[there i said it. and i can't take it back xDDD]
& i had to leave you a review,
you said they are the crack you feed your babies, so i hope this is a delicious snack *-*
*faving*
----Samantha. (:
Author's Response:
Alcie: awwwwwwwwwww well thanks. i'm glad you liked this. ^^ and it is, it is. -pets them both-
Axel: -blinks... blinks...- ... thanks...? -smiles slightly-
Alcie: -giggles and pets Axel more- ^^
Date: 04/13/10 05:55 pm Title: New York Lights
Now you KNOW I can't let Lyric into this review in fear of giving too much away, HOWEVER, he sends his love and said to 'Tell Rose Ima smack him for scarin the shit outta me'. *snickers* ANYWAYS... *tackleclings* OMFG!! So proud of you Axel! *MUAH* Fuckin' Jorg and just suck it, right? *luffles all over you and Nony and dances* HAPPY TIMES! *denies sugar intake* >.>
Author's Response:
Alcie: -gigglefits and pets- you're so cute. ^^ and i'll pass on Lyr's message and-and-and... HI 8D