Date: 04/13/10 03:11 pm Title: "Why do I feel like I've heard that name before?"
*waits eagerly for the next chapter* i like this :) btw id be more than happy to beta for you :) my aim is alittlemayhem, my email is galaxy001@comcast.net so send me a message :)
Date: 04/13/10 11:54 am Title: "Why do I feel like I've heard that name before?"
Shocks! This is it!
I wonder if there's another pairing...
PLEASE WRITE MORE!
Date: 04/13/10 10:46 am Title: "Why do I feel like I've heard that name before?"
OH MY!!!! MORE!?!?! O_O
Date: 04/13/10 03:20 am Title: Prologue
a very good start, cant wait read more
Date: 04/13/10 01:32 am Title: "Why do I feel like I've heard that name before?"
oh oh bad boy Andreas.
Date: 04/12/10 09:24 pm Title: "Why do I feel like I've heard that name before?"
wuah~ i am excited to read the next chapter~ :DDD I can't wait for a new update~ XDD Bill is gonna met Tom~ wee~ :DDD
Date: 04/12/10 08:49 pm Title: "Why do I feel like I've heard that name before?"
im so curiooooooooooooouuuusss!!! update really fast! x3
Date: 04/12/10 08:47 pm Title: "Why do I feel like I've heard that name before?"
it's good and i'm looking forward to tom
Date: 04/12/10 08:19 pm Title: "Why do I feel like I've heard that name before?"
Wow. First class and Bill is aready screwed. Way to go. AND you out him up with Tom. Congrats.
Date: 04/12/10 06:24 pm Title: "Why do I feel like I've heard that name before?"
BILL IS NOT SUPPOSE TO TALK OR LOOK OR ANYTHING TO TOM AND HE IS HIS LAB PARTNER FOR THE WHOLE YEAR? :O
oh gosh, things will start heating up in the next chapter, i shall have to anxiously wait (:
-----Samantha.
Date: 04/12/10 05:37 pm Title: "Why do I feel like I've heard that name before?"
Gosh, you HAVE TO update soon!
Yeah, er.. Here I would have gone on and on about how much I love this story (cause I really do, already) blahblah but Im so tired and I have to be up in..uh-uh, five hours. So please please please update soon! If you do, Ill leave a long review for it*blinkblink* lmao, Im blackmailing you! Kind of *cackles evily*
Uh. yeah. Im a totally lame. Night.
Date: 04/12/10 05:34 pm Title: "Why do I feel like I've heard that name before?"
This story sounds really promising, and the summary was very good, made me want to read it immediatly! There are some mstakes here and there that can easily be fixed if you get a beta (assuming you don't already have one). But not replacing the names Spencer and Ryan was a quite big mistake, and a bit confusing, so you should watch out for that later. And a little more explaning here and there, like why his aunt gets so mad about the job and stuff, wouldn't be bad. It threw me off for a second.. But all in all, very promising! :) Oh, and please, please, please let Tom be as mean and terrifying as you've made him sound..at least to begin with! Don't know why, but Tom being mean to Bill is kind of a turn-on.. Damn, did I just say that? ;) Anyway, keep up the good work!
Date: 04/12/10 05:05 pm Title: "Why do I feel like I've heard that name before?"
it is good, keep werting
Date: 04/12/10 04:54 pm Title: "Why do I feel like I've heard that name before?"
It's good. Did you originally write this story with characters named Spencer and Ryan?
Date: 04/12/10 04:42 pm Title: "Why do I feel like I've heard that name before?"
XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD UPDATE!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!! XD XD XD XD XD XD
Date: 04/12/10 04:22 pm Title: "Why do I feel like I've heard that name before?"
XD this looks really good. looking forward for more ;)
Date: 04/12/10 07:28 am Title: Prologue
i really like it!! i will follow it! :D
Date: 04/11/10 10:45 pm Title: Prologue
Ok you have me hooked and I want more!
Date: 04/11/10 05:20 pm Title: Prologue
Sounds promising so far, especially the summary. You do have some grammar mistakes though that could be easily fixed with a beta. I don't know if you have one yet or not. Either way, it's a pretty good start.
Date: 04/11/10 02:51 pm Title: Prologue
Its is good do far. :) You'll find a way.