Date: 04/09/10 05:32 pm Title: Touch me?
more? PLEASE?
Author's Response: uhm... I can't promise.. maybe if more people would ask I could think about it. but this story is based from a three minute cellphone music video and.. yeah.. but anygeorg... Thanks for reading and reviewing! and if ever I would make a sequel I'll make sure to mention you!
Date: 04/09/10 11:54 am Title: Touch me?
it was nice and sweet.
The only thing i would ask you to do.
And i say this with the most resoect.
Is that i would love it if you had slowed it down a little bit.
Dragged it out a little.
Telling more about the characters.
I´m probably not the right person to say that since i´m not the best at doing that.
But it never hurts to try.
Author's Response: it's okay.. it was actually meant to be fast paced coz I got it off a music video of three minutes long. so.. yeah.. I need to get it out.