Date: 04/12/10 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 3: Invading My (Senses) Space.
i really really like it. I like how you made Bill so nonchalant, and i like how you made Tom so.. obvious!
Great =)
Author's Response: I'm glad you do ^_^. And pshhhh I think if we read this from Tom's pov, Bill would be more obvious than he thinks. xD He forgets that Tom knows him as well as he knows Tom xD
Date: 04/12/10 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 3: Invading My (Senses) Space.
Loving this soooo much! I love how you're writing Bill, my heart aches for him and I wonder why Tom was so stupid to leave him for Pancake Patty. It's obvious he's not completely over him and that his marriage is not as idyllic as he'd like it to appear. I'll be looking forward to more. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you're loving this. And Bill is my boo, so I adore writing him like this. And Tom's not stupid. He has his reasons, I promise. xD
Date: 04/12/10 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 3: Invading My (Senses) Space.
*sniffle* I LOVE this fic (AND you're daily updates). I'm already itching for more xD
Author's Response: *huggles* I'm glad you love the fic AND my daily updates. xD And there's more up now xD
Date: 04/12/10 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 3: Invading My (Senses) Space.
Damn, you sure know how to cut deep, don't ya? The excerpt from the book was heartbreaking. That Bill was willing to give it all up, and then for Tom to (seemingly) just toss him aside really hurts. I'm sure there's a Tom side to it, and I look very forward to seeing what it is.
Author's Response: Lol, I've been told that yes. I'm having fun with the excerpts. even if they are sad lol. And you're right on the seemingly part. There's so much to this, god I don't even know where to start sometimes. xD
Date: 04/12/10 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 3: Invading My (Senses) Space.
Hahahaha, okay then, that's a promise; you'll receive my essay as a review, LOL. BUT: I'll post it only at the end of this story, so you MUST finish it. u.u
(Am I blackmailing you? Oh yes. Yes, I am).
... am I being too mean?
"Good. Let the bastard suffer a bit, Bill thought," Bitchy, bitchy, bitchy Bill, ;)
Author's Response: LOLOL. haha. I don't abandon stories! xD I just take forever to finish them xD Don't worry, I'll finish this. Updating is fairly easy, so it's not like I'll get bored. xD I have OTHER stories that that happens with. xD and Bitchy Bill is amazing. xD
Date: 04/12/10 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 3: Invading My (Senses) Space.
("continue" from my last review) It's like somebody is pulling my nails, I just want it to be over. You know, I want to know what will happen in the end! ;) If they will find each other again. Maybe the right way to say it's like a sweet torture to read this story ;)
Can't waait for more!
xx
Author's Response: Lol, I understand. If i could get away with posting longer chapters, and NOT getting stuck and then taking a hiatus, I'd write WAY MORE and end it quickly, but I don't wanna leave this unfinished, so I'm trying to write it gradually. xD
Date: 04/12/10 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 3: Invading My (Senses) Space.
is there going to be a happy Bill/tom end to this story.
Author's Response: I hope so.
Date: 04/12/10 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 3: Invading My (Senses) Space.
The emphasis on the wife kinda makes me go D: trouble in paradise?
But I wonder if in writing Bill's story, we're just gonna end up learning more about Tom's. There's so much I wanna know about him and I only know the little bits from Bill's book and his own thoughts on the man.
The way they broke up makes me sad, because I'm sure there was much to be said that hadn't been said before. :(
And yeah, I will forever giggle at Pancake Patty now! *facepalms* Thanks, Bill. LOL
Author's Response: Lolol, there's no such thing as paradise. xD
And maybe maybe. Tom is an enigma, and i don't honestly know if we'll learn more about him other than what he hopefully will tell Bill.
and bah, there have been worse breakups I've written. xD
AND, hahah GOOD it's a funny name. xD
Date: 04/11/10 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 2: Sneaking a Peak of Your So-Called Happiness
Awww, poor Bill, despite his little tantrum to his manager and that he really played Patty (Pancake Patty *snickers*), it's obvious this is not easy for him to be confronted with his past like this. I'll be looking forward to more. Loving this!
Author's Response: Lol, yea, I think that seeing his past (twice now) in a place he deems as his sanctuary has most definitely sent his world off kilter, but he'll get better at handling himself. I think so. xD And hahaha yea, him playing Patty (dude, i love her nickname) I can see him doing that, cause he's just a snarky bitch. xD
Date: 04/11/10 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 2: Sneaking a Peak of Your So-Called Happiness
Awwwwww :3 I want more soon, please? xD
Author's Response: There's more up now! I wonder if you're happy that i'm willingly doing daily updates. xD
Date: 04/11/10 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 2: Sneaking a Peak of Your So-Called Happiness
If Bill's thoughts ever left his lips in this part, omg. I would DIE with second hand embarrassment for her and Tom and yeah. BUT, sadly, I was just laughing my ass off at his train of thought. *slaps own hand and face* Bad girl, I know!
But yet...a part of me would LIKE for him to unload all this on Tom, because I think he deserves to know what being set aside did to him after what you thought you had would last.
But I really laughed while reading this, even if that excerpt from his book about his mom made my throat close up. ;___;
Author's Response: LOLOLOL. Bill's thoughts need not to EVER be spoken. xD I feel like that applies to RL too. xD And you're not bad. xD You can just appreciate his sarcasm. xD
And noooooo, no unloading. this is one of those fics where everyone thing's one person is wrong, and it turns out differently. Cause I'm awesome like that. xD
And I'm glad you laughed, and awww sorry about the mum part, i NEED MY ANGST DAMMIT. xD
Date: 04/11/10 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 2: Sneaking a Peak of Your So-Called Happiness
LOL, I don't know if this review makes sense, because we're speaking about this fiction on MSN right now.
Anyways, you know what? I think I'm gonna write you this long long long review *full of endless praise, believe me* only when there will be many more chapters up. Because I'm sure you deserve every word of praise I will write for you. *nods*
You're damn good at writing about past, that's something else I'm getting to discover about you--and I'm thinking about this fiction, but about Love Again, too. Basically, what I'm trying to say is... yeah, you're good. Whenever I see some fictions of yours that sound interesting and I think "Ohhh this is gonna be good!" then it turns out it's even better.
And I want a Grandma Tilly, too. .__.
Author's Response: Lololol, it makes sense, I swear. xD And okies, I'll wait for the long long long review full of endless praise. xD I'll keep posting often so I can GET that endless praise. xD Hahaha.
I'm glad you think I'm good at writing about the past. It's my favorite part when writing, giving my characters a history, though sometimes I take FOREVER to write about it, cause there's so much that I WANT to write. xD
And yeppppppp. Grandma Tilly. She's awesome. xD
Date: 04/11/10 11:07 am Title: Chapter 1: A Walk (Trip and Fall) Down Memory Lane
Oh I like this! It seems very interesting! I can't wait to read more! and I loved Bill's parting words!
Author's Response: Yay for liking this then! I'm happy it's intriguing, and there's more up now ^_^
Date: 04/11/10 04:14 am Title: Chapter 1: A Walk (Trip and Fall) Down Memory Lane
Wow... this is amazing. This story has so much potential! Honestly, I didn't expect it. I don't even know why I decided to read this but I'm incredibly glad I did :D!
The beginning was perfect. It got my attention and it made me feel emotions, right away. I was really sad but really happy at the same time, which motivated me to read more. I've never read something like this before and that makes it so much more appealing :).
I'm extremely curious to know more about Bill and Tom and their once existant relationship. I especially feel like socking Tom (and the bimbo... excuse me for making assumptions, but i hate her already :P) and giving him a piece of my mind. That would make me a very happy person, since no one messes with my Bill!
Anyways, now that I'm done with my little rant, I can't wait for more! So please, update this awesome story soon!
Author's Response: *grins* YAY I'm glad you think so. I was worried about posting this. Theres not enough porn. xD But I posted anyways, and I love that I could catch your attention, and make you feel what they were feeling ^_^
and I'm super super super happy that this is something unlike anything you've read before.
And I think everyone is anxious to hear about their relationship. xD And don't sock Tom or the bimbo. xD She's innocent! xD
Date: 04/10/10 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 1: A Walk (Trip and Fall) Down Memory Lane
*wants more* o.o I gotta add this one to my favs, too lol ^^
Author's Response: Lol. there is more! xD Am glad you're so eager to read it. xD
Date: 04/10/10 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 1: A Walk (Trip and Fall) Down Memory Lane
MY. GOD.
Seriously. MY GOD.
I'm sorry, bb, but at the moment, that's all I've got to say. I'm actually unable to utter a word at the moment; don't know if what left me speechless was how you've improved - so quickly - or the fiction itself. Probably both. I doubt I've ever loved someone's work from the very first chapter just like I love this.
All I've got left to say is...
damn it. Keep it going! ._.
Author's Response: *grins like a loon* I told you over MSN how happy I am that you like it. And the act that it left you speechless, that let me know how much you like it. xD I'm grinning and blushing so much reading this. xD
Date: 04/10/10 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 1: A Walk (Trip and Fall) Down Memory Lane
Wow, I don't know what I expected Bill to say, but it wasn't that. This is an amazing start, I'm truly intrigued in reading those memories of them and how will they interact in the present. I'll be looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Lol, I'm kinda happy about that. I don't like writing things that people can predict, although, it happens from time to time. And dude! the memories are my favorite part. My head keeps going a mile a minute over the things I want to have in the book. xD
Date: 04/10/10 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 1: A Walk (Trip and Fall) Down Memory Lane
Different. I really like it though.
Author's Response: Yay! I love writing different stuff. Keeps me on my toes. xD AM GLAD you like it though!
Date: 04/10/10 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 1: A Walk (Trip and Fall) Down Memory Lane
This sounds different what I have read before. Normally I avoid this kind of fics and wait when they are finnished but I have a feeling it's a good idea to read this.
Is Tom still divorced or should there be one more side paring (Tom/OFC).
Can't wait to read more.
xx
Author's Response: Good! I like writing different. xD And I totally understand why you usually avoid fics like this and wait lol. I'm going to try and keep to a normal schedule, since the chapters are fairly short.
And Tom isn't divorced. He's still married to his wife, much to Bill's chagrin. xD
Date: 04/10/10 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 1: A Walk (Trip and Fall) Down Memory Lane
wow
cool
i like the beginning a lot
really! I'd love to read more! I already sense strong emotions between them, and I never go past these kind of fics!
UPDATE SOON, please
Author's Response: I'm happy that you like the beginning. I'm gonna write and try to update whenever my muses allow me to. I adore writing this one, so hopefully it wont take forever for me to finish this up. xD