Date: 04/25/08 06:00 pm Title: License to Thrill
I can't really believe how long it took me to find this. It was so amazingly hot; I was literally squealing as I read it. Fantastic job, as usual. I will definitely be rereading. :)
Date: 03/16/08 08:02 pm Title: License to Thrill
whahahahhaahahahahaahaha
that was so funny the ending my heart just stoped for a moment when i read it0_0
Got all those costumes
man, you're gonna kill me one dayXD
Date: 03/15/08 04:08 pm Title: License to Thrill
you re super..
your stories is mddrrrrrr.
keep going those series..
please..
Date: 02/14/08 08:51 am Title: License to Thrill
What did he order next? I wanna know!
And what were the G's doing while they were busy?
Date: 02/08/08 06:39 am Title: License to Thrill
“I swear, I will never say no when you wake me up in the middle of the night again.” Lol :D
and the ending was amazing.
Date: 01/30/08 05:24 am Title: License to Thrill
Hot hot hot! I love your writingstyle, you describe everything perfectly
Date: 01/27/08 10:36 am Title: License to Thrill
It's extremely hot, and extremely funny.
The first part made me giggle like an idiot: you know there's something wrong, something that you can't get, but of course you can't understand anything. And then the officer says her surname's Trumper and everything is clear. Amazing. I nearly jumped on my seat screaming "Mioddio!" and then I let myself fall from the couch, laughing.
The boots. Ohh, please tell me that website's name, I HAVE to give a look at those boots! XD
You're a genius: you write PWP thinking about a plot, and that's such a beautiful thing that I'm gonna cry. Ok, well, I know that it doesn't make sense - PlotWhatPlot doesn't need a Plot, of course - but if I can follow a thread between the scenes, then I'm happy.
I'm thanking you your muse every night, just to let you know XD
Date: 01/27/08 08:09 am Title: License to Thrill
woah, that was....funny and amazing! omg bill in a police woman outfit...i can just imagine him in that!
Date: 01/27/08 07:46 am Title: License to Thrill
I usually don't like PWPs because they're only sex scenes with no story. And I hate that. But somehow you've managed to give it a plot and a beautiful one, to booth.
The first part is hilarious if you know what's going on. You can 'sense' something's off, your brain tells you and subconsciously the whole scenario starts to be too funny not to laugh.
I love the way you keep referring to Bill as "she" or "the officer" and you actually don't know it's him, until Tom says 'He hadn’t known his brother could do that'.
Then, the register. I really admire your ability to change register depending on what you're writing. In Hell it is colloquial; in Forgotten it is more complex. This is a PWP, so here you're rough and write in no uncertain terms (and still you manage to remain tasty). A really good work!
When you said you were writing this, I knew I would end up loving it. I knew! And that's only because YOU wrote it. How can you manage to make me love even what I usually hate, I don't know yet!:p
- Tabata.
Date: 01/27/08 07:27 am Title: License to Thrill
This sounded inexplicably delicate to me
Date: 01/27/08 04:38 am Title: License to Thrill
Tom nuzzled his twin protectively, now in affection mode. Bill loved it when Tom wouldn’t let him go, couldn’t stop touching him. It made him feel sexier than when he was screaming his name.
----> this was amazing
Date: 01/27/08 04:14 am Title: License to Thrill
heheheh
kinda thinking it would have been fun if the officer had already been watching them a little while (A)
i know i sound evil, but i love it when they get cought XP
Date: 01/27/08 02:08 am Title: License to Thrill
"I still remember the catholic school girl uniform."
I soo need to read that!
It was pretty hot!
Date: 01/27/08 01:37 am Title: License to Thrill
wow I was like WTF!? When it turned out to be Bill, but then I thought 'how did i not guess?'
I LIKKEEEEYY!
*Gives cookie*
Date: 01/27/08 12:55 am Title: License to Thrill
I'm with el_gardner, role play fics win so much! I do hope that you will write more. :D
Date: 01/26/08 10:44 pm Title: License to Thrill
OMG. This is such a steamy story. I absolutely love it.
Great job
~Ria ^-^
Date: 01/26/08 10:36 pm Title: License to Thrill
Oh. Mein. GOTT. *dies*
ILU. Marry me? Or just write a sequel.. Either way! Please! D:
Date: 01/26/08 09:06 pm Title: License to Thrill
Fuckin' hot 8D
Date: 01/26/08 08:55 pm Title: License to Thrill
omg
HOT
*g*
(Haha, I'm totally braindead right now.
Date: 01/26/08 07:17 pm Title: License to Thrill
Yeee! I finally had time to myself to read this lil ficlet. And that sentence really isn't as dirty as it sounds.
I absolutely love how Tom slipped in and out of character. Because seriously, if I had to choose between Bill and some chick, it'd be Bill. Duh. The smut was so hot, but I love the way Tom makes Bill feel sexier when they're just touching and holding each other. That was sweet.
I seriously hope no one is checking Tom's credit card bill.