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Reviewer: tomik Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/10 03:14 pm Title: Early Sunsets Over Monroeville

Wow. I wonder, considering certain historical facts about Shakespeare's plays, if this is actually closer to what old William envisioned than what we've seen elsewhere.

Author's Response: What do you mean? 

Reviewer: tomik Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/10 02:49 pm Title: Leave Out All The Rest.

i'm reading this and trying to keep my head in it but i'm being flooded with ccalls etc about Tom overdosing on Viagra. Our Tom is smarter than that right?

Author's Response:

LMAO!! I never thought that he would need help getting up?? But I have heard something similar, I heard her got a Three day boner.

Now THAT just happens to be one of the funniest things EVER! 

Reviewer: tomik Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/10 02:16 pm Title: Two Is Better Than One

Simone: Lord Montague (Am I the only one who think's it'd be awesome to have Simone as a gang leader?)

My country is close to elections. We might be having our first ever female prime minister ever. Simone as gang leader rocks.

Author's Response:

That's awesome!! I wish Australia would get a female Prime minister! Right now we have a lesbian, Asian woman who is close to being PM :D She is SO fucking cool!! lmao

 

Reviewer: Haleema Kaaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/10 02:00 pm Title: Early Sunsets Over Monroeville

Damn but this just made me so SAD D': Andreas was in love with LAILA? I did NOT see that one :'O

Author's Response: :'( I know,but the saddenst part is yet to come!

Reviewer: frida_kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/10 01:49 am Title: Leave Out All The Rest.

ohhmybill!! he died :[

Author's Response: lol ikr!

Reviewer: RazorSoftLie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/10 03:23 am Title: Two Is Better Than One

I officially love you even more now! I totally agree with you there! He is just too hot for his own good! X0)
I hope you feel better! Being sick suck, but it does give one the opportunity to read twincesty goodness!

Author's Response:

LOL THANKS!!

You are seriously Kick ass.

I PMed you lol :D 

Reviewer: RazorSoftLie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/10 03:11 am Title: Drowning Lessons

I love you. Just thought I'd let you know. I mean, not only did you put Man-Fucking-Zini in the story, but you made him epic AND shirtless *drools* He's epically shirtless!
Awesomest Priest ever!
Love
~RazorSoftLie

Author's Response:

LAMOO!!!! You just made my day sick at home soooooooo much better :D :D :D :D :D 

That was the best review :D Manzini is sex on legs, I swear. The Balloon Song is just fucking epic xD

Thanks so much!! 

Reviewer: cutupdreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/10 01:07 am Title: Leave Out All The Rest.

Oh, poor Georg. :( I feel so bad for them!

Anyway, another amazing chapter! Well done!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! Im so glad you liedk it :D :D

Reviewer: Haleema Kaaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/10 12:25 pm Title: Leave Out All The Rest.

Noo! I cried too! But at least Georg didn't die hating Tom like Mercucio did with Romeo

Author's Response:

I know lol I couldn't have ended him like that :(

Well... More shit is about to happen :/ we're gettin to the epic part of the story now :D

It may be a wile till I post again thogh :(

 

Thanks so much for the review :), you rock. 

Reviewer: Ariella1810 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/10 11:48 am Title: Leave Out All The Rest.

OMG BABE!!! THIS IS FUCKING AMAZING! IM totally splarging to you at school about this but FICH! Your writing is excellent, i love manzini, and how at least a quarter of the book is in bill's view, and OMG Y DID U MAKE ME CRY?!? WHY DID GEORG HAVE TO DIE?!? and the bit about how he knew? oh mine gott! liebe dich, leibling!amazing job! xxxxxx

Author's Response:

lol thanks?? Georg had to die because it's VERY important to the story lol, have you ever read Romeo And Juliet?? If you have you would get why :)

thank you lol 

Reviewer: cutupdreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/10 12:41 am Title: Drowning Lessons

awwww, but this chapter was cute!!! :) And I already loved it just because you used MCR's "Drowning Lessons". Amazing. Beautifully written. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

yay thank you :) lol, I LOVE MCR <3 I used to have such an obsession with Frerard, but now Im hooked on TWC :x lol

Thank you so muc, this means so much to me :)

Another chapter coming tomorrow :)

 

Reviewer: kaulitzlovr13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/10 11:41 pm Title: Drowning Lessons

DAMN! manzini...a priest. thats just awesome! i love the part where he tells them that they can make out. i mean what priest ever tells you that?

Author's Response:

lol I love Manzini, I HAD to have him in here somehow xD

lol, my beta added that for me an I laughed so hard after I read the chapter through lol

Thanks soooo much for the review!! 

Reviewer: frida_kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/10 11:40 pm Title: Drowning Lessons

i cant wait to read the next chapter!!
i love your story :]

Author's Response:

YAY!! thank you so much!! Im posting again tomorrow but then there may be a bit of  gap :/

Im so glad you lied it :) 

Reviewer: kaulitzlovr13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/10 12:52 am Title: Face Down

NOooooooooooo! no, no ,no ,no! dammit stupid bushido. damn i was screaming no so loud my cousin was giving me a 'wtf' look. poor bill! nooo

Author's Response:

LOL!! I know the feling, I do it all the time :D

I promise all will get better the next chapter :)

It sucks, I have to keep close to the sotry or it'll go everywhere and the next chapter was the one thing I was iffy about, but I decided to go crazy and off-stoy for this chpter :D

Thanks so much for your review :D <3 

Reviewer: cutupdreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/10 12:14 am Title: Face Down

poor Bill. :(

Author's Response:

I know :(

Thanks for reviewing :)

I promise everything is better in the next chapter :) 

Reviewer: broken2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/23/10 04:02 pm Title: Face Down

Oh poor Bill, I'm joining Tom on the " hate bushido" side!!!

Author's Response: lol, I know! I was never a fan of Bushido, but after I wrote this I never saw him the same xD

Reviewer: freedom-reader Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/10 01:47 am Title: My Heart.

Awwwww I love it! It's incredibly adorable! I'm just a bit upset because if this is exactly like Romeo and Juliet, I don't want Bill and Tom to die :(
MORE MORE MORE!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much :D :D :D

Im not gonna tell you how it ends ;) You're gonna have to wait and see :D

I have the next chapter written already, I don't know whether to post it today or over the weekend *Im in Australia, its Thursday night here :)*

Im so glad you liked it, thanks again :D 

Reviewer: cutupdreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/10 03:59 pm Title: My Heart.

so good. LOVE IT!

Author's Response: Yay!! Thank you so much!!

Reviewer: freedom-reader Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/10 05:10 pm Title: The (Shipped) Gold Standard.

OMG I LOVE IT!!! MORE MORE MORE MORE :D

Author's Response:

Thank yo so much!! Im so glad you liked it :D

The whoe story is written and beta'd upto chapter 7 so you should expect another chapter soon :D

Reviewer: kaulitzlovr13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/10 01:18 am Title: The (Shipped) Gold Standard.

AAAAAAH! can't wit for next chapter. i love the balcony scene. and OMg.....bushido as superman...O.O that's hilarious!

Author's Response:

lol I know :/ when i got the mental image of Bushido dressed as superman I laughed so hard that I couldn't breathe xD

Thank you sooo much!! 

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