Date: 12/11/10 12:28 am Title: Let's Make Them Wonder About Us
Confusion reigns! That was really great and I wonder if maids really do that in hotels. I imagine they probably do.
Date: 10/22/10 04:29 pm Title: Let's Make Them Wonder About Us
Lol! Well that was such an interesting story to leave, I like the part with the maids, figuring things out! Really good idea, I liked it :)
Author's Response: Heheee, thank you, agaaain. :D I'm soo glad you're enjoying these stories!
Date: 06/04/10 09:04 am Title: Let's Make Them Wonder About Us
Kyaa~ I have big smile xD Very big xD
*giggle*
I love the scane which you described Tom. In the beginning. I love it! And Bill? I love the love between them. It's... just amazing.
But the end?:D You shoot me xD It's just great xD
Date: 04/27/10 01:28 am Title: Let's Make Them Wonder About Us
Now that's a good story. Cheeky little buggers.
Date: 04/19/10 01:16 pm Title: Let's Make Them Wonder About Us
Haha,, ! I love stories like this! Them getting discovered!:D
Date: 04/16/10 01:07 am Title: Let's Make Them Wonder About Us
I've always loved reading a story with a 3rd person's pov, but you did this one exceptionally well. Good job. Also, I hope you don't mind that I've tracked it
Date: 04/13/10 11:06 pm Title: Let's Make Them Wonder About Us
hehe
smart ladies
Date: 04/13/10 10:59 pm Title: Let's Make Them Wonder About Us
Haha! Poor woman is either gonna be traumatized or have to buy batteries on the way home. Nicely done! :D
Date: 04/13/10 01:46 am Title: Let's Make Them Wonder About Us
That was cute!
I totally laughed when I envisioned the conversation between the maids and their reactions.
Date: 04/12/10 11:47 pm Title: Let's Make Them Wonder About Us
Hehe. That was a great plot idea, THAT I thought was brilliant, however I thought the execution could have been better.
The maids were the best part I think, funny, even though the dialogue seemed a bit fake.
Unfortunately I didn't get into the sex scene very much.
I think this story needs a re-read, to iron out some stuff, and play up the idea of leaving a "story" in the room. IMO it would tie everything together better.
Not bad tho, still enjoyable.
I liked your maids. lol. :)
Date: 04/12/10 08:12 pm Title: Let's Make Them Wonder About Us
*________*
NOMNOMNOMNOM.
I love your writing.
Author's Response: Aww, but YOU MADE ME HUNGRY FOR NOMNOM BURGERS!!! XD thanks for reading, bb
Date: 04/12/10 07:26 pm Title: Let's Make Them Wonder About Us
"Lovebirds" XD
This.. made.. me smile.
The conversation between the maids was really funny and amusing ha.
Twins= geniuses.
Author's Response: :D Yay, I'm glad it did. Indeed, the twins are geniuses. At least, I like to think so. ;)
Date: 04/12/10 06:29 pm Title: Let's Make Them Wonder About Us
haha now everytime the twins are in a hotel il remember this fic xD
Author's Response: hehe, nice. thanks for reading :D
Date: 04/12/10 06:27 pm Title: Let's Make Them Wonder About Us
OMG, great story! I loved it :D And, well... sometimes, I wish I WAS a maid who knew interesting stories like these ;D Seriously loved it! *.*
Author's Response: Ohhh, I would probably pay to clean up after those boys. ;D Anyway, thanks!! I'm happy you loved it! ^_^