Date: 04/23/10 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heineken and Marlboro Menthol Lights
Really interesting story ! I enjoyed it a lot, Bill's character is awesome !
Author's Response: *grins* I'm glad you liked it ^_^ this was my pet project for a bit lol. and yes, I think Bill's character is awesome as well ^_^
Date: 04/15/10 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heineken and Marlboro Menthol Lights
Nice work again! I always ölove your way to characterize people and create atmospheres and once again, I didn't need to get disappointed.
You know, this fic reminded me of a movie Fight Club. No, not the plot or even characters, but the scenes, the visual world of it. A bit dark alleys, a bit twisted people and strangers passing by in almost rusty colored environment, where everything and everyone are just slightly twisted. Out of place. But not too much, not nutcases or seriel killers. It's like a bar you step in and you see people there and this could be almost anyone's story there. Little weird, but not too much.
So yes, I liked this once again. The emotions and atmosphere and characters. A short moment quickly rushing by and disappearing and stories like millions alike all over, in every city. But unique for those who are inside that story.
This didn't make any sense since I'm super tired, it's 4am here and I should be in bed already. Anyways, wanted to say that I liked it like I always like your fics :)
Author's Response: *grins* I'm always happy when I see you review my works. I value your opinion so much.
I'm really happy that you like all of that, like REALLY happy, especially since I think this oneshot was all about characterization and the atmosphere.
I ADORE the movie Fight Club, so you comparing it, it made me grin so hard. xD I think that's the way Tom sees things, all skewered and disproportioned, because he himself is so skewered and disproportioned, but it's real, cause I think that most people, see the world differently than others.
So I'm really happy that you liked it. This was a 2-3 month effort that kept kicking my ass. xD
and it made sense. I promise xD
Date: 04/14/10 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heineken and Marlboro Menthol Lights
lol Hhhmmmm maybe I wont read those XD J/K
Author's Response: lolol <333
Date: 04/14/10 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heineken and Marlboro Menthol Lights
Oh this was really good. I love how even though you gave Tom's background he still seemed vague, and Bill was a mystery, too. I love it when characters are vague without being incomplete or boring. You did a wonderful job of creating Tom and Bill's characters!
Author's Response: yay *flutterclaps* I'm glad you think so! I knew when I started this, that it was going to be a oneshot, and I've had oneshots that were 500 words and oneshots that were 6000+ words, but I think that it worked, have it this short, with enough information about them so that you get the gist of who they are, but not that it seems boring. ^^ anyways, thanks for reading and reviewing, and I'm GLAD that you enjoyed it ^_^
Date: 04/14/10 11:18 am Title: Chapter 1: Heineken and Marlboro Menthol Lights
yes I did!! -glomps shelly- love yah!!! lol..
Author's Response: *huggles you back* I'm glad you did! and I love you too <333
Date: 04/14/10 01:39 am Title: Chapter 1: Heineken and Marlboro Menthol Lights
Damn, this was good. Such a heavy feeling here and I really liked it. I thought it interesting that Tom didn't really think about how many guys Bill had slept with, specifically, but he did wonder how many people he'd walked backwards with. As if that's more of a show of trust to Tom than the actual sex, which kinda makes sense. This was just very well done! :D
Author's Response: *grins* I'm glad you think it was good. I think almost every time you read one of my oneshots, you mention a heavy feeling, and maybe it's because I play around with angst so much; granted, this wasn't nearly as angsty as it could've been. xD
And I like that you liked that line, cause I wrote that, and I liked it, so I left it, but when I was writing the part right before Tom licked Bill, I wondered for about 2-3 minutes if I should have mentioned Tom worrying about how many people Bill has slept with. But, I think I omitted it, because it wasn't something he cared about. Bill is brutally honest about what he does, and he doesn't regret it or make excuses, and I think that's enough for Tom. Cause he regrets so much about his life, and makes excuses (granted appropriate ones) about his OCD/obsessions, and to meet someone that doesn't care, that is that comfortable with who they are, Tom doesn't care what they've done to get there, or in Bill's case, who they've done to get there. xD
Anyways, I'm rambling, as usual, but I'm happy that you enjoyed it. ^_^
Date: 04/13/10 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heineken and Marlboro Menthol Lights
lol nice I love Bill's character this time around :3
Author's Response: Lol, yay. I don't think i've written anything yet where Bill's personality is hated. well...maybe 1-2 things. xD
Date: 04/13/10 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heineken and Marlboro Menthol Lights
I giggled after i finished reading this.
Idk, it was so cute but so not at the same time. I found Tom ridiculously adorable for no reason. :D
And Bill, Bill just had a sexy persona.
I really enjoyed it. I'm still smiling as I type this. :)
Author's Response: Lol, This was more mellow for me (Tom at the end was cute though) xD But I'm glad you liked it. And Bill is just always sexy xD
Date: 04/13/10 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heineken and Marlboro Menthol Lights
Really loved this, will there be more of this story?
Author's Response: I'm glad you loved it. ^_^ and as of now, no. xD I've got 849058204 fics on my list, and I don't have a plot for a sequel developed, but if one comes, I won't hesitate to write it xD
Date: 04/13/10 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heineken and Marlboro Menthol Lights
What an interesting PULL they had between them. Tom followed Bill even though he hated that he came with his two hated vices. I love how Bill is so certain he's going to have Tom even though the man keeps fighting it. I love how Tom keeps wanting him and not wanting but you can only fight Bill for so long before he entices you and reels you in. But Tom comes so willingly anyway.
I gotta tell ya, I SQUIRMED when reading the kiss with the beer. That is so fucking sexy. *________________*
I would say 'fuck it' too if I were Tom and such a hottie like Bill was sitting on my lap trying to kiss my tonsils with a beer and cigarette aftertaste, only just so I can get to the piece of heaven that is just pure BILL.
*eyes glaze over* Mmmmm, yeah...
And man, when Bill says get naked, you get naked! No questions asked!
The licking of Bill just...yeah. *squirms again*
The hammering of Bill's prostate...yeah. *sweats and squirms eagerly*
The biting, the intensity, nggggggggghhh, that was all hot, even if it was so fast.
And that final scene, it's just the point where he kinda admits defeat and just takes Bill as he comes, vices and all and I loved it. XD
Yeah baby, of course you're going to call!
Author's Response: Lol, like with Liar (It Takes One To Know One), I think the entire purpose of the fic was to show the pull between them, the banter, the tension (good tension lol). And i don't think Tom's fought anything at all, tbh. xD He's OCD about liquor and cigs, but I think once he realizes that to have Bill he'll need to accept that, he's actually really good about it. xD
and HAHAHAH yay for squirming! I had that scene in my head for AGES. xD same as the cigarette scene. xD
and the licking of Bill came outta no where, but I'm glad you loved it xD
Date: 04/13/10 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 1: Heineken and Marlboro Menthol Lights
I feel like I at least read the beginning to this before xD Beer & cigarettes ARE nasty xDD
Author's Response: Lololol, I might've sent it to you. >.> I don't remember. xD And I'm addicted to cigarettes, so I'll agree with the beer thing. xD