I've always thought that Romeo and Juliet were really stupid for doing what they did but reading this version broke my heart. I cried so hard!! I love how you ended it with they dying at the same time. And poor Simone finding her son and (sortof) nephew there!

I really wish you would have altered the end.

Author's Response:

:) sorry, but I wanted to stick as closely to the story as I could... And I have some weird thing where I like stories that end badly :)

you just made my cry. This is absolutely beautiful. You're such an amazing writer

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Hahaha, I cried soooo much when tis ended!! haha!

OHHH MAH GAWD!
i am so loving this story and i've only read one chappy x]]]
It's really good hunnie,

Author's Response:

Yay, you read it!! :D :D

Thank you SO much!!! 

I am not crying. I am NOT crying! ...*sniff* It's just a cold all right! *sniff* oh man :'0(

As much as I didn't want them to die, I was expecting it. I really like how Tom didn't wimp out like Romeo and take poison and leave Bill to take the hard way out. And the whole 'His Romeo' and 'His Juliet' thing was so freaking cute in a really, really tragic way.

When I was reading Tom letting Busido go I was all "Good job Tom! Way to be the bett- ooh, nevermind." But (not) suprisingly, I was still fine with it :0)

And because I just know everyone is going to blame this on Manzini, I propose he goes into hiding and comes to live with me! Canada is pretty dang far away, so he'll be fine :0) And no, I'm totally not just using this as an Excuse to get Manzini for myself. So just pack him up and send him on his way, no shirts are required ;0) And I would ask you to send Gusti as well, but I'm pretty sure Laila would hunt me down and take him back.

Oh! One thing about the chapter before this one. I forgot to put it in my the review but I couldn't stop giggling during the funeral because I just kept imagining a shirtless Manzini giving a speech or even just standing at the back with his arms over said naked chest. That sentence was extremely long and I can't even pretend it wasn't a run-on sentece.

Anywho, back to this chapter. *Clears throat* IT'S OVER! NOOOOOOOO! *Insert dramatic death scene here* Gah, who will appreciate my amazing reviews now?

Author's Response:

LET THE TEARS FALL! LET IT ALL OUT! haha!

I know, everyone as expecting them to die, it's how it works lmao. Everyday at school, Jess would tell me not to kill them off.... She cried when I did :/ I wanted hem to die in a slow way, with it still being romantic... So... Er... Ja :)

HAHAHAHHA!! I a,ways wanted to Kill Bushido ha! When I decided on him being Paris I was like 'OOh and Bushido can be Paris... And he can rape Bill... AN DTHEN HE CAN DIE!' lol

:O BUT I WANT MANZINI! lmao! Anyway, it technically wasn't his fault... So... Maybe he'll un off to Canada anyway... Just cause he heard you where there ;D ONLY LAILA GET'S GUSTI! I was gonna end it with them finding the twins but i was like, naaah, it's better of Simone does it...

MANZINI WAS WEARING A SHIT AT THE FUNERAL! hhahahhahahah I can jut imagine that! Everyone wearing black nd then him wearing only baggy blue jeans! No, he was dressed completely ;D But you can imagine whatever you like ;D 

WHenever I leave reviews, the spelling and punctuation is all fucked up, it's funny. I make no sense :P

Last night when, i finished it,  I was just sitting here, with nothing to do haha! 

OH OH OH! Torrie, as for your AMAZING reviews, I do have 6 Months to be written ;D

ily xx T 

nooooooooooo!!!! laila stepped on the letter. Oh my jesus im scared now. i don't want them to die!!!

Author's Response:

;D I'm not giving anything away!

I'm working on it RIGHT NOW! Should be up by monday :) 

please don't make it like the orgional play/movies. they have to live & what his dad did needs to be known!!!
love it ne ways.

Author's Response:

:) I'm so glad you liked it!! 

I'm not telling how it ends :P 

;( The sad part is coming up D':

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I know :( 

I'm writing the last chapter right now! Should be up within a few days! 

SMUT!! YAY!...I mean, ACK! My innocence! :0D

Don't worry about being late with the update (Hey! That rhymed! I could totally be a poet! Move over Shakespeare, there's a new greatest writter even!) As long as there isn't weeks or months inbetween updates, I'm happy :0) Is Jess feeling better? If not, tell her I hope she gets better soon!

Was the play you did McBeth? You mentioned it to me a couple of days ago. I love McBeth :0) And being able to see is always epic!

Is my favorite shirtless priest going to make an appearence soon? :0D I'll beg if I have to!

I'm liking that Laila is going with Tom. I don't know why, but that made me happy.

I'm acually really impressed you didn't make them go all the way. I was thinking about how sore, and traumatized Bill would be after the Bushido incedent. Most probably would have had Bill and Tom do it no matter how unrealistic it would have been for the storyline. I'm not saying that's a bad thing, but it definitly shows your mad skills!

Wow, this is a ridiculously long review :0D I'm going to shut-up now.
Bye!!!
~Torrie :0D

Author's Response:

LOL!! It feels so weird posting and riting smut because... I'm only 14 lmao!

I hate it when chapter's are not posted for weeeeeeks and mooooonths!!

I'm retty sure Jess is feeling better, I'll see if she i t school :/ lol

No, the play I did was one that my drama class wrote, it was a mixture if a whole heap of fairy tales :) it was so much fuuuun!

I was little red Ryan hooood lmao :D

I DID promise you that your priesty wil be back, didn't I?? Next chapter, hon, you know no one can not have Manzini ;D <3

I know, I adore Laila, even of she is a OFC xD she is kinda sota based on jess ;D

o, thank you sooooo much, Torrie!! I as so nervous tht everyone would be like 'WE WANTED SEX DAMNIT!' but I was like 'THINK OF BILL AND HIS SORE ASS!" lol

I LOVE your long reviews!!!

xx T 

Yay!!! Oh, I love you! Haha, my friend texted me during class to tell me there was an update. I literally did a happy dance, I got many strang looks! Thank you thank you thank you thank yo for the dedication! It totally made my entire month! Just for the record, you kick some serious ass too!

Poor Andi. He was a jerk, but I'll miss him. You know what's awesome? I was Mercutio in the Romeo and Juliet play I did last year, but my Tokio Hotel nickname is Andreas/Andi! :0) Not to brag but I'm pretty amazing at dying!

Oh yay! Sexytimes are ahead! Hee hee! No, I'm not to young to be reading that kind of stuff :0P It's totally an art form!

We're never on Msn at the same time :0( Stupid time differance.

Oh, how I love Gustav! Such a sweetie!

Hey...any chance Mr. Way-Too-Sexy-For-His-Shirt will make another shirtless appearance? :0D

I'm going to stop rambling now and let you get on with the next chapter, which I know you're already working very hard on ;0)
Anywho, Bye!
~Torrie!
PS. No joke, I seriously rock at dying

Author's Response:

AAAHH! I LOVE YOUR REVIEWS!!

Oh my god someone texted you about this fic?? That is like *-* someone cares tha much! lmao!!

And your review made my entire month!! LMAO I was Romeo in my school production! It was so much fun lmao, my best friend and beta, Jess was Juliet! At the moment at school we are doing Macbeth and Im playing Macbeth and by friend Micah, who is a dude, is Lady macbeth LOL!

Lmao, we're the same age! So if you're too young to READ sex, then I am too young to write it ;D

I also adore Gusti, he is one of my favourite characters and I ma making it my life goal to hug him :)

Oh? You wanna see way-too-sexy-for-his-shirt again?? Well, it justs o happens that in Chapter after next he might possibly be making an appearance, and just for you, I'll keep him shirtless :)

lol, funny, cause I am actually writing the next chapter at the moment :D 

see you next chapter!

xx Tildeeeeeeee