Date: 04/25/18 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was a good story
Date: 03/03/12 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was very cute.
Author's Response: oh thankyou so much :D xx
Date: 04/30/10 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
hot haha 8D
Author's Response: Thanks :D
Date: 04/10/10 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
that was great
Author's Response: thankyou xx
Date: 04/10/10 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hmmm, I'm not sure what to make of this one. The way you wrote it, idk, I didn't really get into the story, it's like I didnt really believe it. I think it felt a bit cliche. There were parts that I felt didnt belong or ruined the flow. Also, as much as I appreciate a sense of naughtyness in twincest, I think you repeated yourself a bit much on how forbidden and sick it was. Sorry. I didn't think the story was bad though. Mainly because I love it when the twins get curious about twincest and try to explore eachother for the first time.. its really hot. lol.
Keep writing. :)
Author's Response: yeahhh...to be honest it's a fail of a story. So you're kinda right. It didnt come out at all how i wanted it to. However, it served its purpose as an unblocker. I think i'll be able to start writing good things again. rnThanks for the review :Drnxx
Date: 04/10/10 12:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Bill should get curious about fucking Tom~
Author's Response: well maybe my writing juices will flow again and then it might be possible for a sequel :)rnI do feel like I held out on you a little.rnThanks for the review.rnxx
Date: 04/09/10 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
"It was better than getting a new puppy."
Awesome. :)
Author's Response: haha thanks so much :Drn
Date: 04/09/10 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
:) verry awsome story ! :)
Bills so inocent
Damn I can see this happning :)
Thanks for the story :)
Author's Response: Aaah thankyou so much for the review. :D