Date: 08/04/10 02:28 am Title: Chapter 10. Romanticism (Part Two)
*sees all the art movement titles and spazzes*
Omg, I love you. I read this whole thing in one shot! Phew!
This is a very excellent story. Hmm, nice pacing too.
And this particular scene was extremely well written. Very hot. Geez, I feel totally relieved from all that sexual tension from before.
Author's Response:
You are the first one to notice the art movement titles! *squishes you* Thank you for your kind words, I'm glad you like the pacing of the story. I fear at times that I can draw out scenes too much. And of course, I'm thrilled to bits that you enjoyed this particular scene!
Date: 07/13/10 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 7. Pre-Romanticism
faksdfjasdfsa FINALLY!!! *faints*
I love you. ;_;
Author's Response:
I love you more! *huggles*
Date: 07/13/10 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 6. Neo-Impressionism
D'oh! *facepalm* Of course someone would interrupt. *headdesk* ... *groans*
Author's Response:
LOL, but of course, what fun would it be otherwise. ;)
Date: 07/13/10 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 5. Realism
I'm curious about Tanya. I have to say... I sort of have my suspicion that she may be a vampire, too. I don't know why or where that came from. Maybe it was the sudden apearance of sensibility when it came to restraining herself from interrupting Bill and Tom's moment. Or, maybe it was the threatening way in which you concluded her point of view; it seems like she has something sinister planned. Or, if I'm being too dramatic, and need to tone it down, then I can put it this way: bitch is up to no good, yo. >_>
Ah, how creative, making Gustav and Georg Simone's sons rather than Bill or Tom. Are the G's twins in this? =D
Bill's finally finding happiness. I'm dying to know; when you say he's being punished for his past sins, what does "past sins" refer to? An incestuous relationship with his brother? Biting people?
Date: 07/13/10 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 4. Surrealism
Oh my god, the sexual tension is so thick you'd need a chainsaw just to dent it. I'm loving this.
I love how close they are, how bonded they are without Tom even realizing it (or being only half aware of it, perhaps).
Date: 07/13/10 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 3. Expressionism
That slash scene was.... very nice. *_* Very nice, indeed.*melts* Hehehehe! ^_^
And I love the mystery that shrouds Bill's character. You write it so well! I can't wait to read more! *runs off to next chapter*
Author's Response:
Mystery and Bill could be synonims in this fic, I suppose. Not that it could be any other way considering no one but a few chosen ones knows about him being a vampire.
rnI'm ecstatic you thought the slash scene was nice, it was harder than I anticipated. Thankee, hon!
Date: 07/13/10 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 2. Constructivism
*_* So beautiful, that's all I can say. Your writing style, it's... lasdfjkls. Gosh, I just love it! I love the intensity of their connection, like twins cominb together after a long separation. I'm starting to wonder myself... is Tom really Tomi?
Author's Response:
Awww, you're too sweet! About Tom being really Tomi, well, you might find out before anyone. ;)
Date: 07/13/10 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 1. Impressionism
The way you write is so poetic and beautiful. *_*
Author's Response:
Thankee, cariño! I'm glad you think so. *smooches*
Date: 06/22/10 12:54 am Title: Chapter 9. Romanticism (Part One)
sexi sexi! now i definently cannot wait for the next chapter! ^_^
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I hope you like the next chapter as well. :)
Date: 06/18/10 04:09 am Title: Chapter 9. Romanticism (Part One)
Hi! Sorry it took me so long to review, I've had exams this week (that's my terrible excuse XD) so I've been revising and stuff. Anyway, no more excuses...SEXY. That's my word for this chapter. It's amazing. I love how you've written it, how carefully crafted it is and you know exactly what you're doing with it. Plus, the cut off was perfect, so I can't wait to see what's going to come. I can imagine Bill losing control...*squeak of excitement* :D I love it, I love this story, and I'm on the edge of my seat. Quite literally xD Awesome!!
Author's Response:
Hi there, sorry it took me so long to reply to this. Thank you for your review! I'm happy you found the chapter sexy! Hope you like the next one as well, I think you might be on to something regarding Bill. *hint hint*
rnPS. I'm behind again on your story, but I'll try to read it tomorrow morning, I promise.
Date: 06/12/10 02:27 am Title: Chapter 9. Romanticism (Part One)
man, super hot. i never knew painting could be so hot. =)
Author's Response:
Yay! I'm glad you thought it was super hot! Hope the next chapter doesn't disappoint you.
Date: 06/10/10 04:39 am Title: Chapter 9. Romanticism (Part One)
GAH! That was wonderfully sensual, absolutely beautifully worded. Your prose flows so simply yet conveys such emotion. I am utterly rapt with this fic. *hugs*
Author's Response:
Awww, thank you so much! It means a lot to me that you think that. *hugs back*
Date: 06/10/10 04:32 am Title: Chapter 9. Romanticism (Part One)
ughhhhh so sexy!!!! beautiful chapter, and god, you built the sexual tension up so well and so gradually that I was feeling overwhelmed by the time that Tom did xD just perfect. wonderful chapter and i cant wait for the next!
Author's Response:
Hope I don't disappoint with the continuation of that scene. *bites nails* But I loved knowing you found this chapter sexy. It means a lot to me! *hugs*
Date: 06/10/10 01:28 am Title: Chapter 9. Romanticism (Part One)
OOOOHHH!! What's coming up next? I wanna know! You can't have something as hot as that happen and then just leave us!
Author's Response:
I know, bad Mari! Especially since I left you hanging for a while. Sorry for that, but thanks for the review. :)
Date: 06/09/10 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 9. Romanticism (Part One)
I LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVEDDDDD!!!!!! IT!!!!!! XD XD XD CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Awww, thank you so much! Hope you like the new chapter :)
Date: 06/08/10 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 8. Minimalism
wow. very cool. i very much look forward to the painting lesson. thanks for the update, keep up the great work!!
Author's Response: Painting lesson will be up in just a bit. Thank you so much!
Date: 06/03/10 06:07 am Title: Chapter 8. Minimalism
yayyyy looking forward to the next chap, i feel i must admit that i have a mini fight going on in my mind while i read this story, because here and there i recall it was originally a het story and end up trying to imagine what it would have been like in spite of myself and that throws the mood off for me cuz i really dont like het, lol. i apologize for tainting my perception of the story, but i still like it, so thats a good sign, right? ahaha
Author's Response:
Hee, yes, it's a good sign, I understand completely. I didn't like slash before discovering twincest, I had read it when I judged for some awards, but it wasn't my cup of tea. Now I'm so addicted to it, I barely read het, just the stories I edit in the HP and Buffy fandom. It has been somewhat difficult to turn this story into a slash story, I've had to tone the romance down quite a bit and discard or drastically change some scenes, since they don't really work for two men (not without turning this fluffier than I want), and of course, there wasn't a twin brother in the original or any of the backstory that will come into play later on, so that's new. ;)
Thankee for reading and for the reviews, darling, I'll respond to those later today, I promise, I just need to get ready now for my first outing since my surgery... yay! I can't wait to go out of the house again. :D
Date: 06/03/10 05:55 am Title: Chapter 7. Pre-Romanticism
happy late bday! that was hot stuff! i love simone already, and now im really hungry thinking of that food. and of bill and tom hot in lust, but thats a diff kind of hunger xD *sigh*
Author's Response:
thankee so much for the b-day wishes and the review! and i'm very glad you think so! as i told you before, i didn't plan on that happening so soon, boys insisted though (rather adamantly, too). so yeah, it was either give in or them arming a mutiny right along with my muse and we couldn't have that. ;)
Date: 06/03/10 05:32 am Title: Chapter 6. Neo-Impressionism
oh snap! that was getting rather nice, who dares interrupt the hotness?
Author's Response: *giggles* it was too much fun to read the reactions to the interruption, i just couldn't resist. ;)
Date: 06/03/10 05:03 am Title: Chapter 5. Realism
ooh next chapter sounds exciting, this was cute. i surely wouldnt mind bill calling at 8, tho i usually sleep till 11 or 12 xD
Author's Response: *giggles* yeah, i wouldn't mind either, to tell you the truth. although i generally have to wake up way earlier than that, unless it's the weekend. ;)