Date: 02/26/11 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 3
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen in the next chapter! I can't wait to see what will happen between Bill and Melissa and what she'll do to Tom after she found out about what Bill had told her! There's a lot of drama and I bet it'll only get better! I wonder what the other members of Tokio Hotel feel about how Tom treats Melissa!
Date: 02/26/11 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
Loved it! I have a feeling that she'll end up dating Bill!
Date: 02/26/11 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Poor Melissa!
Date: 07/20/10 04:13 am Title: Chapter 3
I love it, but who's Lexi? Lol you lost me there haha
Author's Response: Oops haha Typo! I thought I read through everything I guess not. Another story I am working on has the main Character Lexi and I was kind of thinking about it when I was writing this and didn't even notice when I typed it up. Sorry it was meant to be Melissa. But thank you for pointing it out and for reviewing.
Date: 05/23/10 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
I like this :) update it please!
Author's Response: Thanks. =] and I will soon.
Date: 05/23/10 01:10 am Title: Chapter 2
Aww...i like this story, Thnx for the update!
Author's Response: Thanks! And you're welcome!
Date: 05/22/10 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
Nawwww :) I'm so proud of Melissa for leaving meanie Tom. Next chapter please!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I am too! Next chapter will be up soon. It's in Bill's POV so just a heads up. And thanks for the review!
Date: 05/22/10 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwww :( Poor Melissa, stupid fucking Tom! ahhhh! *throws trash can at him* ;D There all better.
Author's Response: haha. Yeah Poor Melissa, Tom is a dumbass.
Date: 05/22/10 11:52 am Title: Chapter 2
I really like it :D
Author's Response: Thanks! =]
Date: 04/13/10 08:02 am Title: Chapter 1
Pretty good start. I like it.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 04/11/10 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great idea for a story! So good! I am willing to be it won't last and he will cheat again so I hope melissa leaves his ass and makes him beg for her back.
Author's Response: Thanks and trust me you won't be dissappointed in what I have in store for the rest of the story.
Date: 04/11/10 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hmm...you could slow it down a little...use more details and such...but i like it so far...
Author's Response: Thanks I will definitely do that for the next chapter.